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Reviews for Tearing Down the Sky

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Flames Angel on May 31, 2005
    whats gonna happen to Ryou? Is Bakura gonna get exacuted(?)? With the others get there in time? Please update soon! I really wanna know!
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  • From Reyn on May 16, 2005
    argh! you need to update!! soon!! you can't jest leave it there and let Ryou be broken!! wah!
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  • From ANON - UrufuChikara on May 16, 2005
    ^_^ Yes, Go Me. And you updated! Now I won't have to KEEL you! Now do it again or I will ^_^
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  • From ANON - Silvershadowfire on May 16, 2005
    Boy, I'm glad I found this one! I'm enjoying this story a great deal, and I will look foreward to your next update.

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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on May 13, 2005
    GAH!!!!!! MUST KILL KEITH!!!!!!!

    great chapter btw! ^^::
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  • From ANON - Celestial Angel on May 13, 2005
    GOOD JOB!! I'm MUslim, and what you said about the Angels of Araboth is true! lol. I love this, and I hope this will hopefully come out to a good or even excellent ( with your wonderful writing skills it is obviously possible) ending. Update very soon, and I will give you a Ryou-plushie! Ja ne for now, Rachel-chan!
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  • From ANON - ladywolf_Terri on May 09, 2005
    Gah!! What a cliffie to leave it at! Evil person!! XD

    Great job!! still loving the story!
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  • From ANON - UrufuChikara on May 07, 2005
    Dammit! Why did you have to stop it right when..... when everything was gonna happen!? UPDATE DAMN YOU!
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  • From ANON - sundance-gurl on May 05, 2005
    Another great story and one of my favs. Please let Ryou get off, Keith is such an ass he's the only one who really belongs in hell (i was going to say Keith should go to hell but he's already there). Anyways as for the "Four" I can only think of two others besides the one u've already mentioned and they are Micheal (for sure) and I think Peter?? (just a guess) I should know the fourth one but my sunday school lessons are rusty, very rusty. Anyways please tell me who they are (cause it will bug me not to know) if not in the next chap then by the end of the story. I can hardly wait for the next update. keep up the good work
    Cheers!!

    P.S. something i just wanna mention (plz don't take offense), just some constructive criticism (i hope). anyways ur using too many commas in places where u don't need them and their butchering your sentences. try to watch out for that when ur writing and it also help to read over ur work (that can also apply to anything u write, not just fanfics)
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  • From ANON - insania4now on May 05, 2005
    or maybe you just mean the four main archangels gabriel, michael, and the other two with their mad names nobody can remember. Or maybe i should just give it up cuz i`m probably completly wrong.....
    oh, one thing: Give Keith a really slow and really painfull death, or i swear i`ll go to hell personally and then....help him god...
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  • From ANON - insania4now on May 05, 2005
    Could the four refer to the four seraphim? The ones with six wings and lots of lots of eyes and always singing? Just guessing. Love your writing. Can`t wait for the next chapter, so don`t you dare stop! *warning glare*
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  • From ANON - inorganic on May 03, 2005
    i love your fic, it is quite well written.
    would the four be the Elemental Angels rapheal, uriel, micheal, gabriel/jibrille?
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  • From ANON - person on May 01, 2005
    Your story is written very well. I believe the four refer to the four horesmen of the apocalypse.
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  • From ANON - Freai on May 01, 2005
    ^^ This is the cutest story EVER!!!! I'm gonna start checking back everyday! ^_^ oh, btw. I think I know who 'the four' are. (I had to do a report for church school) You kinda gave it away when Ryou said "Raphael, why is this happening?!”
    'The Four' would be the four archangels right? Um... Rahael, Gaberial,.... and two others I can't think of their names right now though.... I'm not sure if that was right or not. (I may just be over observant and think too much ^^;) PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - darknessmiko on April 30, 2005
    Are the four angels from the main ones from god? You know Michael, Gabriel, Uriel, and Raphael...is that what you mean?

    Laika de Lioncourt...always and forever Darknessmiko
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