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Reviews for Tearing Down the Sky

By : hatochiisai
  • From winglessangel on May 04, 2009
    I love this fic it is one of my favs. Hte plot, the way the fic moves it's llike watching it on TV. Great Work!!
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  • From ChibiBerry on November 04, 2007
    This is one of the best stories ive read in a while and ive only read two chapters...but its sort of hard to read cuz of all the @@ and stuff. But that's okay I absolutely love adore your story!

    NOW I MUST READ MORE...MUAHAHAHA! :)
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  • From sweetciel on March 15, 2007
    That was just positivley amazing. It was such a wonderful story. The plot was brilliant! I love it. I wished that it would never end. I swear that was one of the best fanfics that i've ever read! EVER! I love you love you LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From Darknessoftrees on December 04, 2006
    this is a good story as usual, I hope there may be a mating story *wiggles her eyebrows*
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  • From ANON - ayan on June 08, 2006

    I've always fancied Angels and Demons it never crossed my mind to make the hikaris and yami like this. My friends (Hana and Xyran) and I used God/Goddesses, Demi-gods/goddesses, Angels and Demons on our original fics with Myoujin Lee's Ragnarok and Chrno Crusade crossovers. heheheh Always thought of the yamis as shinigami (angels of death) and the hikaris as well plain mortals. Infinite percent GREAT FANFIC! Ü
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  • From ANON - Arya on January 31, 2006
    That was awesome the best fanfic i've ever read keept it up
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  • From ANON - Yoru Hana on October 23, 2005
    One last comment. I wonder if Marik had the audasity to smell the Angel's of Abaroth.... *snickers at the mental image*
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  • From ANON - Yoru Hana on October 23, 2005
    Awww, sweet! SO, did they get to keep thier tails? If they lost them I bet thier mates would be pretty disapointed, *snicker* but since you didn't say anything about the tails, only the wings and fire halo, I'll assume the got to keep them. Lovely!
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  • From ANON - Zoe on October 22, 2005
    Lovely story.
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on October 18, 2005
    Okay, just went over the review list, and my friends /have/ been reading this -- Drac, I'm SO going to kill you for not telling me about it!!! Much love to you Hato-chiisai. ~LG
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  • From ANON - LadyGrey on October 18, 2005
    KAWAII!!! Wow. You're up to Chapter 24, and for some reason, I hadn't started reading this until last week. And I'm kicking myself now. Although the nice thing is I'm only dl'ing 5 chapters at a time to read at work so I'm stretching out my enjoyment, right now I'm up to 10! So, as I'm reading I'm writing a super long review in my head, mostly marking the passages that make me look like an idiot to my coworkers when I start laughing hysterically for no reason; I'll email it all to ya sometime, just know that I'm so loving this and hope you keep updating forever. And if I'm /not/ the last person to have read this, I'll get the word out to my friends too. Thank you for an awesome story, even my yami Trelane says she loves it! Ja! ~LG & Lanie
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  • From ANON - Yamisgirl13 on October 15, 2005
    Wow! What an ending! Shit. Don't Marik and Yami go through the same thing or not? I guess we'll never know. Anyway great ending, I loved it. Too bad it's over though, I enjoyed it. Will you write a sequel? Please consider it.

    Yamisgirl13
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  • From ANON - Jessica on October 13, 2005
    Oh. My. God.

    That..was..totally..and utterly..BEAUTIFUL! Oh, I truly expected a wonderful ending, but that was ~STUNNING!~...ABSOLUTELY, POSTIVELY BREATH-TAKING!

    Thank you so much for sharing this with us! Though it had its angsty, torturous moments, it all ended beautifully! The entire journey was invigorating! I love how you never strayed from the point of the story...even with your minor hiatuses, you still managed to come back and hit it flawlessly every time, without missing a beat in the plotline! This will go as one of my all-time favorite Bakura/Ryou fanfics, heck even one of the best I've ever read! Great job! I can't wait to dive into more of your work!

    Everything about the last chapter...I laughed, I cried, I smiled with envy and desire...it was, just, beautiful! (I know, my flexible vocabulary is envious to all, that's how much you've moved me with your story...there are no words...)...and the statement in which the Four recognize them as mates and welcome Bakura 'home'...very poignant. Made my heart all warm and tingly!...and great way to end the story, btw, with a steaming hot mating scene! Erotic and yet embracing the bonds which defines love!

    Thank you again! ^-^
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  • From ANON - YamiRynEnjeru on October 12, 2005
    *love and showers of adoration*
    Gah, wonderful job, love.
    This fic had me enthralled from the beginning, and all two years of stalking have paid off in surplus.
    Amazing characterization, detail, and story line throughout it all.
    I knew I loved you and your writing talent for a reason =D
    Every emotion in the book was felt while reading this, and I'm more than satisfied with how this turned out.
    Awesome job. *hearts*
    ~YRE
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  • From ANON - OsaP on October 11, 2005
    XD XD XD XD XD XD

    XD and then some. i'm so glad this is over! it was so good! >_< *thrashes in excitement* i'm terribly sad it's over too. *thrashes in sadness* as always, i enjoyed this fic very much and i wish to comment on your talent as a writer. you're talented. ^^ it's not only that, tho. you really add a personal edge to all of your stories which is refreshing to say the least. you really feel for the characters as you write them which makes the tale you weave all the more enjoyable. i really loved ever bit of this fic. the suspense in some chapters gave me a stomach ache. the more touching parts brought a tear to my eye. i never really knew what to expect each moment cuz this whole thing was so far from cliche. even my YGO apathetic friend thought the concept was brilliant. the definitions of the angels and demons as a species was a great idea that worked. the whole ryou smells like gardenias thing was really cute. ^_^ and the removable halo thing was a good idea, and the demon's tails, intergrating the stuff about the Angels of Araboth... EVERYTHING was freaking fantastic! i'll definitely have to read this again and i'll be sure to pimp you out to anyone who enjoys a good YGO fanfic. you've made me very happy. thank you.

    ^@^
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