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Reviews for Unholy Trinity

By : YumeNoDchan
  • From ANON - AJAngelique on December 10, 2003
    *HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE* You are SO evil! I like you! You're my special friend! *locks author in a collar and skips away with author on back*
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  • From ANON - Nomalaz on December 10, 2003
    ::ROFLMAO:: Oh my God! That was too funny!! I haven't been to confession in about ten years. Maybe I should go again and have my "penance" too. A few years ago, there was a couple in New York who had sex in a confessional and it was broadcasted over the radio! I am not lying! I think it was St. Peter's Cathedral.
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  • From ANON - Momma Cat on December 10, 2003
    Other then the fact that this was totally off the wall and not possible, it was good. Nobody ever did a church sex story before. You mean they walked down the streets naked? Where was I when they did that?!
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  • From ANON - Abvby Maxwell on December 10, 2003
    Just a little creative critizim. i did like it, really, and hte idea was SUBPURB! but confessionals aren't really that big. at least none that I've ever seen (yes i'm catholic but i don't got to church or nothing, i'm no Jesus freak)
    the spelling was fine as far as i could see (but i can't spell worth crap) but you didn't need to use names so much. it's less....odd to read if you don't use the names so much. but good none the less. guess you figred it be less confuseing eh? well that's the way the cookie crumbles i guess.
    really good, it is. i liked it.
    Abby
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  • From ANON - LeafZelindor on December 10, 2003
    Meow! i thought it was really funny! ^-^ very cute and almost one of my fav threesomes (i prefer yami over yugi...but i ca eit either XD) so it's all good in my book ^_^ ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - Timma on December 10, 2003
    BRILLANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *ROLMAO* GOD THIS PWP IS BRILLANT!!!!!!!!!!!! OHHHH THE HUMILATION!!! OHHHH THE "*BEEP* U" EXPRESSION FROM JOEY AND ESPECIALLY SETO TO THE CROWD! God I laughed soo hard. Your one of the brave to use a fic background of the one last place to have a fic about three sexy hot guys *BEEP* each other in a CHURCH of all places!! GOD I LOVE YA!! hmmm do you have any more crazy ideas of public places our Yugioh c boys can *BEEP*??? If so, please please share and continue! This is fun! Thanks for you fic. It made my day.
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  • From ANON - Neko Jounouchi AKA Jams on December 10, 2003
    Jams: ::can't stop laughing:: XD
    Chibi Yugi Plushie: Look mommy!! It's Blink 182!!!
    Neko Jounouchi: ::falls over:: XD
    Jams: ::laughs harder::
    Seto Plushie: O.o????
    Jams: Oh my god this was great!! XD
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  • From ANON - Ykarzel on December 09, 2003
    *snicker* Sinfully good *wink* Something about doing it somewhere so WRONG is such a turn on...
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  • From ANON - Naye on December 09, 2003
    LOL! My Ra! That was so great! I loved the priest's line with the alter boys and just imagining those three naked...my, my, my...
    Please write another one soon!

    Ja!
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  • From ANON - JD on December 09, 2003
    That was the most unlikely plot I've ever read. You've never been in a confessional have you? Three people in one would never happen.
    Story made no sense even for a PWP. Everyone OOC. Sloppy work.
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  • From ANON - Lancer Monna on December 09, 2003
    Hell Yeah!!! That is just the thing to make my day and I loved the part about the priest and his reaction to the guys. It's priceless. >_< I canwaitwait for more chapters if you continue it. Also sorry that I wasn't able to review your other stories in such a long time girlie, I've been trying to work on my other fics so don't think that I haven't been reading them. they're great as usual. Also if you need a beta reader for funny fics like this then by all means e-mail me. I'm listed under the athor directory. I don't mind helping out.

    Later.
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