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Reviews for Keith on The Prowl

By : Hentai

From ANON - hhh on December 24, 2005
hhhhhhha
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From ANON - the dragon\'s lover on October 30, 2005
'BG: Due to the trauma it may cause the author to describe Keith naked, I leave it up to the reader’s imagination...'
*lays on the floor of her living room, twitching* MY BRAIN!!! IT BURNS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Rain on May 19, 2004
Wow, adding random author’s notes is really cleveAnd And it’s so obvious in the show that the entire male cast is gay!

Oh, I have a few questions:

How did Bakura get his own body?
How did Marik get his own body?
Why are you using both Japanese and English names?
Why would Joey find it sexy to have a collar? He hates being referred to as a dog.
Keith hates Pegasus. Why would he want to shag him?
How did Yami get his own body?
Why would Yugi hide behind Yami? I never saw him as the cowering type.
Isis and Mai never talk. Why would they be hanging out together?
Mako and Rashid never meet, how would they end up as lovers?
Mokuba is about 8 and Serenity is 14, Kaiba would never let that happen!
Why is Anzu ranting about friendship and shinny things? Joey and Yami talk a whole lot more about friendship then her. If you’re going to use her Japanese name, then use her personality. You know, the tough-ass, I don’t put up with bullshit, but still caring Anzu?
Are we talking about the same Anzu? She does not have a flat chest. She is not skanky. Mai dresses a whole lot sexier then her, but your not bashing her, why?
Again, why is Anzu acting like a dense? She is ‘the voice of reason’ among the group.
I can’t read any more of this crap.

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From ANON - Bee on January 22, 2004
Really funny, but WAY to many AN's in the middle of the story. It get's annoying.
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From ANON - Aloe on January 14, 2004
Yeesh guys-- the reviews were emotional than the story.
Sometimes (though the english teachers will disagree) stories don't have deep meanings. Sometimes they're written to vent, or wish or replay what should have happened. And I think there's a place for those kind of stories, just as much as the "deeper" ones--
They may be the literary version of junk food, but who hasn't wanted chocolate on those pms days.

Leisa
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From ANON - Aloe on January 14, 2004
It's been an absolutely crappy day, but somehow I feel much better now. Thanks ... ya know, your story was kinda like friendship .... (dodges large brick)
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From ANON - EVIL MJ on September 28, 2003
I wanted to respond to Kit, but have been off sick so could not do it sooner.

I apologize if it sounded like I was crapping on you, I certainly was not. Your are most assuredly entitled to your own opinion. You are ofcourse correct when you say that Anzu does not act like that in showshow. Which is ofcourse the reason for fanfiction, it gives us the ablity to do what ever we like with the characters.

My beef only lies which two things: 1. When you questioned our friendship. As Dragondreamer Yamidragon pointed out, we have been friends a very long time and have been through hell and back, so the fact that anyone might question this over a silly story got me a bit irritated.

2. There are too many people out there who don't pay attention to the warnings and the descriptions of the stories, they clearly state the intent and the content. If you do not feel it is something you like, then you should not read it. While critisim does not bother me all that much, I know that there are a lot of younger writers who feel affected by it and at times regard it as a personal attack. This negative critisim might keep them from continuing to write which in a lot of cases is a shame.

Neverthelss, I just wanted to clairify that this was meant only as a fun story that obviously may not appeal to all readers, hence the warning of Anzu bashing.

Once again, I wish to make it clear that I am not attacking anyone or trying to be a bitch towards you, just voicing an opion as you yourself were.
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From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2003
**REPOSTED MESSEGE**

Um.. Bakurasgirl and Yami Dragon? You forgot Rex and Weevil! I would love to see Keith TRY to pick up those guys. (As if... No, I'm not a Rex/Weevil fan **GAG**)

“Hey. Pegsy, want to meet my Millennium Eye????”

O_O

Isis rolled her eyes. “No thanks, I replaced the batteries in my vibrator already.”

Ooo! I love that line! Now I know what to say next time I meet a pervert at a party.

