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By : Aten

From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on February 02, 2004
YD: *squishes Aten* you're so damn cute!!
DD: Hayden's really come a long way. Good for Joey. It's not easy to have patience sometimes.
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 02, 2004
Aah Kodac moment! Too cute and the deal with Aria sucking her thumb, he now I know why kids suck their thumbs. Really sweet; waiting anxiously for the nexstalstallment!
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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on February 02, 2004
**Taps fingers on desk** hmm...Seto.....what could Aku have done with him......wherever he is, Unkie Puppy better start lookin for him!

Aten is so cute! *squishes Aten*

Great chapter!
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From ANON - star on February 02, 2004
hi thanks for answering . This chapter was emotional . You know your ancient eygpt history pretty well . ive been studing it for awhile its fsinating . IFrom what i have read The punish sieverly for robingbs bs . . They were harsh back then and they still are in the middle east in most places .
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on February 01, 2004
Woah!! Gone for a few days and all hell breaks loose whilst I am gone!!! Totally awesome chappies!! Damn! Yami is pretty bad and sadistic in the manga, and the very 1st set of anime eps that were never shown here. This really rocks!! *squishes Bakura plushie* Poor chibi Aria. * hands Bakura plushie over to Aria* You need this more than I do, chibi. Wish it was your daddy. Can't wait for tommorow!!

Lady Elfskye
*runs off singing "Tomorrow"*
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From ANON - IYYashi on February 01, 2004
Yumi: YAAAYYYY!! I'M RIGHT!!
Yuji: So? Anyone could've guessed in time. What I want to know is wgat is so kingking about Aten?
Yumi: I bet it's about Robbie
Yuji: You're obsessed
Yumi: So?
Yuji: Argh!! Can't you care about something else like Bakura...or...or ARIA! I mean for crying out loud she's sick and misses her daddy!!
Yumi: I do care. I just... well you know me
Yuji: say sorry
Yumi: *Sigh* how about something better? This was one again another wonderful chap. It's good that Joey got so well complimented and good comedy that a 3 year old boy got praised by highly artistic people from a museum.
Yuji: UPDATE!!
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From ANON - ssjgoddesschico on February 01, 2004
Oh no, what's up with Aten?
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From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on February 01, 2004
EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But that whole scene with Aten suckin on Otogi was hillarious! I wish i could... *evil grin* never mind.
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From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on February 01, 2004
OMG! Evilffieffie!! Evil Yami! Let Bakura go! His child needs him!!
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on February 01, 2004
Ahh cliffhanger! *has heart attack* Hee j/k but talk about your suspense! Waiting for the enxt cahpter. Oh eyah, you know it's about time yami actually be shone that he's not perfect. Usually it's Bakura/Marik teh evil one adn Yamit he saint but this is more unique. You are such a talent writer! Mind if I borrow some of your creative talents?
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From ANON - Marikishtar77 on February 01, 2004
I LOVE how Ryou told "Auntie Yami" off! Bakura was SO right, Yami's a big ASS. *extends middle finger at Yami with a glare*
I'm eager to find out what Aku did with Seto.......all I can do is hope he didn't kill him!
Wicked chappie! You should write professionally, you're just too good at this!
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From ANON - ssjgoddesschico on February 01, 2004
Sorry I took so long to review!

POOR YUGI! I hope he'll be ok. And evil Aku for doing all those things!
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From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on January 31, 2004
Now that i;m in my correct state of mind i will give you a legibal review which doesn't contain any profanity of me fainting.

WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

What did they do to you that makes you torture them so freakin much?

Huzzah. ANYWAYZ! I meant to comment on this earlier but i was... *distracted* by other things. I think that Aria is beggining to rub off on my good side, which happens to be a very good side to be on. BUT, if she hurts my babies, primarily by attacking the with "swords", i will not hesitate to kick the little chibi's ass. : D

Ass is not profanity.
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From ANON - IYYashi on January 31, 2004
Yuji: That is soooo cute! Robbie and Aten are such adoreable babies
Yumi: Come on it just has to be Robbie. It just has to be.
Yuji: It doesn't have to be.
Yumi: But...I can't believe I'm saying this...That was a cute couple moment as children
Yuji: Hey Robbie could move or something you never know. Aten is still way to young to have a lover and a lot can happen before he is ready.
Yumi: i know but come on!!
Yuji: *Sigh* Yami give it up and be patient!
Yumi: No!
Yuji: Poor Aria was really scared. Wow. I feel sorry for her, Ryou and Bakura. I hope everything turns out ok. Well I can't wait for your next update. I guess I'll see you tomorrow.
Yumi: UPDATE!!!!

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From ANON - Adrie on January 31, 2004
I finally found out how to review, YES! Thank you.
-^^- Enough of that.

I've been reading this story from the beginning without readint the prequels and I got very confused (I'm not now) but it's so good! I love the story, I love your writing! ^^ See, I normally HATE any story with kids or whatever but Aten is sooo cute and Bakura loves Aria so much. ^_^ You're just pulling it off so well. Boor Baku-sama.. :( I know Yami is hurt and thinks that Bakura did it, but I think Bakura should have an allaby or something, or Ryou could tell Yami. I'm not sure. Poor Yugi-kun too.. And Seto! (My absolute favorite) Poor Seto-chan.. And Malik. I will personally KILL Aku for ever doing this to Malik-chan. Hmph!
And if he EVER touches Ryou... GRRRR Bakura is the least of his problems!

Wonderful story! ^^

(Hugs Marik)
S'ok..

Can't wait until tomorrow! ^________^
You rule!

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