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Reviews for Egyptain Slave

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  • From arianauchiha23451 on May 25, 2013
    awesome story.... need to know what happens next... please update
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  • From ANON - Keara on October 02, 2012
    well least Yugi will get to enjoy himself and FUCK YOU AKUNADIN you don't know jack fucking shit if you think for a SOLITARY moment having YOUR son on the throne will make it seem like YOUR in control think again you idiot Seth is bound only to his Pharaoh he will rule as his Pharaoh wants him to rule you will lose and see the folly in your mistakes it will all be for naught for you keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From dragonlady222 on October 02, 2012
    Yuugi is so strong but still so firghtened. I'm glad this time they explained to him and left it to his choice. Too bad it will have to end.
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  • From ANON - Keara on September 28, 2012
    I get the feeling from this that neither of you may even need to worry for it will be Yugi who shines once again and protects you both huh such is the ways of fate there will be greedy selfish black souls who only see their own glory and fail to acknowledge the true power that lies within us all but when that power is allowed to shine by their owners it will leave you UTTERLY speechless keep up the great work gtg now JA NE and I'd love to see this one shot of yours I never heard of this pairing either only the other version with Seth Seto and Yami/Atem
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 27, 2012
    Poor Atem. I hope Isis is worng and they all will survive. I would love to read your one-shot.
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  • From ANON - Keara on September 23, 2012
    huh poor Yugi and Seth and dam that Akunadin to hell he's out to make everyones life pure hell with his treachery it can't be allowed greedy bastard thats all he is greedy and selfish he'd run Egypt into the ground and slaughter any he saw as useless and annoying but Seth thats no reason to take it out on Yugi its not his fault he's done absolutely nothing but the best he can as a slave given it was forced upon him by his own flesh and blood if you turn on him now he will have no where to go no one to turn to at least you sill have your cousin and lover who does he have and he's already troubled over his odd feelings for the pharaoh when his loyalty should only be to you huh keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 18, 2012
    Seth is very conflicted. I hope he can get away from aknedon and be safe.
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  • From ANON - keara on September 13, 2012
    UGH for GOD sakes how many times does it take for them to GET IT HE WAS NEVER TRAINED HIS FATHER WANTS HIM TORTURED BEATEN DOWN BROKEN SENT TO HELL OVER AND OVER AND OVER AGAIN THAT BOY HAS NO CHOICE BUT TO SUFFER FOR HIS FATHERS CRUELTY STOP TAKING IT OUT ON HIM *pants* seriously he's getting it SLOWLY but he can't help himself its not like any of you fools would react differently not ALL OF US can keep our emotions behind walls of steel but if you keep it up I can assure you HE WILL HAVE A WALL UP no more smiles no more innocence no NOTHING you will destroy the one few lights left in this world and there will be NO bringing it back GOD DAMIT I AM SO TIRED OF THIS its not right how little people value a life its disgusting seriously what more do you WANT from the boy for if you wanted to remove him all you had to do was SAY SO and Hetaai BACK THE FUCK OFF RIGHT NOW your making it worse right now he's the safest he can be with Seth he's no safer out there in the world with an abusive cold father waiting to resell him to ensure he suffers further if you were to keep your promise to his mother then seriously where were you when he was sold why didnt you save him then back when it was needed now your just making things worse for that boy leave him alone before YOU get him killed huh well very passionate update there huh I seriously hope SOMEONE wakes these idiots up before all humane feelings left are destroyed along with that boy he will have NOTHING left thanks to this and the cruelty that surounds him I swear its like they hate his innocence and such if you hate him that much then just end his life and be done with it geeze but you can't do it can you so instead you just want to prolong his torment as I said you all are DISGUSTING (but not you author your chars)
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 12, 2012
    Poor Yugi is attracted to Seto and Atem. I hope, they ease his fears even if just a little.
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 07, 2012
    I wish they would explain things to Yugi. He is so very confused by everything. He can feel the love between the two and fears he is in the way.
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  • From ANON - Keara on September 05, 2012
    huh great yes he may still retain his innocence but that will not erase his fear or his feelings of worthlessness at the rate this is going that boy will remove himself from your side and sentence himself to a life of misery if he feels in anyways that he's little more then trouble huh I swear to god how heartless people can be is astonishing its like no life values anything unless there gold and power backing it up its nothing short then the most bastardizing thing I will EVER see and it is a thousand times more disgusting then how they view Yugi simply because he's a slave he maybe a slave but his innocence selflessness compassionate personality and looks make him a thousand times more valuable then the Pharaoh's wealth combined hmph fools you will see this for yourself one way or another keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From dragonlady222 on August 09, 2012
    Poor Yugi is so scared and hurt. I hope he can learn to trust them again. I'm glad they are taking care of him and keeping him safe.
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  • From ANON - Keara on August 07, 2012
    Huh is this really how humans see each other by their status if so they have immeasurable amounts to learn huh poor yugi hell poor Atem and Seth at least they see his value but they are trapped by rules that govern no one other the. History huh keep up the great work grg now ja ne
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  • From ANON - Smint45 on August 07, 2012
    That was great^* Hope to hear more from you soon!!!!
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  • From yosakazure on July 22, 2012
    Omigosh, what's gonna happen next??? *SHALL AWAIT UPDATES*
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