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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 14, 2004
    I like Clayton, he's a very sweet guy and certainly knows what he's doing. I hope Aten gets better. And the moment of Joey and Seto jsut holding each other was so sweet. I hate bullies, but then again who doesn't? I have a gift for Aten *a silver dream catcher charm* Just wear it at night or hang it over your head and he won't have any bad dreams. Enjoy sweetie ^^
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on March 14, 2004
    Well, see I was talkin 'bout ALL the chapters you wrote. The suicide chappie is like, fifth on my list. Lost BIG points for it being Malik. The second is from Baby of Mine(?), when Aria killed Malik. That's where my hatred blossemed for her. : )

    I think to much
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  • From ANON - Jade on March 13, 2004
    YJ: I was right, it got worse
    J: Yami hush!...::small sigh::that was an intense chapter to be sure,
    especially with joey and seto, hayden must have been scared out of his mind!
    YJ: where'd you come up with the idea with seto and mokuba being
    hurt by their step father like that? I'm not putting anything past anyone,
    but that was an unexpected twist for the brothers.
    J: ::small shiver, then a soft sigh, then grins and winks to aria,
    handing her a few bags of M&M's:: Here ya go cutie, since Donny didn't have any
    you can have some of mine ^.^

    more chaps! more lemons!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on March 12, 2004
    Oh my!! What an ending! Poor Joey!! Poor Seto! Poor Hayden!

    I should be saying poor Marik!! Oh my Ra, that was too funny!! Heehee!!

    I really hope that things can get better for Joey Set Seto and Hayden!

    Oh, and the face-off between Kura and Aria reminds me of me and my son lately. LOLOL!!

    Wonderful chappie!! Can't wait till Sunday!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on March 12, 2004
    thats so sad! oooo.... i hope joey and seto can get back together...
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on March 12, 2004
    Yuji: All funny and sad
    Yumi: Marik's new last name is Weanie! *Lol*
    Yuji: Joey is so drunk!!!
    Yumi: I didn't know he had it in 'im. Or even the balls to threaten Seto Kaiba.
    Yuji: I hope everything turns out ok
    Yumi: UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - Terra on March 12, 2004
    Well Doneell ell Done!! I ended up on the floor ling ing yet again. Potty training....brings back memories....Walking into the bathroom and the child has assumed the 'wipe me position'. The one with the fanny in the air. Go RYou make daddy do his duty. Look out Lover you got it coming. Go Seaman Cheesy!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 12, 2004
    I don't blame Bakura, eew! I'm glad Marik has another job, even if he is a cashier again. I hope he can hold his temper in check. Oh, Gabby is cute so I'm glad she's back and that school got shut down? YES!! Take that you stupid bitch, Barnes!! Wait, please oh please tell me those little bastards that made Robbie and Aten's classes so ahrd are not going to teh same school where Mr. Cullen Teaches! But I hope Umi meets Aria again. He's adorable!! Ouch! Hostile memories! I have never seen Joey that way and I can only imagine how Hayden feels. Question: will Aria ever see Hayden as a friend in stead of a rival? Okay' I'm done. Gonna sit here and wait for Sunday.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 12, 2004
    Seaman Cheesy Weiner! Holy shit!!!! LMFAO! TOO FUNNY! Talk about a humbling experience! I remember my days as a fast food worker....imagining Marik going through what I did is just a barrel of laughs! (hint to Marik; the food that sits in the warmer too long isn't bad, even though they call it "expired." All that means is that by law they cant sell it cause of stupid laws. Just steal it when nobody's looking. The chibi's will worship you, believe me. *evil grin*)

    I think we need to take a road trip to Captain Smiley Buns......LMAO!!!!!!! (I just like saying Captain Smiley Buns, hahaha)

    GREAT chapter!!!! I'm gonna be laughing because of it all day! Thank you!!!! :-)
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 12, 2004
    WOW! I'm just........uh..(can't finish sentence-still wiping drool off my keyboard,lol) That was SO good! I think when I win the lottery I'm gonna buy the rights to Yu-Gi-Oh and have you be my head writer. (I know, I'm wishful thinking again,LOL) Anyways, that was like THE HOTTEST thing I've read in ages! Way awesome Ryou x Bakura, I loved it!!!!!!! Looks like Wheeler needs a kick in the ass though! (I'm sure Seto will take care of it though *grin*)



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  • From ANON - Jade on March 11, 2004
    :J: the lemon was great ^.^ talk about two of the most sexy guys! merow! hehe
    mmm...hopefully seto finds joey soon, he shouldn't be on the streets doing that kind of
    stuff to 'pay' for things::shiver, pout::
    :YJ: it happens......coulda been worse...which brings to mind, ARE you going to
    do worse to him?Hmph...poor pup. Poor Seto if he finds out what his puppy has been up to...
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on March 10, 2004
    Yuji: *Blushes its it over?
    Yumi: Phew. Yeah. What...lemons!
    Yuji: Both of then got some?
    Yumi: Yeah baby!
    Yuji: And Joey? ;_;
    Yumi: He gives people blowjobs for a drink
    Yuji: O_O!!
    Yumi: Yeah gave this bodyguard some good stuff I bet too.
    Yuji: ;_; Why?! I thought he loved Seto!
    Yumi: Guess he loves his drinks just as much
    Yuji: I need to know what happens!
    Yumi: UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 10, 2004
    Yeah Dream Catcher's are fun to make as well. I think Aten would like them ^^ Poor Joey.... his life was enarly perfect with Seto now it's hell in a hand basket. And lemme guess, that was Rex Raptor and Weevil Underwood turning Joey down? *shudders* I seriously hate those two more than anything. Well, Steven and Timm and Jessica and Aku are are one my No.1 Hate list but these two come in second. Anyway, eagerly wawiting for the next update on Friday. Chow!
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on March 10, 2004
    omg....keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Terra on March 10, 2004
    I loved your lemon here. So sweet. And I must say, thinking requires the use of higher brain function. I was just trying not to drown in drool. mmmmmmmmmmmm.....naked Tris Yummy!
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