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Reviews for Mission: Can you win his heart

By : ShadowSpecter17

From ANON - AngleWing on October 26, 2003
u sure do make it intristing don't ya...he...he....*~'V[]demonted face[]
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From ANON - AngleWing on October 26, 2003
Wow! You just don't stop making them better. Yaoi! Yaoi! Yaoi! []chant[] tee...he... Nice authers notes too...
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From ANON - AngleWing on October 26, 2003
Wow![]speechless[]That was writen beautiflly!!! He...He...But it was a little bit on the short side...and with that said I shall now cintinue on to the fallowing chapy...[]smile[]*_'
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From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on October 19, 2003
Varon IS MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MINE!!!!!!! MINE MINE MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think I made my point clear oh yes and Yami and Yugi to
Anyways great fic!!!

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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on October 19, 2003
RD:grrrrrrrrr THAT GOD DAM MOTHER FUCKING TWO FACE SON OF A BITCH and im not talking about you shaddow im talking about a certain millenium rod holder we all know and loath well id do right now anyways ILL RIP YOUR HEAD CLEAR OFF YOUR SHOULDERS MARIK THIS IS THE DAY U SO DIE *goes and grabs eighty DEs 200 different dds and dots(wich are direct dammage and damage over time spells) then goes chasing after the fleeing marik and fries and pounds him into the ground*there thats what u get for hurting yugi you bastard *cackles evilly that can be heard even outside the castle*
WD:-__-;;;;;;; its official shes lost it
BRD she she ever even have
*bolts of fire lightening strike both of them to a crisp
WD,BRD:O.O*bothe are sinders with bulging eyes*that-hurt well lovely fic as im sure red would say the same*suddenly the sky is warm and the sun is shinning*see well that all for now cy*clouds start for form*ah i I mean TTFN TA TA FOR NOW*the sky is clear again*meany*gets struck bye a flash of heart lightenigng
BRD:you really ought to know when to not say anythinll Tll TTFN TA TA FOR NOW shadow and good fic keep up the good work ^___~
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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on October 19, 2003
RD:hey Red here and nice ficcy now that this whole thing is starting to clear up some thanks for the clearing Shadow od Vad Varon sweety hehe IF U THINK ILL LET U HURT YUGI OR ARE SADLY MISTAKEN ILL HURT U SO BAD ILL MAKE DARTS LOOKS LIKE A FUCKING SAINT
WD:O.O;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;; goodness BRD really is starting to become a very bad influence for u red i mean your swearing and actually vicious

RD:WELL HOW WOULD U FEEL IF RYOU WERE IN YUGIS EXACT SAME SHOES HMMM
WD:^__^why i wuld tear the heart of an who who did hell id give them fifty times worse the treatement they give him

RD:uh huh thats what i thought HYPOCRITE grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr im very pissed of at varon oh and shadow dont take this personally but ive told ya before i really dont like anyone or anything hurting yugi so this is why im angry
BRD:same with me to ya know i hate any bastards who think they can get away with hurting yugi but they will all see right mistress
RD:why yes of course for by the name of the draconian millitary we will totally anihilate any who threaten or even think of threatening saf safety and well being of yugi moto this i promise well TTFN TA TA FOW NOW ^____~

WD,BRD:WILL U STOP SAYING THAT

RD:well now that u mention it NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO*screams so loudly that she blows WD,BRD away* ok

WD,BRD:@__@o-k
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From ANON - DarkQueen on October 14, 2003
I Luv it thatwhatwhat I think although I'm a bit confuse do they all work for the same person who is trying to get to may Little YUGI??? (please kill Anzu that slut she's always w/My YAMI can't stand her KILL HER) ~anyways~ THANX FOR THE CANDY IF YOU INCLUDED ME!!! Well please update soon, LATER ^_^
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From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on October 13, 2003
Varon!!!!!!!!!!! YEAH!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THAT SEXY FOX

Varon: Oh my god Jenn calm down
AF: BABY COME TO ACID YOU KNOW YOU WANT TO!!
YAMI: *shakes head* Varon don't go to her she's evil.

