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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on February 25, 2004
    Arrghhh!! I disappear to BFE Minnesota where there are no computers to check up on this and all hell has broken out once again. Wonderful couple of chappies. Caffinated Chibi was cute. Damn, Malik doesn't even really know what's going on. Damn!! Update really really soon!! Poor Ryou!! *squishes entire cast of charaters (the good guys, not Steven or Aku. Locks them in room with Anzu)*

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on February 25, 2004
    DD: Tris' reaction to the coffe thing sounded rather...familiar.
    YD: *rolls eyes*
    DD: Otogi is obviously a woman.
    YD: Yeah! Aten's not afraid of him!
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  • From ANON - Isawa16 on February 25, 2004
    Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! I LOVE IT!!! ^-^ funny chapter! I love the coffee beans part! That was so funny! ^-^
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  • From ANON - star on February 25, 2004
    Poor malikk when are theygoing to find out its been aku all along? Sso who hass the mill rod if maarik dosn't he should get it back from malik .. this is a good storii keep up teh good work..
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 25, 2004
    Poor--EVERYONE!! Man, please tell me hte ending will be a happy one? But thanks to that little preivew of the next chapter I can't wait!! Robbie is jsut adorable! There should be more people like him.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on February 25, 2004
    That chapter still has me laughing!!! Aten ania ria remind me so much of my own to kids; My son is the smaller, weaker, quieter one, and my daughter is tall, tough and wild as hell! LOL. The scenes between Otogi and Tristan are SO funny too, I love how they converse!
    The scene between Ryou and Seto was very touching. I hope Joey makes it out of this okay.......for Seto's sake.
    As for Bakura collapsing in the next chapter, I bet it's because of something to do with Aria, LOL! That girl is FULL of surprises! I love it!

    Super-duper chappie! Can't wait for tomorrows update!!!!
    Caroline
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on February 24, 2004
    Yuji: Why'd Joey do that?! He knows it wasn't Seto. He just has to know!
    Yumi: He's hurt and vulnerable Hikari
    Yuji: And what about Malik and Marik?!
    Yumi: They'll be fine. Aku has to leave sometime
    Yuji: Please more!! We want more. We want more!
    Yumi: UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Whisper-Chan on February 24, 2004
    Aww....2 bad. I thought it woulda been so adorable. ^_^ but tiz your story. Anzu bashing IS fun ^^ poor Malik..;.; Great chappie, once again! I miss Baku-chan ;.; well, keep it up. update tomorrow !? ^_^ yay! hope u enjoyed u'r candy

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  • From ANON - ssjgoddesschico on February 24, 2004
    Sorry if I don't get the chance to review every chapter.

    Lol, Aria + coffee is not good..
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Drag ä on January 22, 1920
    DD: *sobs* Poor Seto!
    YD: Alright Joseph! Get a grip! I mean...come on! This is SETO!!
    DD: Damn Aku
    YD: When are you going to let me kill him?
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  • From ANON - star on February 24, 2004
    hi great chaapter i know im proballly repeating my sself .So you aare going to let bakura out soon aactualy i realy wanted to ask somthing thaat dosn't go with this storbut shadows of the past aare you going to up date that one so9on . and so did yami rape bakura back then or justmake him a temp ssex sllaaave that would be neaat if you did that ffor awhile in conditions on leting him go. thanks .
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 24, 2004
    Oh man poor Joey and Hayden and Seto. With Malik/Aku back things can so not be good! Aria gets into coffee? Isn't she hyper enough?? But, it will be cute to see her on a caffine rush if kinda dangerous. Bakura is gonna be out soon? Odds are you're gonnae a e a sexy reunion asap right? *small grin* Can't wait!
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  • From ANON - Isawa16 on February 24, 2004
    ^-^ man, that must suck not being able to use your computer. I know that has happened a couple times, and my mom didn't know how to fix it so I just went out and bought my own. But any way, I love the new chapter! Aku is really pissing me off though, and poor Malik! He is so confused! T_T it's not fun to be confused. Well, can't wait to see the next chapter! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on February 23, 2004
    Thank goodness you're okay! You had us reviewers worried! I hate snow. We got dumped on bigtime here by me too. (20 inches or so, yuck! The snow banks are higher than my house in some places! Now we got about 5 feet of the white crap, grrrrrrrr)
    Okay, time to review now. I feel bad for like EVERYBODY! (Well, 'cept for Aku, but he doesn't count, he just sucks and I hate him) Will Bakura ever get out of the ring? His sexiness, oops, I mean Ryou needs him!!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 23, 2004
    Wow that is alot of snow! Mind sending some this way? ^^ This chapter, ooh I'm on the edge of my seat! Least marik is up and about but what's gonna happen next? Ooh I love your story so much! Can't wait for tomorrow.
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