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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on February 17, 2004
    So much emotion in this chapter! I loved it! The part where Marik finally got off his ass and helped Ryou with Aten was so sweet. I loved how Ryou bitched him out first though! Rock on Ryou! Now I feel sad for Seto! The poor guy gets stuck in the Shadow Realm for god knows how long and when he comes back, everybody but his brother is running away from him! What a way to say welcome back! LOL. Great chapter, great fic.
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on February 17, 2004
    YD: DAMN!
    DD: OO
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 16, 2004
    *fumes angrily* That... stupid... Ra-damned... heartless... *curses a storm for a while* Okay I got that outta my system for now. Sorry for so many question I had a handful of chocolates and I was in hyper mode. Okay for this chapter It was tender ands weet... but then asshole had to ruin it. Man they weren't kidding when they said love is blind! Awaiting the next chapter and thanks for answering my questions ^.~ Oh and happy belated V-Day!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on February 16, 2004
    *goes back in time and digs Yami's black heart out with a spoon* Why a spoon?? Because it hurts more!!!!!! Ra-damned Asshole!! Gods, Someone needs to put him in his place, and soon. *hugs Ryou*


    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on February 16, 2004
    Yuji: Oh god I feel so bad for Ryou and Bakura ;_; That was so sad and yet so beautifully sweet
    Yumi: Yami is such a fucking Jackass!!
    Yuji: *Nods in total agreement*
    Yumi: Man If I could I would just love to trap Yami in the sennen puzzle and keep him there! I'm sure Yugi wouldn't mind!
    Yuji: True so true! Well another great job!! Talk to ya lata!
    Yumi: UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - Isawa16 on February 16, 2004
    That's good ^-^ I'm glad they become a couple.........now about Yami. What an ASSHOLE!!!! I have never hated Yami so much! I never knew someone could make him seem so hartless, and make it believible. You have done a wonderful job with that ^-^ But it still pisses me off what he is doing to Ryou and the kids. AND BAKURA !!! If I had the puzzle right now I would take it and destroy it and see how Yami liked it being trapped in that damn thing again. ^-^
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  • From ANON - D-chan on February 16, 2004
    An apology for what?! Mrr...someone should take one of the pieces from the Puzzle and remind Yami what it's like to be stuck in a soulroom. Bastard.

    Nitpicky grammar thing: 'Otogi stayed with Aten and I' should be 'Otogi stayed with Aten and me.' You wouldn't say 'Otogi stayed with I;' it's not grammatical. Otogi stayed with Aten + Otogi stayed with me= Otogi stayed with Aten and me.

    ~D-too much Advanced Linguistics for her own good-chan

    But I did make a 93 on our 1st LING exam! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Camille on February 16, 2004
    If Yami doesn't let Bakura out of the ring, I am going to have Foamy the Squirrel decapitate him with a fast flying acorn! Poor Ryou!
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on February 13, 2004
    Yuji: Awww!
    Yumi: Damn that's gotta hurt
    Yuji: So cute
    Yumi: Hikari that's the first of many kisses
    Yuji: I know but still the firsts are the cutest
    Yumi: right another great and
    Yuji: CUTE!! Chap.
    Yumi: UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 13, 2004
    OMG that is just too cute!!! Hee naked chibi on the loose! Man kids are the greatest. But now that Ryou and Bakura know that Steven is back waht's gonna happen? Will Aten ever be alright? Will Mr. Cullen ever come back to teaching? Will Marik get out of bed and talk to his son? Will Steven and Aku be punished for good? Will Ryou forgive his deck? Will Yugi talk to Yami? Will Yami continue to be such a @#$%&? Will Malik ever be free? Will Seto be free? Will Joey and Hayden be alright? Will Tristen and Duke have kids oeir eir own? *blinks* Whoops went overboard there. Um have fun answering these questions, bye!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on February 13, 2004
    So cute!!! Aten and Robbie are too much! Damn. There will be hell to pay when Bakura gets out. This is twice now that he has lied to Ryou, yes to protect him, but still, he lied. *growls softly* Steven will die again. Over and over and over and......


    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Isawa16 on February 13, 2004
    Awwwwww KAWAII CHIBI'S!!!!!! ^-^ I really liked that chapter! a small brake from all the torture! And I know they are only kids, but Aten and Robbie have to grow up as a couple ^-^ They would be so CUTE togeather!!! ^-^ any way can't wait to read the next chapter! ja ne!!!!!
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on February 12, 2004
    Yuji: Please don't hurt Aten anymore. Being tattoed mine is enough
    Yumi: That's thing is going to scar him for life
    Yuji: God poor Aten *Sniffles*
    Yumi: It's ok Hikari. Hey look at the bright side. At least Aten's alive
    Yuji: Yami I don't even want to think of Aten being died!
    Yumi: Just think of that as a sign of it being great yet so sad
    Yuji: PLease bring the other chap
    Yumi: UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 12, 2004
    Aten's back oh thank you Ra!! But the Angel of Change of Heart has a point but then again so does the Devil--oh forget it! That explains how the clothes were found but oh jezus. I hope whoever this visitor is can help Aten heal that last thing he needs is to have Anzu come in and gives the poor thing a heart attack! I'll give you anything I can for you to update and finish this saga! Look I'm nearly in tears! Waiting for tomorrow to hurry and come.
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on February 11, 2004
    Usually this would be the point where i would bitch at you for causing my charectes pain... but this is an exception. That chapter brought a strange sense of de ja vu since i uses the EXACT same lyrics in the chapter i wrote yesterday for another story. ^___________^ Me likey evanescence.
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