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Reviews for Seventeen

By : MishikoShinsei
  • From Diva937 on October 25, 2007
    I love this little series so much! I really hope you continue it. You're so good at creating these compeling dynamics between whatever characters you write.
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  • From RayeMoon on October 24, 2007
    Wha-Wha-What happened! Everything is going so good (mostly) and then they break up! Ah! I can so see Seto being a crazed lover (hell, I've written it how many times?) and I love it. Poor Yami. I think he's right and Seto wrong, but hey. Is there a third part I'm missing?
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  • From dragonlady222 on March 26, 2007
    Good story. I hope Seto can get some anger management training so he can be with Yami. He needs to get rid of Gozaboro.
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  • From ANON - VII on December 11, 2006
    SECOND CHAPTER!?!?!?! or maybe eightteen????
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
    Good story. I hope this isn't the end, and we can expect to find out what happens in the relationship. You've set up the story very well!

    One little thing to watch for in future writing: you tend to slip back and forth between present and past tense. Choose which tense you're more comfortable with (either will work for this story, I think) and be careful to stick to it! It's a rather distracting habit in an otherwise very good read!

    Good job, I look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on December 09, 2006
    Good sotry. I hope Seto gets help with his anger problems, after he kills Gozaburo, of course. Love it.
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