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Reviews for Homelife

By : Ryanookami
  • From ANON - REVIEWER #34321 on December 10, 2003
    Excellent chappie I must say....where will it go though? Is Joey gonna end up in some kinda shattered mind state? (wait, he 's already in one....) Will he be saved?

    Keep Writin'!
    Reviewer #34321
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  • From ANON - REVIEWER #34321 on December 08, 2003
    Omg! That was really beautiful.....very depressing, but nice.....I've read fics like this before, where not everyone gets saved and yours ties in with the first on my list! (JaAffeAffection on FFN...Seto/Jou ficcy)

    I hope that you could possibly write another like this.....maybe one for Serenity...how much she misses her brother and how she can never see him....*tear tear*

    And I hope you got through that tough time in your life... : )

    Keep on Smilin' and Writin'
    Reviewer #34321
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  • From ANON - Amanda on December 07, 2003
    I don't even know where to start. This story ripped my heart out. It's dark and full of despair and entirely believable and true-to-life. I love it. You are amazing. I can't wait to read more. There's more I wanted to say, but words are failing me. *is in awe*
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 06, 2003
    i like this fic, it was a nice change of pace..

    i kinda got scared for poor jou when they were in the kitchen, i feel sorry for him and his kitchen...

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  • From ANON - princessoflightanddarkness on December 06, 2003
    OMG Great chapter hon I hope to see more chapters for you oMG poor Joey this is a great sad fic OMG keep up the greatk hok hon ^__^
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  • From ANON - Yaky on December 06, 2003
    Wow, that was Good! I guess, in a sort of disturbing way.
    You, see I work with abuse children. Why you ask? Well I'm majoring in Psychology and from what I've 'red' here it seems to me that you may Know something yourself. You portrait the thought of the abuse child in a manner of self reflection and in a level that the child has given everything up, because he/she feels there is nng bng better than what was presented. I admire your work, it's deep thought and maybe could be heart felt. I see many cases like tand and it's still surprising that this is REAL life.....Keep up the GREAT work and Update soon!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on December 06, 2003
    Awww, that's alright I still like it!!! Keep up the great work and bring on the next chapter....
    LATER...
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  • From ANON - Tik on December 05, 2003
    Wowee . . . this is so . . . GROUNDBREAKING. I mean, Joey and his Dad in this kind of relationship is absolutly brand-new, at least, I've never seen it been done before. I love it! It's very interesting and refreshing, to get this whole new view on the Jonouchi-dad story . . . please continue!
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  • From Mahayana on December 05, 2003
    wow... that was... quick. oO To be honest, I wasn't expecting another chapter so _soon_. *impressed* Damn, you're fast.

    I really don't know what to say without repeating myself. ^_^ Story's still amazingly good and deep. *gives thumbs up* Although I liked the first chapter a little bit better, because it had a deeper emotional impact. But just a little bit better. *holds thumb and forefinger 3mm apart* And this chapter was sweet... in an incestuous sort of way. It's a good chapter in terms of giving a little background story and more insight into Jounouchi's psyche. Although the part where he suddenly collapses is a bit sudden. Maybe you were going for that? But I thought a few more sentences leading up to it [aka. what was going on in Jonouchi's mind while his fathes bes being overly friendly?] could have helped cushion it a bit more. Although... that's just me, so feel free to ignore it. ^^;
    Aw darn... and here I go criticising your story while I love it to bits. "I criticise because I love."

    Oh... and one more thing I just have to say...
    You know... I could never understand it why people liked taking cold showers. I mean... it's cold... But the way you described it made more sense than in most other stories.

    "It feels horrible and wonderful and like my skin is being cut in a thousand little ways all over. It perfectly sums up my own desires and I'll just stand there dazed, taking in the hurt and hopefully dismissing some of the pain I keep inside. I take a lot of showers."

    Cold showers just suddenly make so much more sense to me. o_o ...wow...
    So thank you for making Jonouchi's cold-hot showers plausible. *hugs*

    Sorry... my reviews are always ridiculously long. ^^;;;

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  • From ANON - Dragonblade on December 05, 2003
    Wow...that was amazing...hit a little too closely to home, but that was a really good twist to the norm...because not everyone gets saved...and the Kaiba saves Jou bit kinda gets old...way to go, awesome story!!
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 05, 2003
    awwwwwww this fic was nice, kinda depressing, but then again that's what i write too

    it was really good, update soon!
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  • From ANON - princessoflightanddarkness on December 05, 2003
    OMG that is so sad you are doing great I can't wait to find out what happens next Keep up the great work hon
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on December 05, 2003
    Sorry I'm back I forgot to add in my last review that I love how real you made this story I love stories that show the world isn't always a ty pty picture and most people who do abuse their lovers or kids believe in there head it's right and that person who gets abuse still can love that person very much and I love that you added those points in your fic this is deep and really makes me feel for Jou you're a great writer ok now with that said ^_^ I'm off keep it up!
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on December 05, 2003
    I LOVE THIS! Omg I love this not sure how to say it in words how much I love it! I really love dark fics! This one rules!
    Keep up the great writing.

    ACIDFLOWER
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on December 05, 2003
    YD: Now THAT was good!
    DD: Very interesting to see into the mind of an abused child...cause that's all he is at this point.
    YD: Please keep it up!!
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