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By : Aten
  • From ANON - gralnak on December 02, 2003
    Quote: Gralnak: Yes, Robbie was the same in both stories. Aten and Robbie end up together, but I hid that story. I wonder who gave you the URL…….

    Yeah it was sorta odd, and when I clicked on your name it wasn't listed......HEY WAIT A MINUTE!!
    :)GRALNAK
    Expect an email from me.
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on December 02, 2003
    Yuji: AKU!! Man I hate him.
    Yumi: I second that.
    Yuji: Aten is going to be ok in school right? Cause if he is held back and him and Aria are going to be in different grades to you know how much harder that's going be for him?
    Yumi: He won't have an Aria to cuddle into when he is not feeling well. And now we know for a fact that Aria loves him Very much, And is nothing like the Aria in Babies of Mine.
    Yuji: She only acts like that to Hayden.
    Yumi: Poor guy
    Yuji: Yeah. Well please continue bakurasgirl. You know you're the best! Chou!
    Yumi: Bye! UPDATE!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on December 02, 2003
    Ooh sory for bringing bad memories *looks guilty* And this chapter eep! So many bad memories. Oh man this is gonna be ahrsh... but i think i know why Aria hates Hayden so muI meI mean her fjsutjsut confirmed it. Back in the previous story you mentioned that High Priest bought bakura's daughter as his own. I guess in a way, her soul still ks sks she belogns to him. But still ahrsh memoreis! Very good story too please keep it up. ^^
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on December 02, 2003
    Aria and Aten are get getting so cute! *cuddles Aten* He'll be able to do things like the other kids in no time. I know it. Thanks for including my request! ^.^ I can't wait to read it!
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on December 02, 2003
    YD: Can I squish Aten? Can I? PLEEEEEEEEEEASE?!?!?!
    DD: I wanna squish Aria.
    YD: Gods, Bakura is so funny!
    DD: Well, Aku's going to be a MAJOR pain, I can just tell.
    YD: *growls* He'd better keep his slimy hands off the puppy!!
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  • From ANON - gralnak on November 30, 2003
    YamiGralnak and I just finished banishing Eric to the shadow realm.

    I just got a email saying that a new chapter of "My Brother's Keepre"was added, Not knowing what "My Brother's Keeper" was I checked it out, then I read this. Is Robbie the same in both?

    :|Gralnak
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on November 28, 2003
    Yuji: Aww, I loved that chap.
    Yumi: Aria became a good sister with letting Aten cuddle into her.
    YuYeahYeah that's real cute! Robbie should be soo cute. Aww that is sooo cute giving Mako a kid and Umi good name!! Eric is going to be a bitch in this story right!?
    Yumi: Tris/Oto? Not bad. I like it.
    Yuji: Mr Cullen is real and and Eric mom is not better I think.
    Yumi: Rhonda is going to be no better to believe she is red ted to Tris. And he is so nice and she is so not!!!!
    Yuji: Yup.
    Yumi: Continue soon please C ya
    Yuji: UPDATE
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on November 28, 2003
    Oh this was the cutest chapter!! I like Robbie and Umi (Mako is one of hte few guys I totally adore). I'm glad Aten has a good friend that is so sweet but that Eric child, sheesh!! Talk about a spoiled brat and his mother!! *growls* They had better watch their steps if they want to be taking a tour of the Shadow Realm. Anyway I lvoe this story. Seems like Aten has some serious mental problems... but still a very nice chapter. And poor Tristen!! Hee kids aren't that bad jsut... don't make them think they're the Ruler of the World and you should be fine. Well a very nice chapter I loved it!! more soon please ^^
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on November 28, 2003
    Poor Aten. I could only speak French and Creole till i was like 8 so i know itw it's like not to completly understand what everyone was telling me to do. *bad memory now becomes repressed* ANYWAYZ! Wow! Are you really gonna write my "lost" MarikxMalik? If you do i shall be eternaly greatful my leige. *bows*
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  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on November 28, 2003
    Awwwww, that was adorable! Poor Aten though. *cuddles him* I can't believe that kids are bullying him! They should all be punished...especially that bitch of a mother. Anyway, I was wondering if you could work a Marik X Ryou l int into the fic somewhere. I just love Ryou and Marik couplings.
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on November 28, 2003
    Wow~ Mako with a little one, and Tris with Otogi and...wow!! Heh, glad to see that Aten made a friend besides his sister. Coolies!! Wow. Aten is really behind...but he is *technically* only one. Well, I hope no bad comes from the teacher. I know that some teachers get *too* close to the students and feel they are doing whats right and end up blowing it. He seems really nice. Ie a e a feeling that Eric's mom and Seto are gonna have problems.

    Lady Elfskye
    PS..does Seto look like Keanu Reeves (Matrix) to you?? My husband asked me if Seto was the one who looked like Keanu with a white trench. I think it fits!!!
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  • From ANON - gralnak on November 27, 2003
    Times like that you makes wonder about how they all live together, without A.constantly making love, or B.Killing each other.
    Some times Malik Ryou Marik and Bakura bewildertotatotaly.

    :)GRALNAK
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on November 26, 2003
    Oh! My! Heehee!! Oh dear! LOVE IT!!!! Yea, I know if there was no Aku, there's no story. Heh, And I know that it is gonna be a good story. Aria is how my son was on the first day of KDG. And only KDG. Now I fight to get him up!! This is gonna get good!! It's GUD!

    Waiting as patiently as I can, and loving it!!
    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - IYYashi on November 25, 2003
    Yuji: Haha! Aria is way to excited. I hated school and she is actually happy about it.
    Yumi: Good Marik and Malik are ANIMALS!!! HaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa!!
    Yuji: Poor Aten. Who is this special friend?
    Yumi: ANIMALS!!!!
    Yuji: *Sigh* Seeing that my Yami is still dazed I will just say bye for now and UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Ryou\'sMistress265 on November 25, 2003
    DAMN! BDSM?!?!? *takes quick cold shower* Sure the RyouxBakura was hott and all but... damn. AND IT WAS ONLY IMPLIED! In short... i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved this chapter. Lotta o's : )
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