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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 21, 2004
    JakalQueen: Oh that is it!! *grabs every spell book owns and starts looking for curses* I am gonna so place every curse I can find on that family!! Them and their descendants!!
    Me: *sighs* Meet my darker self but i call her JQ for short. While she's researching curses and the likes let me comment. Hee well that teacher did deserve it. isn't it illegal to spank children without parent's consent? Also, I don't rightly blame her. That ass of a bastard deserves to be sent to ShadShadow Realm. I hope he gets eaten bMan-Man-Eater bug.
    JakalQueen: He'll give the bug indisgestion!!
    Me: Good point... But I can jsut picture a teenage Aria sending a guy to the Shadow Realm for dumping her for...issyissy brat *cough* Rhonda! But Aria and Umi are jsut the cutest things!! Oh I ehard that you're gonna do a sequel to this, a saga if you will, are these two gonna hook up? I think they are jsut too adorable! Okay must go, bye!
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on January 21, 2004
    DD: Hmfp...damn teacher. Jerk.
    YD: *huggles Bakurasgirl* You're REALLY doing our boy some justice, hun.
    DD: Tris is so funny in this story.
    YD:AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!! Gotta run!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - PharaohYPrinPrincess on January 21, 2004
    O.O I can't believe that Williams and Callisto were doing anything like that! That is so evil! At least Williams is gone now. I swear I would have smacked the living shit out of him if he stayed much longer and kept doing what he did to all the chibis.
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on January 21, 2004
    I just knew it was gonna backfire not telling Ryou about that. Gods, those two are in soooooo much trouble! Wonderful chappie as usual!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on January 20, 2004
    Wow! That was a powerful chapter! Excellent work! oh yeah.....tell your wife Happy Birthday from me!
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on January 19, 2004
    Yuji: Whhaaaa!! ;_;!! Poor Aten!!
    Yumi: Dammit Stephen is becoming more of a sick bastard every time I read about this.
    Yuji: Why does he do this? Over and over again. He says that he doesn't like gays then why do it to his own son and grandson?
    Yumi: Yeah! True. He is some incest gay freak!!!
    Yuji: I hate him!!!
    Yumi: UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 19, 2004
    *blows nose* Well, can't say that's I'm surprised and the guys did deserve that. Ryou's the kids' mother and deserves to know. There is no anger known as a mother's rage... or something along those lines. Happy early B-Day to your wife and hope all her wishes come true ^^
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on January 19, 2004
    Aww. I forgot completly that Ryou didn't know. *huggles Ryou* Poor baby.
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on January 19, 2004
    DD: *hugs Aten*
    YD: *goes to look for Steven so she can kill him again*
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on January 19, 2004
    Go Ryou! He had all right to do what he did to Marik and ra. ra. , ev, even I think they're very wrong for not telling Ryou about this. I know they had good intentions but still. Oh, Happy Birthday to DDYD. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on January 18, 2004
    Woah, so not cool! He can assume different forms now??? Oy, they are in so much trouble. Yeah, I know it's gonna be awhile before he gets caught. Damn! Great chappie as always!! Update soon!!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on January 18, 2004
    Yuji: You are being so mean! I still love this. A lot! Your fics are great! But you are always so mean! To Ryou too. That is terrible! Traumatize someone else for once! Ryou has been through enough!!
    Yumi: Wow, Hikari. A lot of anger don't you think?
    Yuji: But that's terrible to do to poor Ryou. as bas been through enough don't you think?
    Yumi: Yes but it's more fun to see on the scared ones
    Yuji: YAMI!!
    Yumi: *Ignores Hikari* Oh I didn't know Aten has a violent side! Wow! That was unexpected! Him biting his daddy. I'm supr tha that wasn't Aria instead.
    Yuji: Ok well continue. C u next time
    Yumi: UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on January 18, 2004
    Cha... Chapter 25? Wha-Whats's goin on in Chr 25r 25??? And why is it you diverted your attention from Malik just to torture ryou. That's like you kickin me in the head instead of the stomach. ANYWAYZ! What's happening in Chapter 25. HURRY UP AND GET TO CHAPTER 25! *small voice* i want it over with.
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on January 18, 2004
    *hugs Ryou and strokes his hair* I can't believe you did that to him! Granted it's probably plot worthy, but it's still mean! Aku must die. I hate him kmore and more every chappie.
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 18, 2004
    Chocolate covered Ryou huh? Can I have one of seto instead? *sick grin* but poor family! man you hav a talent for creating the worst villians ever!
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