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Reviews for Hostile Takeover

By : Aten
  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on March 28, 2004
    *wipes drool off of screen* Yummy!!!!!! Heh, humor and a lemol inl in one!!! Cute chappie! I really like Miranda!! She is sooo cool!!!

    Wow, two lemons in one?? Coolies!!!

    Hmm...I wonder what was up with Yami and Yugi while everyone else was having fun.

    You know, I think you are going to drive me crazy with this story!!!!
    LOLOL

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_viodfox on March 28, 2004
    Squee!..now thats...an xmas present...hehehehe ^^
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  • From ANON - sweetmisery on March 28, 2004
    I loved it...my question for next chaper is wMariMarik have flash backs during his session with Malik and what Bakura got Ryou for x-mas
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 28, 2004
    ROFL Miranda is great!! Poor Seto, I can't blaim fim for getting sick. Not after that disaster with Anzu *makes face* And it does seem Marik has met his match in sharp wit too. I'm really glad Miranda and Robbie made it, hee group picture!! Okay sorry about that; love this chapter and look! No bad guys! ... But for how long? *inserts creepy m* ok* okay I need caffiene. Double lemonin next chapter, double yay!!
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  • From ANON - Camille on March 28, 2004
    Did anyone hear of privacy for crying out loud? That was hilarious! :)
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  • From ANON - Terra on March 28, 2004
    I wonder if Santa can put a naked Bakura in a stocking? If so I know what I want for Christmas. It's never too early to start asking. LOL
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  • From ANON - Jade on March 26, 2004
    YJ: yeup...thought so...he's as power hungry as all the others
    J: Yami!...ah well, it is an interesting perspective, not all things
    are as they appear, history IS written by the victors... and there
    usually is another side to a story, which I am Loving! heh, great ficcy ^.^
    YJ: got that right, and the Lemons...yummy...it alright if I borrow Bakura for a while?
    J: YAMI!!!
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 25, 2004
    YAY BLOODLUST! Bloodlust is like FRIENDSHIP! -Oh gods, was that me? *grin*

    Great chapter! I think that damned elf bitch Anzu needs a candy cane shoved up her ass. *laughs evilly*

    Yay candy cane up Anzu's ass!

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  • From darkvixen on March 25, 2004
    oooh! xmas! kwl holiday! i got a present for aku.. its a kick in the ass...hmf...
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on March 25, 2004
    Wow!! I was right about something for a change!!!! Cool!!!

    So, I hope Seto lets Miranda and Robbie come over for the holidays!!! So sad to know that she lost a little one!! And that was just too sad with Santa and the heart. And soo sweet at the same time!! And "GO ARIA!!!!!" Tear that lunatic up!!! LOLOLOL!!! Bloodlust indeed!!

    And Yami must be stopped. Period! He's not a nice person!! Are you sure you haven't had him "infected" by Aku??????

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 25, 2004
    First, the holiday shopping was so funny!! Althought, I feel major sympathy for that scorpion. But I bet he looks cute with tiny antlers on his head. The kids too too adorable for words, especially Aten and Robbie. Oh you jsut want to hug them until your arms break! However, that sudden appearence of jessica's sister (who knew the whore had a sister?) made me cringe as well. Poor Ryou. Miranda is too cool I really like her ^^ I can only imagine if Tristen overheard what she said *giggles* No wonder those her and Ryou seem to get along so well. And on a final note, please oh please let the kids beat that @#$%&* Yami!! If he does hurt Aten... well let's jsut say he's gonna have several EXTREMELY pissed relatives on his tail. Yugi should have left him trapped in the puzzle longer ot melt that damn thing down. Sweet story.
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  • From ANON - Terra on March 25, 2004
    Aten handled Santa better than my kids. They screamed. Oh nad don't forget the carrot for rudolph along with the cookies for Santa.
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on March 24, 2004
    HELL-O!! WTF was that??!!?? Oy, Aten is very lucky that Marik knows about Aku, or I have a feeling that the boy would be in even more trouble than what he is. And lucky that Bakura left!!!! Very scary what Marik seen!! Hmm, why do I suspect "the One" is Robbie???? It makes sense. But yet makes almost too much sense. As for Holiday presents, for Aria, a certificate for a lifetime supply of M & M's!!!! LOLOLOL!! Seriously!! A bunch of dress up clothing, like princess stuff, Egyptian clothing, etc. Some Egyptian clothing for Aten too!! I'm sure Isis (Ishizu) could get that for them. For , hm, hmmm, a giant stuffed Monkey. Or maybe a complete Artist set, the ink, paints, desk, etc, from Unkie Puppy!!!


    Lady Elfskye
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  • From ANON - Elfs lite on March 24, 2004
    hey liked your story . I haaave a questioon though? your not going to let yami hurt Bakura agian .
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  • From ANON - Sweet Misery on March 23, 2004
    yay lemon!!!...loved this although I'm curious if Hayden is the one to see Aten's death. Is Marik going to go back soon?
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