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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 11, 2004
    Ladies and gentelments, start sharpening those knives you've got. And encase you're intersted, later on in the Egyptian Memory Arc, we get to find out that Bakura's entire village was slaughtered in front of his eyes when he was about six or eight years old. No wonder he turned out like that.
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on April 11, 2004
    errr...yami is such a poop head...can't he just leave them alone, that pharaoh needs to learn a lesson, bakura should fuck with yugi and see how yami likes it....i hope aten is ok...poor aten...
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 11, 2004
    Oh, holey hell. Such a bastard!! Damn, someone needs to ring his damn neck. Knock Yugi out, take the puzzle, shatter it. Apologize for the rest of your life to Yugi, but refuse to tell him where the rest of the peices suddenly disappered to. Lose one friend, save your own life and that of your family. Easy. NOT. Poor Ryou, of all of them, adults that is, He's the one I hurt for the most.


    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Terra on April 11, 2004
    I see some serious Yami butt kicking coming soon. Here (tosses dollies to Aria and monkies to Aten) give these to the little angels. I hope they find Ryou's Christmas ring.
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on April 11, 2004
    I could fill this entire space with insults and torturous thinks I would love to do to that SOB Yami... but I won't. I'll write it down in a notebook and imagine it instead. I will say that I'm glad the kids are alive as well as the parents. I hope Isis has good house/fire insurance and Miranda is like a angel in disguise. Look I'm crying *weak smile* Hope things get better for them.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on April 11, 2004
    Oooh, what will Bakura and Marik do??? I hope they tell Yugi and he shatters the puzzle again. Burning a house down cause you lost a duel is really immature. *kicks spoiled Yami in his spoiled rotten ass*
    Super great chapter! (even though it was super sad!) I hope Isis had insurance! The flashbacks Ryou had of his mom werecutecute I could have squished him. *grin*



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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on April 10, 2004
    HOLY COW!!!!! I nearly missed this chapter but yeah Aria beat Yami!! But who started the fire?? I have a hunch who did it but I can't wait for the chapter!! Oh and Happy Easter!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 08, 2004
    GO ARIA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOHOOO!!!! *cheers, whistles, stomps feet loudly*


    Continues to read story....


    @_@


    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    You are so in trouble!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 08, 2004
    You AREN'T going to kill anyone in the sequal, right? YAY!!!! She used "Just Desserts"! That's my favourite card!!! WOHOO!!!! What a way to whip that inpudent pharaoh's ass! *Glares at Yami*
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  • From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 08, 2004
    You AREN'T going to kill anyone in the sequal, right? YAY!!!! She used "Just Desserts"! That's my favourite card!!! WOHOO!!!! What a way to whip that inpudent pharaoh's ass! *Galres at Yami*
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  • From ANON - chaos queen on April 08, 2004
    wow! yami is such an ass!
    i love you, you update lots :)
    who's got daddy's bloodlust?

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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on April 08, 2004
    HAHAH that was the BEST! It’s like watching a real live Yu gi oh show! With YAOI!
    And Points at Yami and laughs, take that you wise ass. Hmmm I was thinking of some moves with cards. I use DNA surgery (makes that type of card of your choices unable to attack/ like spellcasters or whatever you pick but pick insect/ with insect barrier/turns all the other players’ cards all into bugs. (Wheevl or whatever the dub calls him used this against Joey in battlecity I believe/ This makes it so all their cards can’t attack. Magic Cylinder is sweet trap card to it makes their attack go right back at them, and to their life points. Anyways that was cool! Really enjoyed Yami getting his ass kicked!

    Can’t you just tell I love him to bits -_- anyways can’t wait for the update!

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  • From ANON - Terra on April 08, 2004
    Man you end one gut wrenching cliffhanger just to add another!! You meany!! (poutll mll me Now!! Is the arsonist who I think it is??
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  • From ANON - Jade on April 08, 2004
    Yami, is definitly...being an asshole. Gah ::raised brow::crazy...idjit...mmm..
    the battle was great, I'm glad aten and aria are alright, but what about the bakura and marik?
    are those two alright? ::tilts head, then crosses arms::
    ::grins a bit and chuckles softly::and Arill ill definitly kick Yamis arse,
    a Tyrant dragon would be useful, that baby is immune to traps, and can attack twice if the opponent has a monster out
    2900/2500 ^.^ great beastie especially with a boost from a Malevolent Nuzzler, and maha vajo, who gains a 500 att bonus for every equip card added to it, 1500/...i forget the defense o.o......but just mentioning a car cards that could kick yamis butt ^.^
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on April 07, 2004
    nooo... an, nooooo... pls update, i cant wait to find out what happens next ^^
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