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By : Aten
  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 29, 2003
    Poor Aten! Poor little guy... Man wish Seto had been there a bit longer or something. He would have showed that bitch Mrs.barnes no one messes with kaiba's family. Anyway love the chapter but do i detect trouble? Like at the end of the chapter, jsut wondering. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on December 29, 2003
    *makes pathetic whimpering sounds* Toddlers are so mean : ( Poor mr Cullen. Someone really needs to give the kids the "good touch bad touch" speech. Hell! I still get that speech!
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 29, 2003
    Yuji: Where have I heard that name in the is fic?
    Yumi: Should the shrink be trusted?
    Yuji: She seems scary! Don't leave her alone with Aten!!
    Yumi: If she turns out to be a sicko I'll be very mad!
    Yuji: But it was still pretty funny
    Yumi: You should of taken a pic of Seto and showed Hayden saying "See you'll be in school like daddy. But you'll be in kindergartOr sOr something like that what school is Hayden going to?) not pre-school."
    Yuji: Yumi that's mean
    Yumi: But it's Seto's first day and he already got a time out!
    Yuji: What? No he didn't
    Yumi: It's a joke seeing that he had to stay in the corner
    Yuji: Ok bakurasgirl keep going and
    Yumi: UPATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on December 29, 2003
    YD: Can I Set Seto for show and tell?
    DD: Me first!!
    YD: Poor Aten. *snuggles Aten*
    Lexi: Aten no cwy. Lexi mate teel bedder. *huggs Aten*
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on December 27, 2003
    YD: Man! I would giv give up the opportunity to have Malik!
    DD: But in the chibi's room?
    YD: OK, I give on that one.
    DD: Hey, Aten! Sing the bum song again!!
    Lexi: Tan Lexi teesh Awia to ting da bum tong?
    YD: Go for it, kiddo.
    Lexi: I ave a bum! A Bum! A BUM! No moe-war telts, no moe-war nam-es! I ave a BUM!!
    DD: *shakes head*
    YD: SQUISH THE CHIBI!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on December 26, 2003
    Wowwie!!! Damn, they are just too evil!! How in the world did he get the Shadow Realm on his side??? Or is it just the Dark-Fiend type. You know, 'Kura's monsters. Not the DM? Or the Blue Eyes, those monsters?? Yeah, Aten is small, and weak seeming. But, big things come in small packages. And aren't the quiet ones the ones you need to keep an eye on. Something about never underestimating the little ones....


    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 26, 2003
    Yuji: Good. So no matter what bad thing happens I know that they'll live to at least be teens.
    Yumi: They have to, Hikari. Did you already forget the prophecy? They supposed to go all killy evil when they're...16-18? Somewhere around then. And Seto or Yami will kill them.
    Yuji: Oh yeah. What's their personalities going to be like? I mean it would be fun to know that Aten will be at least somewhat healthy. And is ok in school and all.
    Yumi: You always want the fun way
    Yuji: Aten is just to cute to have school problems.
    Yumi: Fine. Well UPDATE bakurasgirl UPDATE
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on December 26, 2003
    *evil laughter* I'm takin this better than i thought i would. ^_________^ BTW... for christmas my friend got me this 6 inch Malik doll. It's sooooooooo cute. Anxiously waiting the next chapter hun. Oh, and how did Steven become a duel monster? That was kinda kewl. : )
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 26, 2003
    So that what the dragon looks like... anyway, Uh-oh i smell trouble! I hope the kids will be alright. Unfaithful Guardian... i swear I think i saw that card before... anyway can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 26, 2003
    Okay first, i couldn't stop laughing about Aria holding Umi's butt. I couldn't stop laughing! About the dyslexia (i know i didn't spell that right) but hey he can overcome it! Sorry your and your wife are sick, that really bites. Um not sure waht eslet o say except, the dragon Aria drew, is that the nightmare serphant dragon one? And... oh geez i forgot what i was gonna say... but love the chapter!! Hope you get better soon and Feliz Navidad!! *hugs*
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on December 23, 2003
    Happy Holidays to you too!! Hey, if ya can, ya can. about checking out the site, that is. Anywhays, wonderful chappie, as usual!! Hee, My niece thinks I'm nuts cause I was holing her while reading this (she's 2) and I was squishin her!! So, Aten is dyslexic. Not as bad as I was thinking it was gonna be. I do know some dyslexic people. They tend to be quite brilliant at other things besides reading. And Math is hard too.

    Anyway, You guys take care. Get better soon!! How is the chibi?? Sick too?? Aww.. I hope you all feel better soon!!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on December 23, 2003
    YD: MMMM...Tris pounding Otogi's ass....
    DD: *drools*
    YD: Go Tris!!
    DD: *squeezes Aten* Out of the mouths of babes.
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 23, 2003
    Yuji: Oh god poor, Aten.
    Yumi: Oh God!! GO ARIA!! *Laughs hysterically*
    Yuji: That is something she shouldn't do though! She is only 3 years old!!
    Yumi: Oh god Aria groped so many guys I can't believe it!! *She is going to be laughing forever!*
    Yuji: But- She groped Otogi! Devlin, Duke, Ryuuji whatever! But he groped him!
    Yumi: But She did so cutely!! Come on Cheer!!
    Yuji: Aten said APPLE!!
    Yumi: Oh god that thing got me craving for a Otogi/Tristan thing! IF you can fit that in.
    Yuji: Bakura said Aria might get pregnant at 15 without knowing the father? Come on! Having Marik and Malik as family she should know by the age of 11 to use protection
    Yumi: There you go, Hikari!!
    Yuji: Thank you. Oh but Aten and Aria are so CUTE bakurasgirl!!! Let me squish them, please!! Please let me squish them till they can't breathe!
    Yumi: UPDATE BAKURASGIRL!! UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMitress265 on December 23, 2003
    Aww... dyslexia ain't all THAT bad. I didn't have it but my sister did. *hugs Aten* *sigh* poo poor malik... you're lucky i'm in a library or eles i would've cried. HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on December 21, 2003
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    IT'S NOT JUST A STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    P.S. I'm sorry 'bout your aunt hun.
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