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By : lostintheheartland
  • From ANON - Kinkou on September 12, 2012
    *evil grins* ohhhhhh this is working out to be very enlightening. I can't wait to see the next installment. And I just LOVE Ai's interactions with Jou.Good work!
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  • From ANON - Jei on September 09, 2012
    Another sit on the edge of your seat chapter! I must say all the hostility between Tatsu, Seto, and Mai was a little overwhelming at times ( in particular Mai's bold threesome comment). Man Jou's love life is totally in shambles. I completely agree with Ai about Jou and Seto needing to take their issues to bed and have hot steamy sex to help sort out their feelings for each other and make it more defined.

    I also enjoyed all the new plot twists (Tatsu's baby mamma drama). Still curious about what's really going on with Serenity in addition to the story behind Honda borderline extreme hatred for Otogi (god, those two need to have make up sex or something as well).

    Oh and last thing, Seto "breast feeding" scene was awkwardly hilarious! He's such a good daddy! Though a bit overprotecting but that's totally Kaiba's nature since he doesn't have too many love ones like most people. Looking forward to another exciting drama filled episode!
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  • From ANON - Duosgemini on September 06, 2012
    Just to start out, I have to let you know that when I see your name on a story on this website, I don't even read the summary. I dive right in, cause I know I'll love it! I'm so happy that you decided to give AFF another chance. That said, I'm very much enjoying this story! I love the interaction between Jou and Seto, although I really want some action (maybe just a kiss?)... I always love to read some side Honda Otogi stuff, so I like that as well. Ai is a wonderful oc! Can't wait for the next update! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Smenkhkara on September 06, 2012
    Once again, another great episode! I'm on the edge on my seat reading them. Please update soon...I can't wait to see what happens!!!
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  • From ChibiRinni on September 06, 2012
    I don't think the sound I made after I finished reading this chapter was human. It was between a squeal, a squeak, and a scream of all different emotions. The character interactions are still my favorite! I love each of the characters (even psycho Mai)! I feel like this really is a show and I can't wait till next week for new updates! UGH! I'm so bubbly right now like my excitement is going to explode out of me like a shaken soda can! >
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  • From ANON - dotdotdot on September 04, 2012
    I love this story and like a greedy child i ask for more. PLEASE.
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  • From ANON - BlackRosePirate on August 29, 2012
    ^^ this was a good chapter ^^ him and kaiba are slowly getting there ^^ i cant wait for the rest you fantastic writer you!
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  • From AtomBunny on August 28, 2012
    Oh, I'm sure the next chapter will be very entertaining. :)

    I'm still enjoying this story immensely. For someone who wanted to cut Jou out of his life, Kaiba isn't doing a very good job of it. :P

    I can see the end coming with Tatsu. If he doesn't end up dead then that could complicate his and Jou's working relationship.

    Those last couple of lines... hoo boy... Jou has a lot of explaining to do unless he sidesteps now and puts it off for later.

    Next week can't come quickly enough! :D
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  • From darkscythe_rei on August 24, 2012
    Yea, first review ever so I am sorry if it isn't very helpful. I like the length of your stories so far. I feel that by keeping the lengths of your chapters fairly long it allows the reader to fully grasp the amount of work and consideration goes into investigating each crime set up in your chapters. I would like more Seto and Jou action, but I feel that if they interact a lot then I wouldn't enjoy them getting together as much in the end (Absence makes the heart grow fonder and all that jazz). Moreover, Seto should have to work for the awesome that is Jou. lol. I would really love it if you wrote a chapter to have Jou find a famous killer especially if it is in a virtual world setting maybe as for publicity or as a partnership/team thing with Seto.
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  • From ANON - Jei on August 23, 2012
    Yay! Some Jou and Seto dialogue! Even though they were confessing their love for one another like I hope it's nice to see them interacting with one another and almost forming a truce of sorts for the time being. Seeing Seto as a loving father figure is a little weird to me but it shows anything is possible, right? Also I'm a little curious about the timeline of each episode. Im sure this is a stupid question, but how much time passes between each case? Like I'm curious because I want to know how long Jou has been dating Tatsu and what is the level of their feelings. What I can tell us that Jou is dating the guy out of obligation in an attempt to understand his own sexuality and to give Tatsu a chance since he isn't a asshole like Seto.
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  • From ANON - Jei on August 23, 2012
    I really enjoyed this chapter! I love how Shizuka and Otogi are getting bigger roles in the grand scheme of things. I'm still extremely curious as to what occurred between Honda and Otogi (all the hostility from Honda is so perplexing!). I also hope the wife and husband end up working things out. For their own sakes and for their son. I was a little surprised that the wannabe yakuza boss wasn't confronted directly in this episode (will he be making another appearance in future eps?) it's funny how Jou uses a homeless kid for new leads on his cases now, but again I hope we'll actually get to know about the boy or that his role becomes bigger in the future (if there is in fact a future for him. Everything else aside what I enjoyed most is Jou and Ai's interactions. The dialogue between them really shows how much Ai has grown from being just a super genius program into an entity with a personality of her own. It's obvious she has nothing but her owners best interest at heart. Anyway looking forward to more chapters and hopefully learning more about everyone's past.
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  • From saraphin on August 21, 2012
    what a cliff hanger. heh. got me hooked. I sit there and I'm going "period killer" now there's a lot of interesting ones, Jack the Ripper, yes, but there's the Zodiac Killer. Keep going, length doesn't bother me at all. Long or Short, it all depends on how well it flows.
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  • From saraphin on August 21, 2012
    wh...what? *cries* what is going oooooon, why is there not more?! I would like more...and honestly, I heard Death changes a person...but fuck, Yuge...meh.
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  • From AtomBunny on August 18, 2012
    Another awesome chapter. Atem... I really don't like. If that *is* Yugi then he's been blinded by his obsession for Atem and I can't help but hope that he and Atem get their comeuppance in the end. :/ I doubt that Jou would willingly talk to 'Yugi' even if Kaiba did have him brought to the pyramid and I love the fact that Kaiba's ka is sneaky and trying to help them. If Kaiba had realised that Jou was there then I'm sure it would not have gone well! (And I love AI's underhandedness. A sneaky computer, who'd have thought! XD)

    Honda and Otogi... I wonder what the hell is going on with them? I'm sure it'll all come out in the wash. And for a moment I was sure that you were going down the road of having Shizuka be pregnant (which I'm sure was the point). LOL.

    I'm glad the kid got his dog back but I feel real bad for his mother. Maybe her husband will wake up, maybe not, but I loved the entire chapter and I can't wait for more. :)
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  • From ChibiRinni on August 16, 2012
    I absolutely LOVE this story! It's like watching one of those investigative shows, that's how good it is. The Ka and Ba still confuse me. :/ I kinda get what they are, but even reading up on it, I got lost. I can't wait for the next update though! The more Yugi and Atemu get mentioned, the more I grow to hate them. I agree with Jounouchi; that little bastard is no longer his friend. I wish I could see your things on Little Dragon. I got denied membership because the owner didn't respond to my request. I sent it again, but now I'm not sure. :/ I'd love to see your other stories again. Good luck with the next chapter! I'll be here waiting to read it! ^_^

    ~ChibiRinni ^_^
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