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Reviews for I Love Peaches

By : RaizenYusuke
  • From Phoenix727 on November 06, 2010
    There was a phrase in the latest chapter I really thought was disgusting, its when Yugi called Anzu a "Cum Dumpster" its gross. I know its your story but could you not use that pharse again, I've really enjoyed the story up until now and frankly that almost ruined it for me.
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  • From MaxMan45 on November 04, 2010
    Damn! The only way this could get hotter is if Ishizu showed up, and Yuugi dominated her just as effortlessly.
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  • From Phoenix727 on November 04, 2010
    This was definately the best chapter so far. The only thing I wonder is, is this the last chapter. If it was you need to add "The End" or if its not "To Be Continued..." to the end of the chapter just to make it clear.
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  • From MaxMan45 on October 27, 2010
    Anzu and Mai may have done okay on their own, but now it's time for The Man, Yuugi, to step in and show both those sluts how its really done.
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  • From Phoenix727 on October 27, 2010
    Well, its good as a pre-amble to the hijinks of next chapter. On its own its ok, if a little short on them actually getting it on, maybe you could expand on the incident in the street make Mai go further and get a taste of Anzu's pussy with her tongue before they get discovered. I would really have like to have seen them get it on and go all the way (Eat each other out, 69 etc.), then Mai invite Yugi up so they can play with him before he plays with them.
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  • From MaxMan45 on October 11, 2010
    Heh, nice. I always knew Yuugi had it in him to totally dominate Mai. Now he just needs to show Anzu and Mai that he can handle them both at the same time, no sweat!
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  • From Phoenix727 on October 10, 2010
    I really, really enjoyed that chapter of the story. I enjoyed Mai being so horny and hopefully Anzu and Mai getting it on. I hope this leads to a threesome.

    There is one thing about the chapter that bugged me though, you're using the wrong word in a couple of places.

    "The blonde beauty began to suck vicariously" The word you're looking for is vigorously. If it were vicarious Yugi would be watching while Mai gave another guy head and imagining it was him. There's two other instances, one right near the end of this chapter and another in the second chapter.

    As I said its a great chapter, that's just something minor that's been bothering me.
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  • From MaxMan45 on October 02, 2010
    Yuugi's going to have to start varying his insults to keep the effect going; he should start calling her stupid, stuff like that!
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  • From Phoenix727 on October 02, 2010
    I really enjoyed that chapter, I particularly like the breast play and the flash back to Duellist Kingdom. I'd really like to see a Mai/Yugi/Anzu threesome with Yugi trying to decide who he likes screwing better.

    Update soon please.
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  • From MaxMan45 on September 30, 2010
    Heh, who knew that Anzu'd be such s freak in bed? And hey condoms and the pill don't work 100% of the time...
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  • From Phoenix727 on September 30, 2010
    I think the second chapter is as good as the first, I particularly like that there's a little bit of a story under the smut, I like the smut but a story inbetween that is a good thing too.

    Please continue.
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  • From Phoenix727 on September 29, 2010
    You should definately write a sequel to this, maybe featuring Yugi and Mai or more Yugi and Anzu because there isn't enough of it on this site.

    Really liked it.
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  • From MaxMan45 on September 28, 2010
    Damn, Yuugi'd have to be huge if Anzu could only get half of his cock in her huge mouth! XD LOL, JK.

    You should totally write one where Anzu has a little 'growth spurt' and can't fit into her bra anymore, which just makes Yuugi even more aroused, heh heh heh.
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