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By : Ryanookami
  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on December 05, 2003
    This story is cool! Your language is very good and you handle angst very well.
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  • From ANON - Leeann on December 05, 2003
    I appreciate your notice. I will continue to read and possibly review this fic for the simple reason that I don't fully comprehend what is going on. It is a world that is foreign to me and thus has to be investigated. I agree with several of the other reviewers that state that this is not a normal Jou fic and give praise for originality. One thing that I can identify is the concept of a safe zone and the devastating effects of it being desecrated.
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  • From ANON - Jenniyah on December 05, 2003
    wow, you're Betuana from the vampire game?...oh, you're one of the RARE ppl who sign up under me and actually continue to play. wow, glad to finally know who you are...

    so, you're not going to get kaiba save jou, which way are you going? Is jou going to save himself... or is this one of those dark fics where we just see jou in his misery (not that it isn't good... sad miserable jou is always a nice read).

    Oh, you put soo much emotion into this story, we can actually understand how jou feels..sob, his kitchen is under attack...sob. It's also nice how you explain where the cash comes from (for their food and stuff).

    Man, can't wait for the next chapter. This fanfic is becoming one of my all time favorites (well, it already is, but it's climing the charts in my fav-bookmarked-fanfics)
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  • From ANON - Leeann on December 02, 2003
    I want to say that I liked it, but I didn't. It's well written. It potrays accurate emotions. It real life. It's just not something that I want to admit happens. I like the saviour fics because it's fictional. Call me delusionaland naive, but my little bubble world is preferable. It's sad, but true. Horribly overused phrase, but truth hurts.
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  • From ANON - rayemars on December 02, 2003
    Okay, that hurt to read.

    You caught the sheer...hopelessness of Jounouchi's situation so well.... I commend you. This is good.
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  • From ANON - Pyrasaur on December 02, 2003
    Hmm, I like how you handled this. The story's detailed description and Jou's relatively calm tone kind of make the incest more horrifying by contrast. I just can't see Jou using such a high level of diction, though; maybe this would have been better from a third-person perspective? It's well done, at any rate.
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  • From Mahayana on December 01, 2003
    Well, I am sorry but I really can give you no criticism. I thought maybe the story was a bit slow, but it still held my attention, so that wat itt it. The way you wrote Jounouchi is beautiful and rather deep. It made him seem more than just a happy-go-lucky stereotype. The relationship between him and his father was also rather well developed. I mean, usually in the 'abusive parent' type of fics the parent is horribly antagonized right to the point of utter loathing. But you pointed out some good parts about Jonouchi's father, showed the reader that while he IS doing something horrible there is something likeable about him too. It made the whole scenario seem more deep and realistic than just the typical 2D good-guy/bad-guy set up. I am deeply impressed. Technically this fic ld mld make me want to claw my eyes out.... you know... parent x kid = BAD... Bu was was all done rather tastefully. And while I do feel sorry for Jounouchi, I am more impressed with how well he manages to handle it all, more impressed with his strength. Yook ook that 'clumsy idiot' mask most people give to him and ran with it, put something even more beautiful behind it.
    The last two paragraphs of the story just get to me, though you still managed to make me laugh with the 'late night cable porn' line. The mood isn't so black and heavy that you can't laugh... but it still sits in the pit of your stomach like something grey and awful that you don't want to think about. This whole story was very well done, disturbing in an un-disturbing way. I like it very much (if you haven't noticed yet from the extensive praise I shower you with ^_~).
    I hope you do keep on writing good stuff like this... I am definitely looking forward to it.

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  • From ANON - Tik on December 01, 2003
    WAHOO! Really good! Excellent! Please, please, please wriore ore . . . I'd love to see a pairing out of this. You're really a good writer.
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  • From ANON - Dragoameramer Yami Dragon on December 01, 2003
    YD: OO
    DD: OO
    YD: Holy shit! That was...
    DD: Disturbing.
    YD: Are you going to continue?
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on December 01, 2003
    Hey, me like, yes I said me like, not 'I like this' *giggles* sorry stupid comment! But nah, really I like it, it's good, but no Seto saving Jou? I mean I LOVE Seto/Jou couple there my favorite, yep absolute favorite! For, now plz continue on is really good and ME LIKE *winks* Well, I gotta go, LATER....
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  • From ANON - Jenniyah on December 01, 2003
    Oh, it is rare to see a fanfic where Jou just gives up like this... Which makes this fic all the BETTER!!!

    Yeah, this one's a nice one. You are gonna con't are you? It's soo rare to find fics like this, it'd be nice if you'd con't it...

    But all in all, very nice!!! and original (well, I think it is, but who knows, there could be something similar on the net...)
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