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Reviews for Lost in the Sands

By : UnfinishedMelody
  • From ANON - randomperson on October 26, 2006
    This is good! Anything with ancinet Egypt in is almost always good, but this is REALLY good. I like the writing style, and the description of Yuugi, and...everything! Be sure to write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on December 08, 2003
    -Blinks.- Kitty? As in Winter's Maiden? -Shrug.- Doubt you remember me, we used to talk online I think either 2001 or 2002. -Shrug.- I lost my AOL, but I do have Adelphia so I still have my fics and I can access the AOL.com site so I can still check my e-mail. I've read this on FF.net, I think. Don't remember. School has me going 'wheeeee, look at the pwetty star the then I go to sleep. u.u; Anyway, I'll be watching for updates. See ya.
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 07, 2003
    that was a cool story!!!

    what are the pairings... you didn't put them...

    please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Mahayana on December 07, 2003
    Sounds good so far. ^_~ I love the opening sentence though, it's very poetic. "A sigh left slightly parted lips" is just beautiful.
    One thing about your writing though, the dialogue doesn't match the time period. I don't think they would be using phrases like "don't have a camel" [as amusing as it is ^_~] in their speach. Especially the Pharaoh. I really can't see him using 'man'.
    But otherwise your writing is good. ^_~ Keep going~ I can't wait to see more of this story.
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