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By : Aten

From ANON - ~*Angela*~ on January 02, 2005
Damn.... I finally finished reading this and... Damn.... / Bakura: -_- She is too stunned to speak. / Angela: I mean... Never in my life has any fic(s) gotten to me like this!! These stories have completely changed my views of ALL the characters. I looked at them all in a different way before and now... well, I see them much more different. I have a bunch of things to say but I don't know were to start! >.< / Marik: Start from the beggining Baka! / Angela: Err... were does the begining start? / Bakura & Marik: *anime fall* / Angela: ^^;; Well... Umm... First off, this question has been in my brain for some time. I think it was for 'Baby of Mine'. When Ryou was turned into a girl and he- I mean she, had sex with Bakura and Marik, the next day she was bleeding... but she was pregnant. 0_o How could she have her period when she was pregnant? *shrugs* Ah well... Oh, and also, (please don't take this the wrong way ^^;) I noticed that Malik was sometimes kind of just standing there off to the side and no one really paid much attention to him during this story. And Bakura didn't pay as much attention to him as he did to Ryou or Marik. Marik payed attention to all of them equally and so did Ryou. *sniff* I was kind of sad when he didn't take part in conversations and when he just stood there. This particular story made him seem... kind of lonesome. You know, I kind of hated Bakura, Marik, and Ryou for a while there, but then I thought "Hell, if i had kids, I would do that too." I especially felt bad for Malik on the chapters in which he was just suddenly thrown in control of his body by Aku and left to face the wrath of his family and friends. That chapter were he was going to comit suicide, I actually felt... happy for him. Revenge is one of the words on my Dictionary and I thought that his death would have been a great revenge against Marik, Ryou, and Bakura for mis-trusting him. Really... I was thinking "That will show them! I hope they will suffer when they find out that they were the cause of his death and that it was Aku who hurt them, NOT Malik!" ...^^;; Can't you tell I have very sadistic thoughts? *nervous laughing* Yeah... but those are my thoughts on poor Malik. I hope he has a bigger role on 'The Yami Virus' (which i shall start reading in a moment ^^) And then there is another question. How come Bakura didn't work along with Marik? o0? He didn't go to school or anything! Oh yeah, and before I forget, I liked that chapter were the Bakura and Marik were blooddrunk. I could just really picture that in my mind. And what-ever happened to Marik and Malik's wedding tatoos? Didn't they get themselves another? Alright, now about Yami, HE WAS A REAL ASSHOLE!! Damn him! For the first time, I really wanted to break his neck! / Bakura: 0.0 You finally said something reasonable!! Hell has just frozen over... / Angela: ...0.0 I just insulted Yami!! Woah... I've never done that and really meant it. ^^;; Anyway, on with the long-ass review. About Aria and Aten: No OCs have ever made me love them so much!! *bites her lip so she won't squish Aten to death* Really! Usually I DESPISE OCs but these two were an exception! I actually CARED for them! Man, you don't know how much I have grown to love Aten! He is carved as Marik, Malik, and Ryou's son in my head now! And you know why I love Aten? B/c he reminds me of my little brother. My brother is 5 and has a heart problem too. I was really suprised when I saw this on Aten. Your story made me think a lot about my baby brother and what if all that stuff happened to him. Will you believe me if I told you that when I found out Aten was raped, I went out in my living room looking for my brother and hugged him while sayin "I'll be damned if something like that happened to you." Of course, my brother didn't understand what I was saying, but returned the hug anyway. He also has a problem speaking. That's why I love Aten so much ^^ And as for Aria... well... I like her too but then again, I sometimes dislike her. She WAS kind of mean and selfish. *sigh* But she IS Bakura's offspring after all. ^^ But you know what? I really REALLY was pleased with her when she kicked Auntie Yami's ass in that duel!! Girl power, Aria! You go girl! (oh yeah, Auntie Yami will forever be carved in my mind too. *lol When they first invented that name for Yami, I was laughing my ass of!! *lol You have no idea... And about Anzu... I actually like this Anzu!! / Bakura and Marik: *eyes widen at Angela's last sentence* Ra, take me now! Those words are NEVER to be put together in one sentence! *fall to the floor in mock death* / Angela: Oh... I just figured a way to knock them out. *lol* But really, you Anzu is MUCH better than the original one! The jokes they made of her amused me to no end!! Hell, the yamis prefered to die again at times! XD And Miranda and Robie were great Ocs! I'm telling you, I have NEVER cared wether if the OCs died or lived in fics, but your OCs are like one of the real characters of the show! (BTW Miranda was a great OC!) And the Rod jokes... *snickers* I loved them! hmm... let's see... what else? umm... I guess that's it! Now, I wanted to ask you for your permision to use 'Itermi' for Bakura in my fic. And Maybe 'Auntie Yami', too. XD I want to be able to laugh at that one! *lol But of course, I shall put up the disclaimer saying those were your Ideas. I also wanted to put a link to your fics in meadiaminer or here on AFF in my bio page which is on FF. net. I REALLY want more people to enjoy your fics like I have! But if you don't want me to, I won't. I won't use the names or do anything to my Bio page until I have your consent. ^^ You already have my e-mail adress. I'm also known as 'Angel of roses' Now, I am leaving to go read the sequel to this! *looks at review* You know... this is the LONGEST review I have ever left for someone. *twitch* I should be doing another chapter for my fic... *cough* Sorry. ^^ Ja-ne bakurasgirl!! Consider me a new fan of yours and Hato-chisaii's! (I know what you mean when you say her fics are great!) *waves Yaoi flag* Yaoi forever!!

