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Reviews for Under the Mistletoe

By : sharem
  • From ANON - Momma Cat on November 02, 2003
    I have three guesses. Two of which are obivious, one that comes from nowhere. Of course Malik and Seto would be everyone's guess. I got one that, well, the person ain't even in the story, but its still possible. Duke Devilin. Yes, dice man. He is not in the story, most of the clues don't even apply, but its possible. We don't know anything about him, so it could be made up... right? Oh and I though Ryou was another possible, but he dosen't have a sibling as far as I know of. I guess it all falls on Marik. That's the most logical choice anyway. Hey if you wanna get real expensive in your gift idea's why not have C.A. buy Yugi a car? Oh another one could be a painting of some kind, have a well know made-up artist make a painting for C.A. or a painting that exist's for real with some meaning for this story.
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  • From ANON - your newest fan on November 01, 2003
    i don't know if you already got this suggestion but i want to review anyways because your story has to be the best yugi centered story i have read so far on adultfanfiction! you make my day everytime i read a new chapter because i absolutly LOVE yugi stories! it does matter who h wit with (as long as it's not anzu) then i will read eveyone one. but there isn't that many stories out there with a different pairig besides yami/ yugi or seto/ yugi, so that is why i can not wait to who who the christmas angel is! i think it might be malik but you've also twists so that i really don't who it is and that's great because it keeps me reading. anyways, back to the present. what if the C.A. gave yugi a pet like a dog, and said something like "so you will never have to be loney again..." ok... so maybe not saying something quite like that but i hope you get my idea. i can't wait for the next chapter which i'm sure will be awesome!! good luck writing!
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  • From Dxinsider on October 31, 2003
    LOL I still thinkn its Seto Kabia. Please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - SailorAurora on October 31, 2003
    awww, that was so sweet. ^.^
    and I love a mystery like this.. hehehe. makes for a intersting read. keep it up! ^.^ and of course, put in more hints.. :D
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  • From ANON - ssj4sailormenz on October 31, 2003
    *eyebrow twitches* Ok. I love the fic. It's sweet, fluffy, sappy and all that. I would love to read more but there's one thing. *eyebrows twiches again* The language spoken in Egypt is not 'Egyptian' it's Arabic. Got that? How do i know? I WAS BORN AND RAISED THERE, THAT'S HOW!!!!! Do you have any idea how annoying it is to have people come up to you and ask 'S som some Egyptian!' They don't even ask pely!ely! *mutters a few curses*

    So, for future reference the language uis Arabic not 'Egyptian'. *eyebrow twitches once more*

    Oh yeah! *grins* One more thing! I think i've figured out who the Christmas Angel is! I figured it out after reading chappie 2 or 3. This is the first time i've ever read a pairing like that at least i think it is going top be that pairing...

    More soon please! ^_^
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on October 31, 2003
    Another wonderful chapter. Out of curiousity . . . are you treating Malik and Yami Malik as two seperate people in this one? just a curiousity . . . and on that note, some of your reviewers have guessed correctly eh? hmmm . . . might have to dig through the reviews . . . naw, that would spoil the fun. I'll just wait to see if it is who I think it is.
    Anyway, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - SailorBluestar on October 31, 2003
    DAMN THAT TEASER!!!!! Damn. Now I want the next chappy. Why do you torture us so? Why?

    Yugi: Is she always this dramatic?

    Kurama: Since you're new inside her psycho mind, yes. Yes she is. It's terrible I know. I'd suggest you depart while you still can.

    Yami: What do you mean?

    Kurama: She has yet to give you a title. Therefore, you're still free to flee her mind.

    Yugi: And your title is?

    Kurama: Her insightful muse. It's too late for me, but not for you.

    OI! Kurama, don't be scaring my muses away. I may need them. :)

    Yami: O.o'

    Anyway, I want more!!! Too bad Yami's not the Christmas Angel. I was really hoping it to be him. Or Seto. And I don't think Mokuba will be doing this. Doesn'und und like it. Malik doesn't seem like the Christmas Angel either. Pegasus doesn't have a sibling does he? *shudders at the thought* What about Duke? These guys gotta be bazillionaires, but I don't think they have siblings. I wonder if it's still Malik after all... All clues point to him, yet, his actions in this chapter... GAAAAAAHHH!!!
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  • From ANON - Lancer Monna on October 28, 2003
    Great chapter! It was really sweet. I really enjoyed it and I hope to read more soon!!
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  • From ANON - Misty on October 28, 2003
    That was a wonderful update! I think I know who it is, but I probablly don't.. *sighs* If only it were Yami.. but.. Yuugi doesn't love him like that... *sighs* Oh well.. I'll just have to wait and see.. like everyone else.. Once again wonderful chapter! I love long ones.. ^~

    Misty
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  • From ANON - DracOnyx on October 27, 2003
    Okay, I'm gonna take a shot in the dark as to who it is . . . reviewing the clues, it's someone with money to spend, who knows Yugi, also knows ancient egyptian, was NOT at duelist kingdom, wants Yugi to trust him (which means it's someone Yugi usually wouldn't), and is generally an interesting individual. The only person I can come up with to fit all those clues, is our dear blonde egyptain with lilac eyes. So, can't wait to read more.
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  • From Dxinsider on October 27, 2003
    I forgot about Malik. Maybe its him. Please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - Neko Taka on October 27, 2003
    *smiles* This is truly a great story, and I can't wait to read more. I think I'm suddenly in the Christmas spirit now ^_^ You're a very good writer. Keep up the good work. Ja!
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on October 26, 2003
    AWWW I really love your writing and this fic
    Please more soon
    and thank you for the review hon

    ACID
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  • From ANON - Camille on October 26, 2003
    This is frustrating! It's Ryou, isn't it! If it's Noa, I am running for the hills!
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  • From ANON - SailorBluestar on October 26, 2003
    AWWWWWWW!!! Now I want to see chappy 5. I think it's Malik, unless of course, it's Marik. Hehehehehe. But I wanted it to be either Seto or Yami. Damn it Yami, why didn't you have a fortune, or a sibling? Even though you love Yugi as a lover, while he loves you like a brother. Hey! That rhymes!

    Yami: Baka.

    Yugi: Be nice.

    Yami: *blushes*

    Awwwww.... Come on Seto, don't let Malik win this! Snatch Yugi's heart. I know you can do it!

    Seto: Baka.

    Hey!
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