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Reviews for Deliverance

By : thelostogg
  • From CasualOtaku on June 27, 2013
    I know this is an old story, but it was really nice to revisit one of my favorite fight/fuck couples. Personally I feel it's one of the best Seto/Jou stories out there. I really enjoyed it. My only complaint would be that I wanted even more sex scenes between the two, but then again, keeping that tension going made the final scene that much hotter so I can't complain too much. Excellent work!
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  • From ANON - tag your it on February 01, 2013
    I happened upon this story while searching for something to read during a small bout of insomnia. I haven't read any Yugioh fics in a while and was hoping to find something to help dull my overactive mind. After reading an uncompleted piece of work I came across your story. By the second chapter I had changed my plans of joining the local revelry for Super Bowl and Mardi Gras to complete it. Your work fascinates me and I am anticipating the next part in this series. I will check back once Mardi Gras has ended to see any updates and maybe check out your blog. Your writing is captivating and I have a lot of work to do before the season ends and can ill afford to read more before it is done. Thank you for the great read.
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  • From HavocTellenoi on November 12, 2012
    I love everything I've read by you, but this? This made me laugh so hard I choked. It was epic fun, great pace, true to character and of course, pushed the boundaries between artistic insanity and deluded obsession. Absolutely wonderful. Looking forward to part two!
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  • From GudenMulle on November 11, 2012
    Yay, you're back, if only slightly! :D . Seto must have done some serious training, to get back up on his feet like that again! I really, really hope Jou and him get their strange violence-filled happy ending. I would pay lots of imaginary money to see the transition from Professor Montgomery to BAMF Lynn, that must be really interesting!
    I don't really know what to write, I just loved it, and I hope to see more from you in the future!
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  • From ANON - bahen on November 10, 2012
    Whoops, just read the notes at the bottom of the page, and see you mention a part 2. Only thing is, I don't know if you are serious or not.....
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  • From ANON - SerenaJ on November 10, 2012
    Thank you. Just Thank You. So worth the wait. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - bahen on November 10, 2012
    I'm really glad that this reached a conclusion. I think I'm surprised that the end came as quickly as it did. And even though I enjoyed the ending, I really feel like I am left hanging by it. Hope you don't think me presumptuous here, but it really feels like there should be something more to conclude this, rather like the last chapter you tagged onto Fixation. I'm not opting for love and roses, but it would be nice to know that Jou is coping and Kaiba is keeping up.
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  • From ANON - SerenaJ on July 13, 2012
    Only someone as callous and cold as a knife-wielding assassin could slip so quietly in my head, slit my poor brain open, and leaving me hanging without even the warning of "WIP". Now, I wait and hope - much like Seto - that you will return. Such a sharp knife and i have no defense. Cut me again, Oog; for you, i bleed.
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  • From ANON - Rain on April 13, 2012
    Wow. I could not put this down. As much as I like happy endings, I feel like if you ended the fic now, it would be satisfying for me. I'm captivated by this dark storyline and your ability to breathe new life into these characters. I do hope you keep writing! I look forward to your next update.
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  • From aleeusha on March 13, 2012
    you need more, i keep staring at my phone witshing the internet would work so i could read more of your and your stuff. you is awesome... did you know that
    ?
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  • From ANON - xSerenityx020 on March 03, 2012
    Just found this story and I've been reading it non stop. Literally would sneak into the bathroom at work to read just a bit more.
    I hope your still working on this story cause I really wanna see where it goes from here and why on earth he shot seto.
    Anyway great story!
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  • From madyamisam on January 02, 2012
    After smacking myself 100 times repeatedly for not reviewing your stories to the point of forgetting the reason why I was smacking myself (a viscious cycle I know) I've finally remembered to actually post a review for once. I don't know why I don't do this more often especially with all the delicious stories you've written and I can only beg and prostrate on the floor for forgiveness. But anyway, this story is twisted. I mean it, it's twisted, Kaiba's twisted, Jounouchi's twisted. Everything's twisted and I love it. (laughs evilly). There is so much chemistry between the characters here that I feel like everything is going to blow up. Wait, maybe it already did but I digress. I love Lynn/Collin and the cats. Those adorable little furballs and you killed them. *wails* T____T (you can tell that I'm a cat lover and one of those weird and sad, sad people that actually spend hours browsing YouTube for kitty videos). At any rate, I am on the verge of tearing away all my hair of what hell is Jou's problem at the end. I know good things come to those who wait so i will wait for your next installment. In the mean time I think I'll just give myself amnesia of ever reading this story just so I can read it all over again then hopefully by the time I do you'll have updated. *proceeds to smack herself*
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  • From ANON - Milly on January 02, 2012
    Wow, what a cliffhanger! I'm glad you updated for this, but at the same time it's painful to read in the sense that we get the impression you're running at the end of your steam, struggling to keep writing this. But I do appreciate the fact that you're not giving up! It's so easy to just set a WIP aside and never come back to it.

    Hopefully you'll be able to untangle all the emotional (and professional) intrigues and come back to developing the actual puppyshipping soon! You sure got a lot on your plate :)
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  • From GudenMulle on January 01, 2012
    N- no- what?? so... what really happened? what the heck was Jou thinking? and Kaiba not being able to shut up i n a situation like this.. sometimes he does let his mouth run away from him as much as Jou used to when they were younger. but jesus christ, that was one nasty way of killing those cats, really really disgusting.. poor cats :(. but you're god damn efficient. I thought I had drowned ou in emails XD
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  • From JOler on January 01, 2012
    S. s. s. s Seto? The the the cats? SSSOOOOOBBB Seto, Budda, and Pest? Noooooooo Waaaaaaaaaaa
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