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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on February 23, 2004
    YD: AKU'S BACK!
    DD: RUN ATEN!!
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  • From ANON - Isawa16 on February 23, 2004
    Heh ^-^ I love this chapter. I really do hope you update tomorrow! You said this chapter would be up friday, and it wasn't. (Hmm...hope that didn't sound rude.....) but oh well, at least it's up. ^-^ that's all that matters. Can't wait to see what happens next! ja ne
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on February 23, 2004
    Hey girl-everything okay? I noticed you said you were going to update Friday and well, no update. I noticed you wern't online too......I hope nothing bad has happened! Keep in touch!
    Caroline
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  • From ANON - star on February 22, 2004
    So is yami ever going to lightin up hes loseing all his freinds becuase hes being a jerk he should at leas t take bakura out to defend hiim self Are they ever going to make uup I no i ask this two sequals ago but i was just wonderiing . Ii hoope you do make bakura work alittle bit to work his so called crime off . yaami could have also given them time to say good bye or tell them to say there good byes becauees the time was up even modern jails do that . I had a boyfriend who would end up ther because he woundt pay his tickedts any way good story ./
    pss I hoope every thing is ok . you ssaid you were up dating friday . I now things happen i was just wondering
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  • From ANON - bad yami on February 22, 2004
    are you ok you said fridday sorry to be so impaient
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  • From ANON - unknown on February 22, 2004
    ne, it's past friday. So where is the update????? Just wondering.
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  • From ANON - jenn on February 22, 2004
    are you ever going to upsate it?? you said friday and its sunday now! i am mad now i am waiting to see what happens and someone lies about when they are going to update!
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  • From ANON - ssjgoddesschico on February 17, 2004
    “I hope you enjoy it, Yami, because it’s the only meat and balls you’ll be getting for quite a while,”

    HAHAHAHA!


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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on February 17, 2004
    Wait...update on Friday??? Argh!! I hope you update before I leave for Minnesota!!! I'll be gone a whole week, so no more chappies for me till I get back.. Why do I suddenly feel like the world( this stories anyway) is going to hell in a handbasket while Igonegone??????


    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on February 17, 2004
    Holey shit. After all he went thru he comes home to this....poor !! !! Wow! Yugi needs to beat some sense into Yami. It should not be tlacelace of a child to show an adult how to behave. Heh, the only meat and balls he'll get for awhile.. why don't I see that lasting very long?? And not by Yugi's choice either. And it's about time Marik starts getting his ass together. And if the Dark Magician c sen sense Seto and Aten, why couldn't he sense Steven??? Was it due to the curse???


    Updates are good!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - star on February 17, 2004
    Yami is bbeing a jerk but at least he let Ryou se bakura but he could ad leest tell him tl sy his good buys because the time was up and to say your good byes . Snfd Yugi is right Yami isn't being fare and he isn't in aceint eygpt any more and thats not how we do things now you are at least able to defend himself theres alot rwrong with the ancient ways they never let you defend your self ght ght or wrong .if im right . I like anient history i think they all think the same still even if the the religion is differandt something i notice i might be wrong .I know you probally think im crazy i just like to share my thoughts .see yagood story you always keep it interestiing.
    star .
    ps thats was funny thoou the only meaat and bayouryour going to get . yes no sex until you lighten up I hope that makees yami back down alttle probaly not though.
    star
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on February 17, 2004
    Yuji: Poor Ryou...Poor Seto....Poor Hayden......Poor Joey ;_;
    Yumi: Seto's not poor he's the richest of them all!
    Yuji: So much pain...so much hurting
    Yumi: I think Seto's a little hurt hng hng his pup say don't touch him
    Yuji: But Hayden is so scared
    Yumi: Hey he stood up to Seto. To me I think that's an improvement
    Yuji: well....what about Marik
    Yumi: He got up and said he loves his kid
    Yuji: Yami
    Yumi: Forever a fucking asshole son of a bitch and the only meat and balls he's getting for a while is Meatballs (I thought that was very funny! ^_^)
    Yuji: You win
    Yumi: I always do
    Yuji: No you don't.
    Yumi: Whatever.
    Yuji: ^_^ Another great chap!! I loved it!
    Yumi: UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 17, 2004
    Oh by the Love of Anubis... Poor Joey and Hayden. And Seto!! Yugi, hee I knew there was soemthing else I liked about him and Yami can go f*ck himself with a rusted, spike covered club untilbleebleeds to death and have Amut devour his soul for all eternity. The Loving Servant and Helpless Child are cute. Next update not til Friday? Rats but oh well, I can't wait! ^^
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on February 17, 2004
    *sniff* OMG! Everyone is breaking up, things are going to hell and you're making me so emotional over this! That's hard to do. Just let everyone get back to normal. I think they've been through enough.
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  • From ANON - Isawa16 on February 17, 2004
    T_T that was a sad ending to the chapter. and I can't wait until Aria will get back at Yami for every thing he is doing to that family!
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