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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - light on April 17, 2004
    cool storie im nree but what is mind crushing? if that means he will steal live and be in acoma . and would yami do that so Bakraa would stay out of the room and woould yakmi use that chance to make him his bbbed slave agian jusst wondering thatnks
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  • From ANON - Elffs light on April 17, 2004
    Thanks for answering . Seto is a reeeal cool guy too replace althat stuff for them . Wo is yami going to get away with what he did ca the they tell Seto .

    abput my lasst post I jusst thought that yami is like one of thosse people like at work or at home who like to manuplate people . buy forcing people to have wex with hem or them. i think this is what i want to saay . he seems the type to threatin them to get what he wants . thanks again I can't wwait for the sequal.
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on April 17, 2004
    interesting, i cant wait to see how you write that '12 yrs in to the future' thing, very tasty lemon by way way^^
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 17, 2004
    Awww...too cute!! *snuggles Aria and Aten.* Wow!! Lemons are good!! Weee!! Flashforward, please tell me that Aku isn't going to ....HER. You know. That is just *toooo* scary!!!

    Lady Elf
    Lad
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  • From ANON - Terra on April 17, 2004
    Such a sweet loving going on in one room and a kinky one in the other. LOL Sounds like normal for those 4 to me. Yeah!! Sequel!!
    (deep sigh) need more popcnow.now. Keep going can't wait!!
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  • From ANON - SweetMisery on April 17, 2004
    great lemon, did Joey paint the toy boxes himself? This is the longest sotry you've written...it looks impossible to do, how do you find time to write?
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on April 17, 2004
    *giggles* Well things do seem to be back in the swing of things. Maybe Seto can sound-proof the rooms as a gift for them. The flash-forward deal sounds like a good plan. No offense but right now, everything seems mas o menos. Besides, I can't wait to see how the kids are after twelve years. That'll make them, what? 18 or something? Wouldn't that put them in their final year of high school? Ahh well I can't wait. Laterz!
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  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 16, 2004
    Hun, I seemed to have reviewed you under the name Dragon Pearl instead of Dragon Tears. Oh well. Did you know that Bakura's real name is Touzoukou-ou Bakura? I CANNOT pronounce it for the life of me...
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  • From ANON - Dragon Pearl on April 16, 2004
    Dragon Pearl: Oh for Pete's sake! Doesn't that guy ever quit?
    Brain: Would YOU quit if you were defeated and himiluated?
    Dragon Pearl: Ehehehe... guess not...
    Brain: Oh, and I think you should know that you have officially turned my body in to a hentai.
    Dragon Pearl: *could be heard muttering in a corner* Rod...rod...
    Brain: *exasperated* I don't think you'd believe me if i told you how little she is...
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  • From ANON - sean on April 15, 2004
    this has to be the best story i ever read in my whole life so far !!!!! i think aria has to kick yamis ass again but this time more
    painful then befor . i also think that aria should claim yamis god card and then tease him wit it.
    by :sean
    p.s luv u and ur story. plz make the sequel quickly!!!!! and can we kill anuz allready she is an asshole!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on April 15, 2004
    Took me awhile but I fianlly caught up on this story. Love it. Now am ready for the next chapter. Yami is a jerk, I love the foursome. I hope Joye is ok and Hayden doesn't start to pull away from him. Great job.
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  • From ANON - Chaos Queen on April 15, 2004
    Aku has his own ring? Interesting!
    *huggles Aten and Robbie*
    so adorable!
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on April 15, 2004
    ooo, that was creepy, porr marik and Bakura... and marik was being a meany pant, he houldn't be mad at poor aten like that...
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 15, 2004
    Oy, except for the Latin translation and the end, that was just an adorable chappie!! Heh, Bakura sounds like my husband, even though we have a son. LOLOL! If I were Marik and Bakura, I wouldn't believe Steven either, but I feel more like Ryou and Malik. And I had a feeling that them not finding, nor caring about not finding, that ring would come back to haunt them. Just not that soon. 12 years is still too soon. So, any ideas on how many chappies this one has left before the sequel?? Just checking.

    LEMON IS GOOD!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Terra on April 15, 2004
    Aren't childern wonderful in their innocence. I can understand Marik's reaction and GO MOMS!!! They are so right the worse thing to do is freak when kids explore. now, BRING ON THE LEMON!! (not to self buy more popcorn)
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