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Reviews for Queen's Gambit

By : WotanAnubis
  • From CecilHoshino on January 11, 2009
    This is another of my absolute favorites. I always liked Alexis, really, but this kind of story just...wow. My particular favorites were the Freya and Dunames chapters. If Freya was your first shot at a 69 scene, I must say that that was a VERY good first attempt (I haven't written one myself, but it certainly worked). I'm also interested in the overall plot of this collection of one-shots, and I'd like to see where it goes from there. When you're motivated to continue, I'll be happy to continue following this.

    Also, is it too late to suggest some duel spirits for Alexis to bump into (again and again and again until pleasure explosions)? Because there are a few I'd like to see (Warrior Lady of the Wasteland, Command Knight), but, hey, your call.
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  • From ANON - k amamoto on October 17, 2008
    like the story thus far but considering that alexis/auska runs a warrior deck there are a few possible cards that you shoud consider

    1 cyber tutu
    2 command knight
    3 cyber blader and her component cards (etoile cyber and blade skater)
    4 harpie queen (seeing as you've used harpie lady)
    5 vampire lady
    6 nanobreaker
    7 cyber prima
    8 dd warrior lady
    9 dd assailant
    10 finally just for the hell of it black/dark magician girl
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  • From jimfromtx on July 11, 2008
    No good at multi-part fics? Seems like far from it! This was good. I like these kind of fics, kinda like the "Wiser Generation", "Wisdom of the Pharaoh", etc fics. Any chance of another chapter? I realize that it's been two months, but hey, a guy can hope, right?
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  • From ANON - D.R. on June 03, 2008
    I agree with Shikon Striker, please have Thunder Nyan Nyan appear sometime soon! And if it's not too out there, maybe a fivesome with Eria, Wynn, Hiita and Aussa? (Maybe toss in Daruka or whatever her name is, too?)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2008
    Great story so far. I eagerly await the next update :).
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  • From ANON - shikon striker on April 23, 2008
    this is good, hm maybe thunder nyan nyan is next.
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  • From ANON - crokonyte on April 22, 2008
    this is pretty good the lemon was short but i thought it went well plus it had build-up.
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  • From WotanAnubis on April 22, 2008
    Yes, crab crusher, I know you want a fiend chapter, but there aren't that many female fiends. There's Marie the Fallen One and... that's about it. I'm not sure I'd even count Dark Necrofear since it seems more like a mechanical sexless thing to me.

    And crazy peon, yeah I know it was short. Length is one of my biggest failings. Sometimes the biggest. I do try to work on it, but sometimes (often) it just doesn't happen.
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  • From ANON - crazy peon on April 21, 2008
    pretty hot. THOUGH I THOUGHT THE LEMON WAS SHORT.
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  • From ANON - crab crusher on April 21, 2008
    pretty good for i wish Alexis will have a lemon with at least one fiend woman.
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  • From ANON - Blaster screw-up on April 20, 2008
    nice!
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  • From ANON - Tif on April 20, 2008
    Another chapter. I like this one, and I'm really want to find out what's going on, who brought here there. A great mix of plot and sex.
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  • From Mangafreak on April 20, 2008
    loved it. awesome as always. looking forward to more.
    Descendant of the shadows
    -Twisteddrkness
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  • From ANON - Ndasuunye on April 16, 2008
    I like this story so far. The cards you chose for the first two chapters was good. Then you started to choose some not so great characters. Well, not like I can do much about it. THis is good. Well, Ja ne and keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - secter on April 14, 2008
    hm, for the next chapter, how about alexis and paladin stopping at a area being held by a woman holding a woman and said woman want to teach alexis the pleasure of an orgy.
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