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Reviews for The Pale Savior

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  • From ANON - Tikayla on April 12, 2013
    this one was super thrilling to me wonder who save royu
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  • From ANON - Keara on April 09, 2013
    Huh me thinks that while he is fond of salilah it's more out of gratitude the anything the sheer fact that she had wanted a voice in who he picked aka someone who met her standards and didn't get in her way but then yugi is found and his innocent nature draws atemu too him plus he always sad he preferred guys over girls and yugi fits that criteria but now yami worries me why did he show up then vanish and what's with the cold smirk guess I'll find out at some point keep up the great work gtg now ja ne
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  • From ANON - tikayla on April 06, 2013
    really love the story
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  • From ANON - cattib on April 04, 2013
    This story is so sad...I feel sorry for Yugi having to share Atem..Its not the usual story I read or follow..maybe Im hoping for the best in the end...dont know...
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  • From ANON - keara on March 24, 2013
    huh Atemu what have you done this is such a horrible mistake you can't just have two your not considering everyone involved now Yugi feels used like he's just only good to see to your own needs that he's not special not important of no value to anyone not even the one person who promised him a safe haven who promised him so much yet what he wanted most is being denied him again you better hope this doesn't destroy him especially since the puzzle I get the feeling is somewhere with him I don't know how or why exactly but I know he holds ties to its disappearance and it does you no good if you hurt him like this this is such a bad mistake Atemu it truly is.

    huh well hopefully things will get better for Yugi but I won'd deny I'm worried and scared for him heaven knows what this will do to him and so what if you never got to choose its not like even if you DID help in choosing any would suffice cause you only want him for yourself just as Yugi does though I highly doubt its for the same reason after all your fine your free to see you family and live in refinement.

    up until now Yugi never had ANY of that hell his life was about to be thrown to the side like it was worth nothing all because he wanted to save Ryou you may not know what thats like but he does and he's terrified of doing even the slightest thing to upset Atemu hell I bet he's gonna keep all this bottled up and not say anything for fear of being sent away even if it just winds up hurt him more so do us a favor Salliah and try to understand his situation its far from easy huh but all that aside we all know whoes truly guilty keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From ANON - Keara on March 24, 2013
    fantastic update and lemon as if I wasn't already drowning in them ah well no arguments from me on this and at least Yugi can now appreciate the circumstances from his own perspective of the situation I just hope Yugi gets treated well the life of a Courtesan is far from wonderful to everyone ask Tea and Mai in The Dragon's Rose or that woman who was with Shishio in Kenshin well keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From ANON - cattib on March 23, 2013
    My My Atemu is quite the playboy...Poor Yugi...Jealousy is a bitch....
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  • From ANON - cattib on March 18, 2013
    this was a great birthday present..thank you for updating..I was hoping you did not forget this wonderful story..
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  • From ANON - dragonlady222 on March 12, 2013
    Yuugi does not realize the importance he holds. He is truly innocent. I hope the puzzle shows up again soon.
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  • From ANON - Keara on March 11, 2013
    I think you can relax Yugi its beyond safe to say that its not a bad thing for you he's probably growing more and more eager for you tis all keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From Keara on March 08, 2013
    oh joy who could this bastard be the list is relatively short its between Bakura and Zorc with Akunadin in the center well time will tell in due time but its all for naught the item they seek is within Yugi now I'm beyond sure he found it and it certainly didnt move save vanish in the light where else could it go but within him so its too late fool the wheel is beginning to spin anew with a new path to unfold you can't stop the inevitable keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From ANON - keara on February 19, 2013
    looks fine to me least things are progressing nicely but I do worry about the Puzzle when it gets mentioned around Yugi how in the world is he going to explain that he had it but then lost it that night with no idea as to where it went huh it does indeed present a problem keep up the great work gtg now JA NE
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  • From ANON - Keara on February 15, 2013
    why do I get the feeling that the puzzle did a Rini aka it went inside Yugi I bet you thats what it did well keep pu the great work gtg now JA NE and enjoy your new life Yugi its gonna be fun from what I can see
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  • From ANON - Keara on February 12, 2013
    well things are expanding as we speak it seems keep up the great work gtg now ja ne
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