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By : Aten
  • From ANON - PharaohYamisPrincess on March 23, 2004
    Okay...Presents....hmmm. I have an idea! Since Aria loves dolls and I am kinda obsessing over one of my childhood favourite shows, I wanna give her a Rainbow Brite Doll. Bakura would probably hate seeing it. For Aten...I'll give him...umm...how about...a plushie of the god Anubis. Sorry, kinda had no ideas for thatt kit kinda like a puppy version of the Jackal God...hehe...anyway, those are my gifts to them!
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  • From ANON - Terra on March 23, 2004
    No wonder the poor boy is so upset. That's a lot for a 3 year ol han handle. Bakura+raw meat...can I watch?!?!?!? You slid in an extra chapter on me. LOL So sweet to have Aria comfort Malik. Good job again.
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  • From ANON - Kanika on March 23, 2004
    Eww.
    Will you kill Anzu someday? Please? *puppy eyes*
    Or she will kill me someday, I guess... eww.

    The chapter was great and I have no idea who is the one who can open the door in Atens heart.
    But on the other hand really don't want to know when and why and how Aten will die. *sniffle*

    Uhm... I want to give Aten a book with lot's of Pictures from Egypt. Pictures from animals, and the pyramids and all that stuff. Because he likes drawing so much, I guess he likes looking at Pictures and he's interested in Egypt. But it should be a book with some English text so he can even learn while having fun. Ow, okay, maybe not the funniest present but he has to improve his English, right?
    Candy for Aria, of course. And I really want to give her a pet but I guess she's still a bit too young. Uhm, Aria is plaing with her dolls a lot, so why not a few new dresses for them. You can never have enough of that. Maybe a nice new doll too, with long hair so shae can brush it?
    And plushys. You can't have enough of them either. I have no idea what they have yet, but how about a seiyaryu plushy (my fav. card) and a Kuriboh plushy.

    Gah, I'm not very good in making presents, sorry ;__x
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  • From ANON - Isawa17 on March 23, 2004
    Hey! I have just read up on all the chapters I have missed ^-^ I'm glad that Aku is out of Malik now...T_T But poor Aten! Damn, this fic is so addicting! The only YGO fics I really read any more are yours, and Hato Chiisai's.

    Now, as for gifts for the chibis ^-^ Gemini elves! My fave card, and I have two plushies of them *gives them the plushies* One boy for Aten, and the girl for Aria. ^-^
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 23, 2004
    Gifts oh how could I forget!! I know I already said Dream Catchers for the two of them. You can hang them over your bed at night and it should keep bad dreams out and let only good dreams in. It's helped me out many nights even to this day. Also, for Aria, a bag of red and green holiday m&m's; for Aten, a water color painting set. I would give him oil paints but water colors are safer for his young heart. Hee try not to kill the 'elf' when you meet her.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 23, 2004
    Great chapter! Boy, I'm glad I'm not in Aten's mind! I'm glad I'm not Marik either-I get the feeling Bakura's gonna make him finish his shift walking funny. O.O

    OOOH, that's right, PRESENTS! *runs off shopping*.......(tic toc, tic toc).........okay, back. Here's a nwingwingset for Aria and Aten! Enjoy kids! *slips Ryou a tin of cookies and candy canes* Don't let Aria see these!!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 23, 2004
    Holy cow!! How dare Aku corrupt such a sweet and innocent little boy!! Oh wait, it's his job *sighs wearily* Man oh man, things are so not getting better. And Anzu is coming back? Aye ve. Well, what better way to burn off their frustration then by taking it out on her? I mean she keeps saying 'Pain is like friendship!' Great now I'm gonna have nightmares. I was wondering, are Helpless Child, Unfaithful Guardian, and that other card to represent Aria real are did you make them up? Okay I better stop writing. Anxiously awaiting the next update.
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  • From darkvixen on March 23, 2004
    ooooo! can't wait till the next chappy! squee! it feels like so long....oh yeah... *pulls out a present* its a giant teddy bear for aten (and i mean like person sized big), and for aria *pulls out another present* a dagger straight from egypt... *hands you another present* give this to ryou, its a photo album, *takes out oast ast present* some toys for bakura...hehehehe
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  • From ANON - Caterfree10 on March 21, 2004
    Konichiiwa!

    Wow! Two in a row! Must be my lucks wes week! ^_^ Anywise, Nyuu! Aten and Aria's first fight! And it wasn't even an agurment like with my two siblings! (Yes, I have two siblings, both older than me. It sucks being the baby in my generation! GRR!! Oh well, It's not so bad having Nieces and a nephew...) And-and, Grrr! Eric's at DA!! *Fists clench and eyes have fire in eyes* I COULD KILL THAT LITTLE MONSTER IF I COULD ENTER THE FIC *Another time she wishes she could jump into a fic at will* *Ahem* Anywise, I have to go now! Please continue again soon!

    Ja Ne! ^_~
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  • From ANON - SweetMisery on March 21, 2004
    I loved this story just like everything else you have written. I understand the whold Seto yelling at the potty, i insulted/hit/yelled at a door and a walll for my brother. I think Aria should take a karate class, that would be sooooo kewl, seeing her take out the moves on some jerk.
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  • From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on March 21, 2004
    ooooo.....spooky spooky now. aten so kawaii! keep writing!
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  • From ANON - ShadowofLight on March 21, 2004
    Wow. When pushed Aten can be just as fierce as his sister. I seriously want to reach into your fic and bash Yami's head agains hte wall until his brains out of his nose for even thinking of hurting the chibis. Anyway, nice story. Can't wait for hte update.
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  • From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on March 21, 2004
    Can I buy the video of Seto talking to the potty? I'd pay to see that! LOL
    Super chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Lady Elfskye on March 21, 2004
    Oh, Ra damn!! What a chappie! Aten almost killed Aria thanks to Aku!! Not cool! Damn, That was a harsh chappie. Yami needed more time. He obviously hasn't learned a damn thing. Anywho, I really enjoy this story andI can't wait for Tuesday!!!!

    Lady Elfskye
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  • From SatuChiyoko on March 20, 2004
    *sigh* I wonder when Joey finally gets away from drinking and When with him and Seto will be everything all right.
    And I want to know how Malik and Marik will continue with their relationship.
    W-o-w ô.o
    Aten... growling...? *reads line again*
    Aten... growling? *reads line again*
    *imagines the whole thing* I can't believe it!
    Anyways...
    GO Yami ATEN! GO Yami ATEN! Save your sis'! Save your sis'!
    Uhm, Aria will not be angry with Umi for kissing her, will she?
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