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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 08, 2004
    Man oh man, talk about going to hell in a handbasket. Poor Joey, I hope someone who cares about him finds him before an enemy does. As for ideas for hte sequel, gee I can't think of any right now but what you have so far seems good to me. Hee I don't have any rapid plushies so will you settle for cuddeling ones? *hands RxB plushies cuddeling together*
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  • From ANON - star on March 08, 2004
    hi I'm glad bakuras doing better and i hope marik will make up with milik or at leeasst figur out what has happen . Are you going to relesas yami to harrassse people agian. I wasss wonderiing what youuu haaave agiast the the poor mean pharoh just kidding.Will he eveeer get back into tere good gracees im just curious he probaly dosent care and nether do they.. see ya.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 08, 2004
    I'm glad to see Hayden relaxing a little around Seto:-) That Joey can drink though! WOW! An entire bottle of Jack and he was still walking! He'd better stay out off Wisconsin! There's gotta be a 5:1 ratio of drunks and non drinkers here. Infact, our own Attorny General got picked up on a DUI within the past two weeks! Toch tch temptation here........LOL

    If I think of any sequel ideas, I'll let you know. Sorting through the ideas in my busy mind takes a little time. LOL
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on March 08, 2004
    DD: Poor Seto and Hayden.
    YD: *is busy hooking Tris up to the coffee pot*
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  • From ANON - Jade on March 08, 2004
    O.O.........ack, aria and aten gonna be ok??????????????????
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on March 07, 2004
    Yuji: Oh god! Poor Seto!! ;_; MALIK!! ARIA!! JOEY!!!!
    Yumi: *Covers ears* Fuck, Hikari shut up!
    Yuji: But...But...Oh god!!
    Yumi: I know It's all so sad. Aria is about to die, Malik is about to die, Joey is being controlled, Seto is heartbroken, and Aten is watching
    Yuji: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!
    Yumi: FUCK!! HIKARI SHUT UP!!!!
    Yuji: But...
    Yumi: Just ask for more
    Yuji: Please!! More as soon as you can!
    Yumi: UPDATE!
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  • From ANON - Dragondre Yam Yami Dragon on March 07, 2004
    DD: *is too busy crying to say a word*
    YD: I have only one thing to say..........FUCK!
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  • From ANON - kaikocat2x@aol.com on March 07, 2004
    omg you killed aria!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on March 07, 2004
    ooohhh...sppooooky....hope Malik lives...it would be so sad if he dies....
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 07, 2004
    Of course you're loved!! ^^ Oh man, after this those families are gonna have alot of counseling to go through. Oh please update I'll give you anything I have!!
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  • From ANON - Terra on March 07, 2004
    I hope you can duck b-girl!! Here come the rotten tomatoes!! Cliffhangers are SOO evil!! I'm the type of person who reads the last chapter of a book first to see how it ends and you and your wife are KILLING me with these cliffhangers!!! It is bad enough to have to wait for updates as it is. I'm also impatient, can you tell? Anwayy, thanks for the compliment. I just call 'em like I see 'em. Some writers view certain topics/situations as taboo (child abuse/neglect/endangerment- multiple partner relationships) with their writing but you and your wife don't seem to be uncomfortable with writing things like that in your stories. Good job yet again with this chapter. Oh and the lover requests more lemons, he discovered the reason for the impromptu glompings while he was trying to work. Can't wait til the updates!!!!
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar ä on January 22, 1920
    EEEK! Evil cliffie!!!!!!! I know you arn't going to let Malik or Aria die, but Im dying to see how they get out of this! LOL
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  • From ANON - Whisper Chan on March 06, 2004
    O_______________O No! MALIK! ; . ; Well you did say you had more in store for him...and you also said you wouldn't kill him off so I'll b ok...I think..^_^ Good chappie! It was a definate tear jerker! ^_^ We won't kill you....if we did, there wouldn't b no story....This is probably the best fanfic I've read! ^_^ It's great. So manny cliffies, tearjerkers, lots of suspense. * sips Tim Horton's coffee..* mmm..coffee....^_^ Well keep up the good work. Soon they will catch Aku...soon....
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on March 06, 2004
    nooo...malik! poor thing..oh...some one call the hospital, we have a sick hikari here. good chappy great_bakurasgirl
    cant wait to find out what happens
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  • From ANON - Terra on March 06, 2004
    I did it!! I finally finished all your stuff!! (At the recommendation of DDYD-'If you want a Bakure/Ryou lemon read bakurasgirl's stuff.) I must say I cried (literally), I laughed so hard I fell in the floor, I had to stop and glomp the lover a time or two ( he didn't know why but he wasn't complaining), and I wanted to pelt you with rotten vegetables a few times!! (Some of those things just shouldn't be done to sweet delicious Ryou!) ANyway, I would really like to see Hayden and Aten warm up to their fathers again. Will that happen? Things are so messed up for these poor characters they must live in the antidepressant bottle.
    Keep it up!! You are doing such a good job with twists and turns and having the completely unforseen pop up.
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