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Reviews for Chocolate

By : Ykarzel
  • From ANON - lemon-hunter on December 06, 2003
    great story please write oone with yugi on top i never read any with yugi on top and yami on the botem before and make it a real sweet one please!!!!!!!!!!
    are you going to update this one or is it the end?
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  • From ANON - VampssAmby10210 on November 19, 2003
    Yayness! very cute!!
    CL: Why do you keep calling these things cute?
    VA: ... cuz they are.
    CL: ... whatever
    VA: =3 i like!!
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  • From on September 10, 2003
    Luv to say it!! You got me back into YugixYami XD
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on August 08, 2003
    That was...sweet...but I think you should have kept going with the story and allowed us to follow them upstairs.
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  • From serialcabbit78 on July 24, 2003
    That's actually a sweet story... I've loved it ever since I read it on MediaMiner(I think) though I have one question to ask.... could the movie they are watching possibly be Moulin Rouge???
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  • From ANON - chibibaka on July 23, 2003
    OMG that was so good! I loved it! i haven't read that many lemons but i really love this one! yugi and yami make the best couple! this was very well written! great job!
    ^_^
    byee
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  • From ANON - kawaii kitsune Mirakai-chan on June 17, 2003
    Kai-chan... *hugs her yami and offers a kawaii smile*

    YAMI KAI: *stares wide eyed at his hikari* No way Aibou! You are _NOT_ having chocolate covered popcorn!!!

    *pouts* Onegai... *puppy eyes*

    YAMI KAI: *looks away before the puppy eyes can get him* No way in hell hikari dearest! I am _NOT_ going to have a hyper fox girl running around all over the place! You get so bad that even _I_ can't keep up with you!!! ~_~

    Okay... *lets go of Yami Kai and goes to her other yami*

    YAMI MIRA: No. I agree with Kai on this one Mira-chan...

    *pouts, sniffles ands gos go of her female yami(hai, I do have to yami's... and they don't get along to well...)* -_- *sits down on a chair and ignors both her yami's* Awesome ficcie!!! *turns and walks out of the room*

    YAMI MIRA AND YAMI KAI: *hear the door lock click and look at each other* Kuso... *both race to the door and try to get it open* OO

    *snickers as she walks down the hall and into the kitchan* Chocolate covered popcorn, here I come... ^_____^
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  • From ANON - Trish on May 09, 2003
    Yaaaaaay! hehe! Go Yugi! I knew there was a lil' tiger in there somewhere! ^_~ Even if it does take sugar to bring him out! LOL! Nice fic!
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  • From ANON - anaki on April 05, 2003
    ...wow...hmm, that wuz...interesting. seriously, i luv ur fic TONZ! yami and yugi make such a cute couple ^_^
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  • From ANON - Eoko on February 24, 2003
    I love Yugi and Yami fics!!!! AHAHAHA, and I love when Yugi's in control... I knew that little clown wasn't so innocent! HA!
    Good job!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 01, 2003
    you should add more to this story it is very interesting
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  • From ANON - shadowfire on January 07, 2003
    hey! I reviewed your story on fanfiction and i really like your writing....lemon, me love them...choclate popcorn is so good....i tried it but chocolate is good on everything...lolx...i think it is so cute...ja ne...write more
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  • From ANON - Rez on December 29, 2002
    I don't know about your whole 'Yami' and 'Hikari' business, but, in any case, I find the dialogue humorous. I have to say that I like Yami more so that Hikari. Purely because she reminds me more or less of myself. In any case...

    Good story. I was VERY appreciative of the whole melted chocolate bit. Very nice. Very nice indeed *shakes head vigorously* ^_^. That has to be one of my all time favorite snaks. And with the Yami and Yugi situation you just presented me I'm sure I'll love it even more now! Let's see...that's jell-O, pixie stix, pudding and now popcorn/melted chocolate.
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