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Reviews for The Dark Deal

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - Yoake Ryuu-chan on December 13, 2006
    Hmm... it’s an interesting idea alright. It seems like the actual ‘plot’ bits were a little lacking, could’ve used a bit more detail and personality maybe... but homg, such a talent you have for lemons ^_^ Man, my interests are obviously getting stranger by the day, but PegasusxRyou is HOT XD
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  • From Saka on July 28, 2005
    Whoa DARK!! And I loved it. Awesome job with the timeline 'n all! There are so few Pegasus fics that I actually like but this is one of them! FOR SURE! AWESOME WORK!!

    Your fan always!!

    ~IceAngel~
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  • From ANON - OsaP on June 30, 2005
    ........ .. ...... . . .
    that said, this was terrible. not like 'i hate this story so much' terrible, but like 'where did you come up with this idea' terrible. a good terrible....yeah... that sounds about right. i just feel so bad for ryou. >_< i do like how this fit into the series rather well and explains why ryou never gets rid of that pesky spirit. so, despite the first few sentences i really did like this but the fact that i did is terrible. oh, just keep writing u crazy good author u!
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  • From ANON - UrufuChikara on May 16, 2005
    Emmmmm.................................... ............................................... ........................................
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  • From ANON - Soran on January 05, 2005
    certainly dark. the double play bakura did on his hikari was very satifyingly angstfull. keep writing, Ill try to review again.
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  • From ANON - Mia on June 12, 2004
    Is there going to be another chapter to this story or is it just a one chapter thing? And, if it is going to be more then one chapters...is Bakura going to "change" or..........what? What's going to happen? I wanna know...
    Anyways, update soon. Ja!
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  • From ANON - Tanaskarel on April 29, 2004
    This was GREAT I tell you you really make a greate story puting toghether the inocen and dark personalities of Ryo and Bakura.
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  • From ANON - AxRxUxKxAxS on December 24, 2003
    youre so evil!!! i love it >XoD muwahahaha! the blood, the rape, the bondage, all so satisfying *big ass hentai grin* did i ever tell you i love your work?
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  • From ANON - Moose on December 20, 2003
    0_0....-_-...0_0 That was...quite disturbing. I'm not really a fan of Pegasus/anyone pairings, especially Ryou. But, I'll forgive you since you've done so many wonderful Bakura/Ryou stories. Just...please don't make this pairing a habbit. It was a well written story, though!
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  • From ANON - happy yaoi lover on December 10, 2003
    *o* another pice of yout fine work....vary fine ^_^ i await the day when i have anough brains and skill to write like you do....untill then,your faithfull fan, happy yaoi lover
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  • From ANON - Sausweet on October 14, 2003
    Dear God....that was a distubing story if i ever read ...s...so may pegasas stories out there lately, is this some sort of fad? I hope it passes because he creeps me out. Anyway, YOU'RE BACK!!! IVE MISSED YOU ;_; *SNIFFLE* welcome back and i hope you're happier real soon.
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  • From ANON - C0nfus3d on October 12, 2003
    That was evil pf pegasus and bakura argh i hate them! they took adavntage of poor lil ryou....but besides that that was extremely good, continue please
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  • From ANON - Elle-Fate2x1 on October 09, 2003
    oh, poor Ryou! that was sooo cruel of Bakura*glare* I am soooo mad at him. It was well written and I really enjoyed it!
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  • From ANON - YamiKitsune on October 08, 2003
    Hey! This was a good fic...not as good as your other ones, but it was still really good ^_^ I guess I am just used to Bakura also being a goodguy -_-'' ohe well! I STILL LIKE IT!!! ^_^
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