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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten

From ANON - gralnak on January 07, 2004
Damn You Aku!
Turning Malik into such a ac!!ac!!!
:(GRALNAK
YamiGralnak:When I get my hands on you Aku, Im going to rip yoart art into little pieces! and then send them to the Shadow Realm!!!
AHAHA!!!
Gralnak:o.o

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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on January 05, 2004
OK, That's it!! I am soo gonna kill Aku!! No hurt Aten!! That is just so not good!!! And I hafta wait till chappie 18 for bloodlust??? I already can't wait!!! Aku is a sadistic SOB!!! Ra Damn, Woman! Oh, you mentioned (or DD did...I forget) that you guys seen MJ. Is she OK?? Beside sick that is. I really liked her story and she hadn't updated in awhile...Tell her a fan said HI!! Well, update and I hope I have my computer back by then!

Lady Elfskye

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From ANON - IYYashi on January 05, 2004
Yuji: Aku is sick!
Yumi: How can he say that to poor little Aten!
Yuji: Man, next time can you actually kill Aku
Yuji: So update quickly bye!
Yumi: UPDATE!
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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on January 05, 2004
Grrrrr.....Aku has got to be one the most aberrant characters I've ever read about. He's so mean! Poor little Aten!
*gives Aku the evil eye*
As for Marik......hang on a second while I grab my drool bucket...... for some reason I found him really sexy when he's drunk!
*smacks self up side the head*
Great Chapter!
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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on January 05, 2004
YD: FIVE MINUTES!! All I need is FIVE MINUTESne ine in a soul room with Aku. Just me, him and a little pointy knife!
DD: Go, Dragon!! *cuddles extra Aten plushie* Poor baby. Don't listen to Aku. Your daddy loves you.
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From ANON - gralnak on January 04, 2004
IM ALIVE!
what is going on with this Mrs. Callisto?
and what about this new teacher?
does Mrs. Barnes have something to do with him?
Im scared....
:{gralnak
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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on January 03, 2004
Wow! e the the predicament! Marik should have sent those Oldfield's to the Shadow Realm, no questions ask. And that Eric kid too! Great writing! Keep it up!
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From ANON - IYYashi on January 02, 2004
Yuji: Man I really think Eric should be sent to the Shadow Realm
Yumi: Really? I think Mr. William should. I mean how the fuck did he become a teacher?
Yuji: I can't believe that Rhonda is realated to Tristan.
Yumi: Poor Aria and Aten though. He is completely scared and Aria got hurt too.
Yuji: But we got to find out that Umi has a cute little crush on Aria
Yumi: True but Bakura takes a little crush into a lust thing
Yuji: They're only 3!!!
Yumi: Yeah but Bakura doesn't care I guess. His imagination takes over when it comes to his daughter
Yuji: Well bakurasgirl we can't wait until you update
Yumi: SO UPDATE!!!
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From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dr"� � on January 02, 2004
YD: AAAAAAWWWWWWW!!!! Umi's sweet on Aria!
DD: Sounds like Otogi is too.
YD: Those idiots are lucky Marik only growled at them! I would have disembowled them!
DD: Ewww.
YD: *squishes Aten plushie* Thanks, babe!
DD: HEY! I want one too!! *pouts*
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on January 02, 2004
Ack no more trouble!! But as for that teacher, mr Williams; okay seems to me he must have been a drill sergant in the army (i'm a army brat so i know ltos about it) but for hte love of anubis that was uncalled for!! and then waht, reading a porno in class? man i hope you let ryou chew his damn ear off. Mr Cullen actually cared about the kids! And i feel sorry for malik for being pssedssed by that asshole demon, forgot his name. And then Marik, hey those assholes would have made a Saint lose his/her temper! but he should have given them a tour of the shadow realm. especially wiht the graveyard!! like to see their faces when they come face to face wiht the reaper of the cards *insane grin* can't wait for the next chapter and MxM action ^^
Oh I also wanted to say I think Aria and umi would make the cutest couple!!! I wanna draw them!! ^^
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on January 02, 2004
Man, Oh, Man. No I know what you meant in the review response eariler about the sub. Whatta ass!! Man, Aria got daddy's blood lust, yes she does!! Poor chibis!! *huggles Aria, Aten, and Robbie, And Umi too!!!* Such a sweety!! Poor Marik. Not this, not now... Anywhay, my computer when on the fritz. So I hafta go to the library now to read this. Hope you had a great New Year!!!

Peace!!
Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on January 02, 2004
O.O How could you write something like that?!? Letting Aria and Aten get beat up! That is just so cruel! I hope something bad happens to the substitute for this. The bastard. Poor Marik. I can understand how he can lose his temper. Not his fault that the people he has to work with are annoying. Ohl...l...I just hope he gets a new job soon.
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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on December 29, 2003
Another great chapter!!! If I could cuddle little Aten I would right now......what a little honey.....*must cuddle Aten*
I LOVED Aria's description of Unkie Seto's toys!! Kids are SO good at saying those kinds of things!!!!
"Perfect" CLIFFIE!
Looking forward to the next chappie!:-)

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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on December 29, 2003
WTF??? This is soo not good. If she so much as lays a hand on that boy, so help her, 'Kura will rip them off of her. Poor Aten!! And that Barnes woman better lay off, or I'll write myself into the story and lay into her!! (BTW, just kidding!!!) Very good story!!

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on December 29, 2003
Okay....that was a weird ending. Is there something about Mrs. Callisto you haven't told us about yet. I think t is. is. She gave me the creeps. She just kept pushing aushiushing Aten to tell her things. That is just wrong for her to do. I know from personal experienc jus just hope she doesn't do anything to hurt Aten. I just hope she's not on the bad side. OMG! Aria was so cute with Seto in the "Show and Tell". Hehe, she just doesn't know when to stop. *squshes her* Cute chibi yami.
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