~*~Angela~*~
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From ANON - IYYashi on February 29, 2004
Yuji: Oh god that was such a sad chap!! ;_;
Yumi: It was so fucking good!!
Yuji: WHAT?!! O_O!! Malik almost raped Ryou!!
Yumi: Well it would have been better if he got his way. I need a good lemon
Yuji: Yami I can't believe you!!
Yumi: Of course you can
Yuji: I don't like what you think
Yumi: Well lets go back about the chap. It was wrfulrful!
Yuji: Please start making it happier
Yumi: UPDATE!!!
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From ANON - Caterfree10 on April 20, 2004
Konichiiwa!

No, you're not introuble for giving me such surprises. But thanx for the Aten plushie! *Glomps Aten plushie* And, about the surgery thing'm o'm okay, it was just a non concerous tumor, so I'm fine. I can't do a lot of things I want to though. I can't even get on my top bunk on my futon bed! >< It really, sux, I tell ya. N E wise, Damn this fic was GOOD!!! I can't wait to read the sequal! I think I'll go read it as soon as it's up tomorrow! Er, or whenever I'll be able to considering I'm probably gunna have a mountain of homework after being gone from school for over two weeks >< Damn, It's is so gunna suck until I can get back here! Oh well. I'll try to make it back here at AFF.net ASAP!!!!! Until, then I have to go now!

Ja Ne! ^_~
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From ANON - Light on April 20, 2004
I loved how you ended the storie it was greeeat . Thanks respresponding. /Im haaveing problems sending in my reviews it says its busy .
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From ANON - MarikIshtar77 on April 20, 2004
That was a great story, Bakurasgirl. I've enjoyed every single chapter. Looking forward to the sequel! I'm sure it will kick as much ass as it's predicessors;-)
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From ANON - bakachibi_voidfox on April 19, 2004
wow thats was great.... aten sounds so cute!... i think i'll draw a picture, if i think its good enough for such a good story i'll send it to you^^ hey, um you know your other story about seto and joey... you wouldn't mind it i used a couple words from there as a title would you?
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From ANON - Lady Elfskye on April 19, 2004
AAAHHHHRRRGGGHHH!!! NOT fair. Not at all. But I should have guessed it anyway. I think I knew, but didn't want to, ya know. It was a joke about Anzu. Wonderful story, my dear. Can't wait untill the sequel starts!! Thank you, from a survivor.

Lady Elfskye
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From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 19, 2004
Dragon Tears: *shocked* What? You don't know Shaman King? Acourding to me, if you don't know these four anime: Yu-Gi-Oh, Inuyasha, Friuts Basket, or Shaman King, well... let's just say that it's a sad sad world you live in...
Brain: *thwacks her* Stop rambling about anime and start rambling about her story! *glares*
Dragon Tears: Okay, excellent chapter, never would have expected that Aten would have been Aku's new hikari! I hope you put more evil dudes in it so I can torture them... *evil glint in eyes* There! I'm done my ramblings now! ^____________________^
Brain: You are SUCH a baka...
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From ANON - Anon on April 19, 2004

Actually Bakura's real name is an Egyptian form of Bakura. I can't remember the exact spelling, but when his village was destroyed to create the Sennen items, he changed his name to mean "Soul of Kuru Eruna." Ba-soul or spirit, and Kuru Eruna is the name of the village that the High Priest's uncle destroyed. That why in the series, he's so hell-bent on collecting the items. He feels that, as the sole survivor of his village, the items are rightfully his.
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From ANON - black-kaytee on April 19, 2004
Wow... that is one of the best pieces of writing I've ever read in my entire life. The story line was incredible, like all of your other pieces of work. Your dedication at the end was really touching. You're an outstanding writer and I can't wait until the sequal.
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From ANON - Isawa17 on April 19, 2004
I lovhis his fic T_T and I really like what you put at the end, the dedication. That was really nice. ^-^ arigato.
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From ANON - Terra on April 19, 2004
Wonderful way to end the story. Very touching and a nice set up for the sequel. Take a bow pretty lady, you did a tremendous job once again.
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From ANON - ShadowofLight on April 19, 2004
Mas o menos means 'so-so' or 'more or less' in Spanish. Sorry about that. 15 okay they're still considered teenagers. Ooh those are beautiful gifts and listening to music when you paint or write jsut makes hte creativity flow out better. And Aten and Robbie are a kinda-couple? Ooh how sweet!! But Aku is coming back? *growls* I hate him but I can't be sure if I hate him more or less than Steven. I am glad that the family is there (although I want to kick Yami's ass into the next millenia) and that dedication chapter was jsut so sweet and true. *hugs* I wish wednesday were here already!
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From ANON - Dragon Tears on April 19, 2004
*sigh* Marik and Malik will always be Marik and Malik... Oh, and do you know the anime Shaman King? Because I've become obsessed with a character in it called Yoh. Here's a picture of him: http://www.horo-horo.org/yoh_2.jpg I swear, being obsesssed is a bad thing...
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From ANON - chaos queen on April 18, 2004
Poor bakura and ryou.. I think seto didn't soundproof their room on purpouse some how.
he's mean like that.
*huggles aria and aten*
so kawaii!
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