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Reviews for Yugi In Bakaland

By : Dchan
  • From ANON - Timma on December 12, 2003
    Like the last chapter you wrote, this one I've laughed so hard. HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! The moment I read the cast of "Yugi in Wonderland" of the 2nd chr, Ir, I just clicked back to save my sa. T. The only way to keep my sanity is to read your "Yugi in Bakaland". God, even when I just wake up from where I am and bit groggy, this fic still makes me laugh hard. And your right! What beta-reader??!! Its just as bad as the first and does it mean that only the first chapter is "beta-read" (*cough* BULLSHIT!), and the 2nd chapter was not even bothered to be corrected? Thats just plain sad.
    Also, just to point out, in my belief since the 1st chapter, all the c's are way, WAY OOC. I've seen Aiko in Utena, and definatly he is not the type to scream "OOHHH COOKIE" an" and among with bad table manners. Aiko is more protrayed as senister and calculating. It even blew me away with how bad Heero and Duo are OOC. BTW, thanks for the OOC alert!
    Plus, god I want to scream at "Princess" to stop with the drooling moments, author appearences, and ESPECIALLY corny puns and jokes!!
    Princess: "Well I'm just pointing out that the drool moments are the 'girls' drooling moments"
    Timma dressed up as SNL Churdy wdy with a fake smile: "Well isn't that special."
    *LOL*You D-chan my friend are close enough (or even closer) to be the mix of Jet Black from the Daily Show and Church Lady bashing BAD fics!
    I like your other fic too you did of "King of Thieve's WHAT??" (or "Bakura's WHAT?"). Keep up with the Fic Bashing! Your like a fa and and favorite (if now then even more famous and favorite) author Adu Adultfanfiction.net. Believe me I'm not just saying that.
    Oh yeah, thanks! As soon as my friend and I are finished with the fic, we will send it to you so you can see and judge.
    Later!
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  • From ANON - Samptra Mistress of the Night on December 11, 2003
    I don't really review much people but I had to review this, OMG I ca sto stop the tears from my laughter.

    Great Mst

    Samptra Mistress of the Night
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  • From ANON - Dchan on December 11, 2003
    Sure! I'd be glad to read your fic. And thanks for your review. ^_^ I went and read some of her other stuff...I am an inch away from an MST spree.
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  • From ANON - Timma on December 11, 2003
    I LOVE YOU!! HAHAHAAHHAHA!!!!! MY SIDES!!! HAHAHAHA MY CHEST HAHHHAHHAHAHAAH!! OWOWHAHAHHAHA!!!! ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ......*wipes away tears* hehehe.. I'm sorry I'm sorry I can not help myself here! You are like my true hero D-chan! Thank you sooooo much for your help in support! I want to say, yes, obivious Miss Pretty Pretty Little Pain in the Ass "Princess" still doesn't understand my good intentions to help her and not tell her how to write her fic (god forbid!!!) Anyways, yes everything you and Jade said, I couldn't have put it better myself! I was just being nice to her, but you know what my friend....like you....*BEEP* IT! *BEEP* the niceness!

    First time little Princess insults me in public when I was trying to be nice, "royally" pisted me off! But, you my new best friend.....have really made my day and calmed down my urge to kill mood. ^_^. Thank you! I can work my fanfic in peace now with my sister (best friend).

    Princess.....whats her face---> "Poor Little Yugi"
    *does the impression of Jet Black from the Daily Show* "FINALLY!!! WE AGREE ON SOMETHING!!"

    Once again D-chan, I can not express more thanks then I already have. THANK YOU!!!

    p.s. Would you mind if I e-mail you the fanfic we're working on to see what you think in your opinion? We would take ANY critism, good or bad. Anything to improve the fic so readers may enjoy the fic. More than "lossing their cookies" *grins wickedly and chuckling*

    Later
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  • From ANON - REM on December 11, 2003
    You go girl. That was hysterical! So many times I read the word jams that pass for stories on this archive
    and then see a five star rating on something that should be fireplace tinder. To see your MST of this story, well it redeems my faith
    that there are folks out there that do have brains and know rubbish when they see it.
    Loved your treatment of that fic! Sharp, to the point and I'm still giggling.

    REM


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  • From ANON - Cookie on December 11, 2003
    Ah... if only there were more MSTs of bad lemons out there. Although the sheer number would probably boggle the mind. Keep on mocking!
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  • From ANON - Heather MacCloud on December 11, 2003
    GO D-chan! This MST rocks! Just like the others!!
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  • From ANON - PD on December 11, 2003
    OMFG CLAPS YEAH! I know what story that was from claps some more!
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