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Reviews for The Tabletop Experiment - Choose Ur Own Adventure

By : yosakazure
  • From ANON - Yosakazure on April 07, 2014
    Well I'm glad you liked bits and pieces of it. As for why lots seem to be focused on Yugi, I think I did it sort of unconsciously. I've always wished Yugi had more chances to prove himself in the anime and manga so I guess I would get carried away and then be like OH CRAP ATEM'S HERE TOO! And then I had to go back and squeeze him in. I tried to make it even in different chapters but you are right in saying Yugi got most of the spotlight.
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  • From Kawaiibeast on April 06, 2014
    I liked the story a bit. Even though I prefer seme!Yugi and thought this story would provide I'll have my uke!Yugi moments.

    One question though, why is this story mainly focused on Yugi. I mean, you have the villians or whatever doing stuff to Yugi and Yami is sitting in a corner and expected to watch or somethin'.
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  • From ANON - Madi on July 22, 2013
    O//_//O SENPAI.
    That was fucking hot. I loved innocent, teary-eyed Yugi and protective!Atem. You're amazing at these types of stories. I'd love to see more. :3
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  • From ANON - Yosakazure on July 18, 2013
    Thanks for your reviews, everybody! I'm sorry it's been so long since the last update but the last couple of chapterswill be posted in the near future...eventually.

    As for whether or not there will be more...I honestly have no idea. The first version of this story came to me in a very vague dream. I just had the premise of Yugi and Atem tied together on a table and weird people were inserting things into them. I took the idea and typed it all up in one go and posted it without giving it a second thought. But when I thought more about the dream and wondered what other details I may have forgotten, I realized with just a tweak the story really could have gone either way, as dreams most often do. So that's how I experimented with the choose your own adventure idea and basically wrote up all the different combinations I was thinking of before I narrowed it down in the first version. That being said, bringing version two to the light has been a very labor intensive process as far as mapping out my ideas and having time to write it all. I originally thought that I wanted to see how smutty I could possibly make a story but then I actually decided I wanted to make a smutty story that was actually GOOD and engaging, not 50 Shades of Grey. lol

    So to answer your question, I don't know if I will ever make a story like this again. I'm not really that much of a fanfic writer. The last fanfic I wrote was YEARS ago and I didn't even finish it. This was a random lightning strike that exploded. Maybe if I get another stroke of inspiration or epic dream I will write it up but after this, I think it's safe to say you shouldn't get your hopes up. Again, I really appreciate all the love this story has gotten on all the sites I posted it on and I hope you will get enjoyment out of reading it again and again. :)
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  • From ANON - WhiteNaomi on July 18, 2013
    Will you do next story like this(yami x yugi)??
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  • From Empressofthelight on July 08, 2013
    This is very clever and nicely done. I read through each story and ending and they were all amazing. some more intense then others but all really good. i wish you would have developed atem and yugi's relationship through the stories and given us more options. If you couldd do that in the future that would be awesome.
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  • From SilentShadows101 on October 04, 2012
    I totally love the stlye of this story. The way the reader gets to choose what happens is really amazing and makes it so fun to read. There are so many things that can happen. I'm on my fourth read already and there are still so many stories within I haven't seen yet.

    Just one thing I thought you'd like to at the end of this chapter the reader is given to choice "Let's ditch!" - Gtfo in "Stealthy Escape".
    "I'm too tired to move." - Don't take the risk and take your rest in "Reluctant Rest A". The first one 'Stealthy Escape' works perfectly. However I couldn't find 'Reluctant Rest A' anywhere in the chapter list. Am I being really dump or is not there????

    Like I said love this story and can't wait to read more! :)
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  • From ANON - naomi on September 18, 2012
    Will be any other story like this(of corst Yami x yugi XD too) ?? Cool story by the wey. X3
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  • From YourBrokenDoll on May 18, 2012
    PLEASE HURRY I MIGHT HAVE TO KILL SOMEONE IF U DONT UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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