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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 09, 2003
    All I can say is poor kids (even the bullies) I mean having Anzu come in and *shviers* Surprsie poor Aten didn't have a ehart attack. But Robbie is the sweetest child and hte bullies... I'm sorry you had such people in your life. Gods above and below they make humanity look bad. Well good story and about teh balloon... um I hope it deflates soon. And Aria certainly loves to squeal alot. She's cute jsut, waaaaay too hyper. Must lay off candy. Hope to see an update soon and I'll try not to miss them! Also I like Umi. I think Mako is a good dad ^^ And the little boy who likes Duel Monsters, hee he's cute.
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on December 09, 2003
    *dies from laughter attack due to lack of breathing* Oh damn!! That was too funny!! LOLOL! Mmmm...citrus is good!! Lemony goodness next??? Hmm, possibly a foursome?? Maybe closer to the end though, as a celebration of victory over Aku. Lords have mercy, you are such a wonderfully talented writer. I bow before exellence! *bows on floor*

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on December 09, 2003
    DD: AAAAAAWWWWWWW!! Cuddly yamis!
    YD: GO ARIA!! THAT'S MY GIRL!!
    DD: And under NO circumstances is Anzu to say ANYTHING about having chibi Tristans!!
    YD: Unless you want to be cut off.
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on December 09, 2003
    Quality time with Ryou....If that doesn't mean hot lemons I don't know what does. LOL, I can't bel Ari Aria did that to Kura. I was laughing so hard! Bakura and Marik naked together in the shower....nice mental picture there. ^.^
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  • From ANON - gralnak on December 08, 2003
    I now live in fear of the HAPPY BEAR JAMBOREE.

    :{gralnak
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on December 07, 2003
    Ra-damned that was evil!! Ryou is a wonderful mother. Aku is, in my humble opinion, one of the worst, most evil, twisted villan that I have seen in awhile!! And you write it so wonderfully!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 07, 2003
    Yuji: Oh yeah. And don't u dare!! Hurtung Seto is mean!! No hurt Seto!! No Hurt Seto!!!! NO HURT SETO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 07, 2003
    YuHow How could you do that to the poor chibis?!
    Yumi: Making them go to school is bad enough but......ANZU!!!???
    Yuji: I feel sorry for the chibis.
    Yumi: She talked about herself naked in front of 3 year olds!!!
    Yuji: That is wrong!!
    Yumi: *Sigh* But your fic is still de boom. So we can forgive u.
    Yuji: Just UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on December 07, 2003
    Aww I want a Winged Dragon of Ra plushie that be so Cute Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - D-chan on December 07, 2003
    Oh, the poor chibis! [Classroom brats excepted, of course. They deserve Anzu.] Steven needs to get sent someplace worse for helping to free Aku and let him do this to poor Ryou.
    Scene request *crosses fingers*: Light, semi-serious lemon scence involving a tied and blindfolded Marik, ice cubes, feathers, and Malik in a sweetly sadistic mood. Note: Feathers are all the more tortuous if the tips are damp. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on December 06, 2003
    YD: *falls over laughing* The baloon!! OH GODS!!
    DD: Well, our chibi is VERY Aria!!
    YD: Poor Otogi...run, baby! RUN!!
    DD: *smacks Tris* You SHOULD NOT be encouraging that brainless twit!!
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  • From on December 05, 2003
    Konichiiwa!

    Oh, poor Aten's gettin' made fun of in school. *Snif* Sounds like me., only I get made fun of because of my love for anime. He's gettin made fun of for other things... Poor little guy. And.. and... AKU!!! *Hides* I don't like him at all... *Shakes*
    Kyasarin: You-
    Caterfree: *Glares at Kyasarin*
    Kyasarin: I won't even start...
    Caterfree: You better not. Anywise, Great so far! Keep it goin'! Please update again soon!

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on December 04, 2003
    AHHHHHH!!!!!! Damn thing ate my other review ~_~ Anywho...Damn! This is getting scary!! Aten and Robbie are soo cool together!!! *squishes Aten and Robbie* This is getting really good!! Keep it coming girl!!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 04, 2003
    I really do not like Aku he's such an ass! But nice chapter. I think Robbie and Aten are super cute together. Eric, Jason, and Rhoda... well 'cuz I'm tired I jsut want to yell at them and beat their parents into a bloody pulp (don't ask). Can't wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 04, 2003
    Yuji: Aku is coming out?
    Yumi: You wouldn't hurt Malik right?
    Yuji: You definetly wouldn't hurt Bakura. Or Seto? Please don't hurt Set! He is my fav next to Ryou
    Yumi: Yeah I like Joey and Bakura.
    Yuji: We're not alike at all
    Yumi: And yet we are. Strange.
    Yuji: Right. Aww, Aten is special. I mean he is unique.
    Yumi: Update! Or we'll be unhappy
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