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By : xxKiuolo
  • From arianauchiha23451 on July 13, 2013
    wow... poor yugi.... I hope that every thing ends up good for him... I need to know what happens next... please add the next chapter.... I am literally sitting on the edge of my seat with anticipation
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  • From Empressofthelight on July 08, 2013
    This story is incredible! I really love it. Keep it going please, I'm at the edge of my seat.
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  • From ANON - Kate on May 29, 2013
    Loving it. Hope to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - keara on October 22, 2012
    he keeps this up all Atemu will have left is a souless doll if thats what he truly wants then he's well on his way but at what cost I wonder and will he even notice before its too late ah well keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on October 21, 2012
    Poor Yuugi is so brainwashed by the voice. I wonder what took over Atemu, he is being so unfair and mean to Yuugi. It is probably Aknadin or Zorc.
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  • From ANON - Keara on October 21, 2012
    oh I think I know full well what this is all about huh and this is EXACTLY why Seth should have never open his big fat stupid mouth Yugi's light was the only thing keeping Atemu from doing this but now because of that thoughtless remark its costing them all severely he's just an innocent soul trying to do right by the man he loves and when he HEARS that he maybe causing trouble for Atemu he acts in what he feels is the best path though granted Atemu is taking this way out of proportion for it but what can you do there is something off with that power of his and its taking the beauty of what they have and twisting it horrendously it must be seen to or Yugi's beloved Atemu won't ever come back and the ONLY way for him to come back is to shower him with love everyone always said he was kind and noble WHAT THE FUCK is so wrong with him enjoying his time with the one that he loves and besides if you look at everything it wouldnt BE this bad if it wasnt for Seth if he didnt say that Yugi wouldnt have panic the way he did and run off resulting in the guards not being at their post around Bakura resulting in Atemu getting hurt things were just fine and even better if Yugi encourages Atemu to focus as much time on the kingdome as he does on Yugi NONE Of this would be happening huh keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on October 18, 2012
    I hope Atemu will be okay. He almost hurt Yuugi. I'm glad he stopped. Yugi needs to explain everything to him.
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  • From Snowangel701 on October 18, 2012
    For a chapter done without a beta, this was done perfectly well. No grammar mistakes to be seen. Anyways, I'm glad that Yuugi told Atemu his reason for leaving. Now I fear for poor Seth's life!!! I don't won't Seth to die!!! And I was hoping for some SethxJono too! Speaking of Jono....IS HE OKAY?!!! I mean Atemu has gone to the dark side so even if Yuugi came back on his own, I doubt that Atemu didn't take out his anger on Jono for helping Yuugi. And what about poor Ryou too?! Atemu had the dangerous part of the city burned to the ground! Is he even alive?! *Also had hopes for some tendershipping* Tee hee. Yes I'm a cliche yaoi shipper. Anyways thank you so much for the chapter! It's been so worth the wait!!! Can't wait for the next one!

    P.S. If you do work on a SasuNaru I hope it's extra yummy!
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  • From dragonlady222 on September 02, 2012
    I like the chapter. I am sorry for Yuugi, I hope Ryou is ok
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  • From ANON - Orion on August 31, 2012
    I love your story so far. Full of suspense. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - pixies on July 24, 2012
    this is very very interesting! i cant wait to see what happens next!
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 23, 2012
    Yugi needs to go back to help Jonouchi. He really needs to be with Atemu no matter what anyone else thinks.
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  • From dragonlady222 on July 21, 2012
    Atem is not going to let him go without a fight. I hope he comes bak soon, they need each other.
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  • From dragonlady222 on June 05, 2012
    Poor Ryou or who I assume is Ryou is no a captive. Yuugi feels o guilt. I hope, they can get everything settled and stop Bakura.
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  • From dragonlady222 on May 27, 2012
    Poor Yuugi will hace to break his heart to save Atemu.
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