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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on March 10, 2004
    HOT DAMN RA LOVIN' WONDERFUL LEMON!!!! That was just too hot!! I am definately awake now!! Woah!!! LOL!

    *grabs bottle of Cin Min Morgan from Joey and smacks him in the head with it*

    Sheesh. How does Aku like the alcohol?? I know that it lowers inhibitions and shit, but seriously, If a Yami can get drunk, how about Aku??

    I hope that Seto finds his puppy soon. Real soon. And not deadly hurt.

    Lady Elfskye

    Ah, and I'll be in PA in May too!! But in Dresher on the 14th....Damn, wish I could meet you guys!!
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on March 09, 2004
    Yuji: Oh man! Malik is back with Marikay!!ay!! No more sad Malik!!
    Yumi: What I can't wait for is the lemon!! Please hurry!!
    Yuji: UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on March 09, 2004
    *screems with joy* im so happy there back together! and going to have some play time! its been to long... but its worth the wait... absents makes the heart grow fonder.... and more needy...heheheh
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on March 09, 2004
    Wonderful chappie again as usual!! Such sweetness with Malik and Marik. Malik finally got told (sort of) what was going on. And Aria is soooooo cute!!!! I just keep hearing this line run thru my head from a movie, "Boys have penises and girls have vaginas" and it's a little boy saying it. I can see Aria standing up in school saying just that!! Lemon?? Did you say lemon?? YUMMY!!!! Cannot wait till tomorrow!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Jade on March 09, 2004
    ::grinning and gives a wolf whistle::i was wondering when you were gonna do another lemon with those two, Yay! ^.^ ::drool::
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  • From ANON - Terra on March 09, 2004
    You bring the lemons and I'll make the lemonaid. Can't wait. Really sweet chapter, nice and 'healing' for the characters. Aria getting in the tub is my toddler every night LOL. Chatted with DDYD last night, said you were under the weather. Get well soon. Lemon tea (no pun intended) works for me, maybe because Ight ght lover slipping rum in it on me. LOL AIM me anytime I run by setodreamer. Chats welcome. How long til another Marik/Malik lemon, the make up lemon? The best kind.
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 09, 2004
    Ooh that story is so sad yet kinda sweet. Ryou is a great pa and and i love the idea about the stones. Or even try a dream catcher. They're suppose to catch bad dreams in the net and let only good dreams enter and when morning light shines on it, the bad dreams are burned away. Can't wait to read hte lemon, I know Bakura and Ryou need some loving tind Ind I'm glad Malik is alive and slowly getting back with Marik. Like I said, sad yet sweet *offers more plushies*
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 09, 2004
    Lemon? T'morrow? Looks like I'll be having a good Wednesday! Hey, question? Do you have anymore Anzu bashing planned for this story? I miss Marik insulting her! *grin*
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  • From ANON - Jade on March 08, 2004
    ::hugging seto, hayden and mokuba:: Joey's gonna be ok right?
    YJ:drinking..echk...::hugs the boys as well::
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  • From ANON - Shini Strife on March 08, 2004
    Hey! Long time no.. erm... me reviewing? ^_^;; Gomen! I've been so busy with my first year of high school to review. I've been able to read your stories lately though. Every single chapter in this story that I have never reviewed for has been great, including all lemons. I'm a bit sad about Jonouchi-kun and Malik-kun. I hope everything turns out all right in the end, but the story has been excellent! Hm.... So I'm guessing Malik must live and get back together with Marik from your so far sequel sneak peak thingy... Wish I knew more, but I do have an idea of what you could add. You know how you said 'virus' it just kindof clicked since I've been watching YGO on WB every Saturday and we're still in the Noa arc. But I was thinking that the person who created the viruses was Noa and have him come back. I've been thinking on writing a Seto x Jou fiction were Noa comes back and tries to ruin the lifes of those who battled in his world and who had any type of relation ship with them. It could explain Nao's hatered for the Yami's since Yami helped cause his downfall. Thus Noa tries to get rid of the spirit, unleashing a virus that some how can effect the other two as well. *shrugs* It's just my idea, nothing big. But can't wait for the next chapter! You better hurry!! I get spring break this weekend and plan on reading those chapters. Damn spring break...¬¬ Only Friday...helpless little thing. Hehe, oh well. Ja ne for now Bakuragirl-sama!!
    ~Shini
    P.s. This is formely Heather-chan here! Everyone calls me Shini now... Damn best friend's boyfriend made me a nick name from that... ShiShi. *shudders* Better then Shininess I guess(What two idiotic friends call me... they must die!).
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on March 08, 2004
    Yuji: Ohhhhh!!
    Yumi: Don't start.
    Yuji: But Joey's drinking and Seto's hurt about it! Malik's in a hospital and Marik is actinge a e a total jerk!
    Yumi: For good reasons. And on the bright side Hayden just hugged Seto if that isn't progress I don't know what is
    Yuji: Well...
    Yumi: We'll find out what happens in the next chap ok
    Yuji: UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on March 08, 2004
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    Wake me when it gets happy again!! LOL!

    Man....I knew a sequel was coming. Never had a doubt.
    So, now they know it was Aku in Joey, can they believe that it was Aku in Malik???

    Poor everyone!!!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - bakachibidfoxdfox on March 08, 2004
    "not all the naked, snarling, horny Ryou and Bakura plushhys" ay? well how about a naked, snarling, horny, kinky, sex craszed Ryou and Bakura? (not the plushys) will u surrender your secrets?
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  • From ANON - Crimson Lovers on March 08, 2004
    K: No... you can't just say that, we all KNOW how much you love you're naked horny Royu & Bakura plushies!! *holds up a naked horny Ryou plushie and then holds up a naked horny Bakura plushie* These ones are new, they interact with each other!!
    R: FOR THE LOVE OF RA, TELL US WHICH ONE GET'S THE VIRUS!! PLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASE!!!!
    K: *Holds up Aten* For Aten's sake????
    A: *puppy eyes* petty pease?
    K: WHO could say no to that face????????????
    R: TELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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  • From ANON - Terra on March 08, 2004
    You like to torture your readers. Give a hint like that and then clam up!?!?!? Evil!! Good chapter yet again and thanks for the Hayden hug; it was heart warming. Weird how characters can get under the skin, like that. Takes a good writer. I love the gritty reality of your and the wife's stories. Lover couldn't handle Hostile Takeover, too realistic for him with the child abuse stuff. But he loved the others. I have him hooked now. LOL
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