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Reviews for Koibito Yami

By : hatochiisai
  • From ANON - PeRiDoTs13 on December 08, 2003
    I've already read this on ff.net (I'm Sakura-chan!), but I'm so glad it's still up somewhere. I really love it, and I just had this great urge to read it over again. Mmmm.... Oh, just saying so maybe you can correct it, there's some dialogue missin thi this chapter where the Duel Monsters speak to each other and where Yami and Bakura speak in Egyptian after Bakura's shot. God, get the rest up soon, I'm dying to finish rereading.
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  • From ANON - Darklady Eris on November 17, 2003
    This is really great, I read it a while back on ff.net and am just now re-reading it. The main fault is in this chapter - Bakura chages sides too fast, it's jarring to read and not very believable. If you ever get around to rewriting this story, show a lot more of the conversation between Yami and Bakuka before he breaks down crying. For now - just get the rest of the story up PLEASE. I wanna read it.
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  • From ANON - Valea on November 10, 2003
    ahhhhhhh!!!! is this finsihed up in the next one?! damn cliffies! it was a shame that your first fic had to be tatekn down but now i must go on about your cleverness going on in this fic! like how finally everyone started to be a smart ass to each other lol. and then how ryou got to conquer his fearswas was so great! but damn it le them get there in time! Let Ryous dad be excepting they need a lil break now! it was so good where is it? *whines* wahhhh yay!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on October 24, 2003
    Good fic, it's so sad! Please update soon, I'm hooked!
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  • From ANON - YamiJou on October 23, 2003
    OMR!! OMG! OM WHOEVER!!!! WHAT A PLACE TO HAVE A CLIFFHANGER!!!!!! THIS FIC ROCKS AND I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! I love fics where Bakura realises his love for Ryou... hehe.. BUT POOR RYOU... awwwww MAN! please update soooon I must know what happens neeext!! o.. I said that already...
    Yamikaito: my hikari is spazzing out, O.o; she wants to find out what happens to Ryou and she hopes that dr gets whats comin to him... and she also wants to see what happens when Ryous dad finds out about Ryou and Bakura...lol...
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  • From ANON - Youko Demon on October 20, 2003
    Right now, I believe that you are the greatest person in existance. I'M SO HAPPY THAT YOU UPLOADED THIS FIC AGAIN! but incase you didn't know (I don't mean to be annoying if you already did) The words in egyptian and what the duel monsters say to each other is missing. I still think your great though ^_^
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  • From ANON - bjssu on October 20, 2003
    hey im glad to see this back up I hope you can get the sequel up soon to also more lemons in millium balnce that wooould cool i think . ii hoope yoooou do .
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  • From ANON - bjssu on October 20, 2003
    hey im glad to see this back up I hope you can get the sequel up soon to also more lemons in millium balnce that wooould cool i think . ii hoope yoooou do .
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  • From ANON - starfire on October 18, 2003
    I'm glad to see this uup agian cool
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  • From ANON - daze star on October 18, 2003
    YAY!! kiobito yami is back up!!! those people over in ff.n suck!! this is one of the best ygo fics i've ever read!! i'm so glad that you got it back up, even though it is only a few chapters. i hope you post up the rest soon!! are you going to post all of your stories here on aff.n?
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  • From YamiKitsune on October 17, 2003
    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR BEST FIC EVER IS BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *JUMPS UP AND DOWN* I LOVE THIS STORY. AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT ALL AGAIN!!!....wait...does this mean that as soon as you get all or fics posted, reposted and updated...your going to work more on the sequle to this?!??!?! OH I REALLY HOPE SO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but I will just go back and re-read all the fics you have put up here ^_^ can never get enough of your fics!
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