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Reviews for Mastering The Game

By : fyrbyrd074
  • From ANON - Zena Mcclain on June 16, 2016
    Please continue this story. Dose Yugi Love Kiba, will Kiba Love him? Will Yugi's friends ever find out that Kiba is Yugi Master? Tell me at ZenaMcClain97@gmail.com
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on April 18, 2016
    I loved the chapter and I am really glad you found the time to update. I hope you are doing okay. I am glad that Yugi won his wishes.
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  • From ANON - thor94 on April 15, 2016
    interesting.
    poor yugi. Hope he will be able to return to kaiba, and we can see nc18 bdsm and other sex thing
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on May 17, 2014
    I hope that you will one day finish this. I keep reading it over and over. I miss you a lot.
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 26, 2012
    I keep rereading this and hoping you will continue it. I have read it many times. Yugioh slash seems to be gone so I keep looking on here. I do hope you continue but 3 years is a long time.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 09, 2011
    Where are you? I am worried about you.
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 08, 2010
    I hope you do finish this at some point. I love the story and would love to see how it ends.
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  • From jeazard on April 19, 2009
    The parts that are your own story are really well written, the re-telling of episodes however doesn't work so well at all.
    I suggest that if there's nothing important at it you don't mention it at all; the preliminary duels for example could have been summed up as just that, without describing duels. If something is important, describe it in detail, even if it's the same as it was in the anime; try to be creative about it, give it a new touch. You created a world with slavery, it is a different world altogether, right? Let it show.

    And maybe explain WHY Kaiba treats Yugi like that, and not like his slave. Is there a good reason for his behavior? His thoughts being set on Mokuba is hardly enough of an explanation. How much of a difference does Kaiba see between the Spirit and Yugi himself?

    Good stoy, could use improvement though.
    Keep it up!
    ~jea
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 15, 2009
    Poor Yugi. He needs to get some confidence in his worth. THe system he lived under sure nndermined that. I hope Kaiba is nicer to him after all this. Good chapter.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 15, 2009
    Good chapter. Pegasus is so very evil.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 15, 2009
    Good chapter. I hope they can get through. I love the way you are following the story with changes.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 15, 2009
    Good chapter. I'm glad that they all won. Mai would know what the collar meant.
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  • From dragonlady222 on April 15, 2009
    Good chapter. I'm glad you are continuing this.
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  • From dino1 on April 12, 2009
    Love the combination of your world with the series. I can't wait for more.
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  • From tinkletimekelly on April 12, 2009
    Hey great you and your fic are still alive! I'm truly looking for more of the both of you. This chapter was pleasant surprise, thank you.
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