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Reviews for Yugi In Bakaland

By : Dchan
  • From ANON - Kris on December 14, 2003
    For another thing, Acidflower, this is a public forum. You're going to get good reviews and bad. Besides, I didn't say that your story was really bad, I just saidt itt it'd be good MST material. Not all fics that are MSTed are as bad as this one.
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  • From ANON - Kris on December 14, 2003
    OK, I've got a few things to say:

    1) If you have something to say to me, feel free to e-mail, that's why I put it in there. I very rarely read reviews, I just did this time because I was curious to see if anyone commented on my review.

    2) I put it in the review because I'm unfamiliar with AFF and didn't realize I could get the author's e-mail.

    3) I didn't know that Acidflower wasn't English speaking. (Yes, I should have taken into consideration that she might not be, but I didn't)

    4) Yes, Yugi in Hentailand, is much, much worse then Cross Wire.

    5) I don't see MSTs as insults, I see them as having fun. I haven't been MSTed yet, but I've tried to get someone to do it.

    6) I am not an English major, I'm an English speaker and I'm not the best at spelling or grammer either.

    7) I think Acidflower's fics (from what I've read) have good storylines, but the characterization is off.

    8) I can't think of anything else, but if you find anything else I need to address, feel free to e-mail.
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  • From YamiRynEnjeru on December 14, 2003
    *falls over laughing* Gods! I luv reading anything you MST!! It's hilarious!! *grins* Also helps me realize all the horrid spelling/grammatical errors I do ^_^;;;; (which are many!! *dies*)
    I know it's mean to enjoy such cruel humor, but I seriously can't stop laughing when it comes to reading your comments. Sometimes I have to reread the author's sentence before understanding your 'suggestions' (shows you how terrible I am at English *sniffles*) but I then find myself laughing even more when I *finally* figure it out ^_^ taking notes in the process to keep myself from making some of those same mistakes ^_^;;;
    Ok! Well, once again great job/humor and I hope you don't get too many headaches from reading those fics. *grins and waves*
    ~YamiRynEnjeru
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  • From on December 13, 2003
    Thank you ever so much hon for not MSTing Acid Flower I thank you for helping her out as well that means so very much to her as well as me. I am so sorry for not revieing soo sooner hon I hope you can for give me. I really do not know how eles to thank you D-chan. I am so very greatful hon thank you once again Luv Ya ^__^
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  • From ANON - Zizi on December 13, 2003
    Thank you Dchan for not going with the request on Acidflower. She's just to gifted to be mst.

    Zizi
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  • From ANON - Needle on December 13, 2003
    I feel your frustration from here, and I'm not even an English major! I read this fic about a week ago and more or less expected a MSTing of it, because it was written so...poorly. There is no other word to describe it-I have looked. I'm glad that someone else noticed the author's pissiness as far as criticism goes-gods forbid she EVER gets a REAL flame...people that sensitive should never write fanfics.


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  • From ANON - Timma on December 13, 2003
    Kris

    Please be very careful about who you should say their fic needs to be MST. Yes, Acidflower I can tell does put alot of time and effort for her fics. Just compare the "Yugi in Wonderland" to Acidflower's other fics. HELL, I can't even stomach or even read through "Yugi in Wonderland". The author doesn't take constructive critism, her fic is very badly organized, its obvious she doesn't take the time to look through her fic and correct the mistakes, or ask for a beta-reader. Acidflower's fics may have few mistakes true, however she does take critism well which I can tell she has (or still is) greatly improveing, her story ideas are very creative and fits well into the NC-17 catagory. I can tell she does talot lot of time and effort to look through her fics that are in English before posting them. That has to be respected. Also, you must realize even if you and others are English native, even myself, English is a very hard language. Please be more respectful to some authors that has put alot of effort in their fics. If you need to make a request for a MST, then please, e-mail the author instead. I would kindly suggest you not make request like this again over the review page for it to be public. Its very rude and insulting. Make your requests private with a author. But, D-chan has already answered you. But, take this advise for the near future please.

    D-chan: Thank you so much for respecting Acidflower's work and for volunteering to beta read her work. You have my respect. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Dchan on December 13, 2003
    I have no intention of MSTing Crosswire. I take requests for this sort of thing only if I have considered doing the fic myself. I take fic requests, not MST requests. And ACIDFLOWER, if you ever need a beta or anything, I'd be happy to beta your stuff [In non-MST format, of course] You realize your grammar needs work, can accept constructive criticism, and are actually making an effort to improve. That, I can respect.
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  • From on December 13, 2003
    Fuck you Kris! Please don't mst Acidflower it's not right to her.



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  • From ANON - princessoflightanddarkness on December 13, 2003
    OMG HOW COULD YOU DO THIS OMG ACID FLOWER IS A GREAT WRITER AND THEN YOU GO AND MAKE FUN OF HER DAMN YOU I HOPE YOU ARCKINCKING HAPPY YES I AM A WRITER AS WELL SO ARE YOU GOING TO PUT ME DOWN AS WELL :( I don't care what you do to me I am still writing weather you LIKE IT OR NOT OMG HOW THE FUCK COULD YOU KRIS HONESTLY THAT IS LOW MST HURTS PEOPLE BUT YOU DON'T SEEM TO UNDERSTAND THAT I may get flamed but I DON'T CARE AT ALL THIS IS SO LOW
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  • From ANON - Samptra Mistress of the Night on December 13, 2003
    Msts are all fun when it comes to bad fics and bad writers (like this one) but to do a mst on acidflower is just fucking disgusting.

    She’s great writer, sure her grammar is off and she does make many mistakes I hope your fucking happy Kris.

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  • From ANON - Kris on December 13, 2003
    Hm, two reviews in one day. I think that's a record for me. Anyway, just had to say that I you your MSTs. I haven't laughed like this in a long time. Oh, if you take requests, can you do Cross Wire by ACIDFLOWER? I would, but I don't have time right now. And I'm not very good at writing humor.

    Hope you write more, Kris
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  • From on December 13, 2003
    Oh my God... I almost died from laughing. I actualtarttarted to cry *wipes a tear away* You are so funny.
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  • From ANON - b¨§ — on December 13, 2003
    I swear, i almost died laughing. Fics like the one you're editing drive me absolutely insane. I usually can't even read them all the way through. Keep up the good work, because while I'm sure the original author does not especially appreciate your critique, just about everyone else does. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Shakster on December 13, 2003
    LOL.... I honestly have never reviewed an MST before but I was laughing hysterically by the end of this. Now I want to go read your other MSTs. Hehehe.... This was great. ^_^
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