Too bad there wasn't a Keith/Anzu lemon. I know I'm being perverted, but I was really hoping to read that--and get a good laugh out of it. Because of this, I'm sooooo tempted to try to write up a Yu-Gi-Oh version of "A Midsummer-Night's Dream".

Let's see here...(Please note that none of this is concrete yet)

Puck--Malik (seems to fit the part well)
King Oberon-- definately Yami Yugi
Queen Titania--Anzu!!!
Nick Bottom--Bandit Keith!!!
Thesus, Duke of Athens-- Seto (definately!)
Hippolyta-- Joey (I know he doesn't fit this too well, but we all know he passionately loves Seto! ^_^)

Maybe I should finish up on the Yu-Gi-Oh! version of Phantom of the Opera first (staring Bakura as the Phantom, Ryou as Christine, and Yami Yugi as Raoul).

--sliderkta

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From ANON - sliderkta on September 26, 2003
>>Isis rolled her eyes. “No thanks, I replaced the batteries in my vibrator already.”
“Hey. Pegsy, want to meet my Millennium Eye????”
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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on September 26, 2003
Ok...I felt the need to jump in here. First of all, Kitt is MORE than entitled to her opinion. She has reviewed for me on my other stories and I have always enjoyed her reviews. I was in NO WAY offended by her review.

However...this WAS a gift fic, done in fun. I KNOW Anzu is not this way on the show. That's the fun of fanfiction...you get to mess with the characters. I personally can't stand Seto/Mokuba fics...I think they're just wrong. But that's MY opinion. So I simply don't review if I happen to read one.

And please, people, DO NOT crap on my friendship with MJ. We have been best friends for 26 years. We have been through hell and back together. If anyone knows what real friendship is about, it's us. I am NOT against friendship. As far as I'm concerned, it, and love, makes the world go around and is what makes us human.

Please don't continue trashing on each other trying to defend us or your friends. Let's all be mature about this. If you don't like the story, don't read it. Warnings were put up, please heed them.

Again, Kitt, I am not upset. Bad reveiws are all part of what posting your stories are about. I hope you continue to enjoy and review my other stories. *hugs*

DD
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From ANON - BLUE EYES on September 25, 2003
HAHHA GO ACIDFLOWER

AND ANZU CAN DIE SHE IS A FUCKING WHORE THATS RIGHT A WHORE

I LOVED THE FIC !!!!!!!!!!! KEEP IT UP !!!!
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From ANON - boobookittiefujimi on September 25, 2003
Oh yeah. Love the story!! Keep it the fuck up!! Love it!!!
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From ANON - Kitt on September 25, 2003
You know, that wasn't meant as a flame. Just a bad review. There is a difference.

I've had it with all the thoughtless fanfic out there. ::shrug:: And you know, I'm angry. I refuse to sit by any longer.

I'VE gotten flames and bad reviews. And I think I can take it. Not everyone will like your work. It's a fact - Not everyone likes yellow, or the world, or christianity, etc.

FYI - I do like Bandit Keith ^^. My friend Star corrupted me XD. Just not they're portrayal of him ::shrugs::.

Also, In my faith, Not only the Cow is holy. All Animals are.

E-mail me if you want to keep up this argument ::Shrugs::. I'm not going to spam their review any more.

~ Kitt

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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on September 25, 2003
OMG!!!!! ROTFLMFAO!!!!! Dear Ra, I haven't laughed so hard all day!! *wipes tears from eyes* That was too much. Heehee, I never thought I'd feel sorry for Keith, but...ah, well. The feeling has passed. Let the bashing begin again!! I hope you know I will never be able to look at my neice's Care Bear the same ever again!!! I love the running commentary! That was a great touch! Once again, you gals have made my day!! Cheers~

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - EVIL MJ on September 25, 2003
Oh I have to respond to that flame.

Didn't you read the intro. This was a story specifically written to annoy and torment me. If they didn't like friendship do you really think they would have bothered to do this?

The warning clearly states ANZU BASHING...if you are not up for that kinda fun don't bother. I can understand that everyone has their own particuarly story or character that they like, Hey, I am sure I'm part of the minority that happens to enjoy Keith ;p, but man don't give out a bad review for something that was meant to be funny. Holy cow..get a sense of humor.

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