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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Marikishtar77 on January 26, 2004
    Holy Crap! THAT WAS AWESOME! So what if it was gorey! KICKASS CHAPPIE!
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on January 26, 2004
    YD: Damn it!
    DD: *sobs* Oh, gods...
    YD: Dragon no like.
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on January 25, 2004
    Yuji: Oh god!! Aria!! Sticky book? How can you do that!!!??
    Yumi: Can I guess that Aten's partner might and I'm only saying might be a guy? Or even Robbie? I'm just guessing.
    Yuji: Poor Aten he seems so scared.
    Yumi: Can't wait for your next update
    Yuji: Please hurry?
    Yumi: UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on January 25, 2004
    Wonderful chappie!! Oy, Poor 'Kura!! *squishes Aria* Too cute!!! I feel for Ryou. Miranda seems like a wonderful woman! Aten and Robbie are soo coolies together!! *pulls Aten and Robbie into squishies* Damn that Aku!! OK, Chappie 25 is next. *Steels self* I am ready.


    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 25, 2004
    Hee I like Miranda she's so nice and understanding ^^ and Robbie is adorable! Wish kids had his sweet attitude ^^ The cards you mentioned, sweet but for the possessed Malik, well... I want to hit him but I know it's Aku so I really jsut want to shaek him like a rag doll until Aku falls out bu I know you ahev soemthing planned. And about that sticky book... please tell me Aria washed ehr hands? >.< But oveall good, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on January 25, 2004
    YD: When do I get to kill Aku? Huh?
    DD: Robbie's SO cute! "Mr. Aten's mom". Gods! That's SO 3 year old!!
    YD: Aria needs to wash her hands!
    DD: With sandpaper!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 25, 2004
    Hee take that you asshole!! Hee probably crapped his pants too ^^ But I am so jealous of Aria!! I can actaully picture the chibi yami and the Nightmare Dragon like how you described them, so kawaii!!! Oh yeah, i remember you said you were gonna make a saga/series of this, can't wait!! and I think Umi and Aria are jsut too much (in a good way). Hee teh monsters really love Aria to, their chibi princess yami. Hee hey ya go sweety *hnads over jumbo size bag of m&ms* Too sweet, I can't wait for the next chapter!! oh yeah, is there gonna be anymore anzu basking? she cracks me up ^^
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  • From ANON - Camille on January 24, 2004
    That was classic! Bakura teaching Aria how to hide a body!

    Bakura: Who has daddy's blood lust!

    Aria: I DO! I DO!!

    Ryou: BAKURA!!! STOP TEACHING HER THAT!!!
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on January 24, 2004
    Yashi: Are you going to do it slowly with every year or are you going to skip some years sometime?
    Yumi: What are you going to do to Malik?
    Yuji: What Aten? Manhood? Won't that hurt his heart?
    Yumi: What I want to know is he going to be like his mother and want to make love or be like his father and just want to fuck. I wonder
    Yuji: Why wonder now? He is still 2!!
    Yumi: What about Aria? Is she going to like a lot of guys too.
    Yuji: Well I can't wait for your update
    Yumi: UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on January 23, 2004
    Wow!! What a wonderfully horrible Dragon!!!! Seriously! Princess Aria is *well* protected!! Hmmm.... Thanks in advance for the warning. I'll have time to steal myself. Aria and Umi, Robbie and Aten!! Coolies!!!!!!!!!!


    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on January 23, 2004
    O.O...Now I don't know if I am going to want to read that chappie.......sure I am going to probably but they way you put it put me off. Hehe, Nightmare Dragon scared the Blue-Eyes. Never thought I'd see the day when the Blue-Eyes would turn to submission. I love how this is turning out now. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on January 23, 2004
    YD: AAAAWWWWWWW...Aria's got a dragon.
    DD: REBD following BEWD around like a puppy...too cute.
    YD: And you know, Bakura's right...never too early to teach her how to hide a body.
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  • From ANON - ssjgoddesschico on January 22, 2004
    Hi! Remember me? Hmm, prolly not. But anyway! I finally got time to read the rest of 'Watch Over Me' and this story. And I love it so much ^.^ It's so funny. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on January 21, 2004
    Yuji & Yumi: *Laughing hysterically* Omigod!! Puberty!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
    Yuji: Ok that was funny!!!
    Yumi: Man when Aria said "BAD TOUCH!" I thought um....Dirty bad touch. Not spanking bad touch
    Yuji: I'm glad Ryou forgave them. They were only trying to protect him.
    Yumi: Are Aria and Umi going to date at some point or something cause I don't know they seem to like each other
    Yuji: Oh god fabulous update please more
    Yumi: UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on January 21, 2004
    Freakin Barnes' will get theirs....Let Aria send them all to the Shadow Realm!!! Wow! Yep, they are in sooo much trouble when she hits puberty!!! LOL! Damn! Very, Very coolies chappie!!! Later girl!

    Lady Elfskye
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