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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on October 05, 2003
RD:and your evil for even coming up with this strange story sheesh not that i dont like it but your story is jumping all over the place

White Dragon:yeah your telling me im mean one minute its like across between totally spies,james bond and mission impossible to the dooms organization saga in the later episodes of yugioh to the matrix i mean is it just me or is she very jumpy with her work

Black Red Dragon:oh she is jumpy alright either that or she has a very peculiar reason for doing this that we dont know yet hm

RD:well all i can say is that she is lucky im in a good mood due to one certain but major fact

WD,BRD:and whats that RD

RD:hehe I WENT TO MY HOMECOMING DANCE THE OTHER NIGHT IT WAS THE BEST ANYONE WHO WISHES TO KNOW PLEASE DONT HESITATE TO ASK BOUT IT IN EMAIL BUT IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FUN HEHE I DANCED LIKE A DEMON THE OTHER NIGHT well thats all for now

RD,WD,BRD:TTFN TA TA FOR NOW
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From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on October 05, 2003
Oh this sounds like it's taking a dark twist me love those, but anyone could tell
Anyways happy you updated this was great. God I hate Anzu -_-
Anyways more soon
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From ANON - DarkQueen on September 29, 2003
Oh common that was way too short I need more and maybe a little lemon from Yugi&Yami please continue as soon as possible!!!! ^__^
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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on September 27, 2003
RD:hey red here nice chappy grr curse that marik and varon to the maniacle twins really raddle me oooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh MA-rik were are u sweety and u to varon precious come out come out were ever are its time for us to have a little "fun" *cackles evily* *she pulls out DE and searches for the two then when she fines them starts blasting them with the strongest dds for wizards,mages,warlocks,druids and all others plus the toughes badest wepons bothe medieval and modern and starts having "fun"with them whcackcackling evil*whew well that was fun and again lovely fic but please keep yami and yugi together well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW
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From ANON - DarkQueen on September 27, 2003
AWWW only lime common I need more than that or I WON'T REVIEW but anyways really good story by the way Yami is hot and sexy in evey outfit!!!!!!!!!
^_^
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From ANON - Diamond on September 24, 2003
Great chapter, hope you write more and here is a trained white tiger that will attack Anzu by your, Yugi or Yami's command for this great chapter.
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From ANON - Red Dragon of Egypt on September 23, 2003
RD:well nice to see a certain golden blonde we all know and semi love depending of your point of view of him right now is still up to his old tricks even if he isnt playing the same role he normallly plays of a demenfreafreak trying to get the power of the pharaoh and actually betrayed his sister to get but oh well thats not who he is playin at the moment now is he

White Dragon:oh stop it Red u just dont like the guy cuz he is tryin to get to yugi and yami by hurting his friends i mean pegasas did the same thing u know

RD:wich is why i i hate him to WD i dont like anyone nor anything that hurts yugi or yami but mainly yugi yes yami is a major hottie and sexy and a down right heartthrob but yugi is still the more sweeter of the too OOOOH speaking of hotties it would be so cool to have Yami as my Marine Biology teacher id never want to leave his class *sighs*can u imagin it WD

WD:*sighs*i know what u mean i woulmindmind having ryou as our american government teacher oooohh or well who would be better joey tristen or tea in personal fitness

RD:hmmm Joey he is perfect what better thing to do then make working out fun and funny to hehe
WD:thats certaintly true he really does lighten the mood dosntum wum what about er Kaiba doingebraebra

RD:what are u nuts the egomaniac teaching ME math pft id never want to show up for math again he would redicule me u know how he is

WD:ok ok yeesh sry i asked well this has been a lovely fic shadow hasnt it RD

RD:oh yes its a wonderful fic i just hope that no matter what bad situation u have yugi in that he wil be happy and that Yami will be with him wont u Shadow id very much appreciate it but please continue as how u have just make it with that ending and stuff that way i can have some fun with sis the Black Red Dragon in bashing yugi's enemies its a fad go figure ehe ehe well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^____~

WD*sighs*i wish ud stop saying that well cya shadow and like RD said keep up the good work and try to do as she asks if u can and if u want of course ok bye ^___~
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