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Reviews for An Author's Downfall

By : Dchan
  • From Iyasu on October 08, 2006
    I didn't know that Kuribohs said "Reak" when they talked. Hell, it surprised me that they didn't look at the Kuriboh and yell, "What the hell is that!?" *shakes head* I'm sorry that you subjected yourself to reading such crap in order to make an MST of it. You should be paid for doing this, since it should be considered cruel and unusual punishment.
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  • From ANON - bakurasgirl on December 21, 2003
    YOU RULE, DCHAN! MST's are like fiction...all in good fun! If the authoress actually looked over her stuff before she posted, she wouldn't have had her fic chewed up and discarded. GO YOU!
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  • From ANON - Ykarzel on December 13, 2003
    i just read your reviews, and everybody is ragging on you for doing this. FUCK THEM. Somebody has to say it. BADLY. I respect you for being the one to do it.
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  • From ANON - Ykarzel on December 13, 2003
    *hug* thank you god. NOTHING on this site is any good anymore! It's awful!!! people who can't write, SHOULDN'T.
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on December 13, 2003
    Dchan I never said you mst me, but someone requested it for crosswire. I know a lot of my grammar is off, and flames never bug me. but mst is picking a it alittle to much. To me I can't get a chance taking but someone else msting that fic to me it was emotionally deep, dealing with disturbing realism issues lol in it like most of my dark fics. That’s all. Now if it was roommates that be different that fic was just fun.

    i'm happy you never mst me
    Jenn
    acidflower

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  • From ANON - Dchan on December 13, 2003
    Why did you do this? MSTs are all in good fun usually. You seem to have simply pointed out every spelling and grammar mistake she made.
    [It's the fact that there are so MANY that I take issue with.]
    You think you're perfect?
    [No, just a bitch.]
    We all make mistakes.
    [But so many in the same piece of writing?]
    A good portion of fanfiction readers don't care about grammar and spelling because it can easily be ignored.
    [Yes, but I am of the portion who does. Granted, I am extremely anal retentive and am tapdancing the line of abusive in this particulat MST, but oh well. You can flame/MST my fic when I get it out of edit and onto the site.]

    I hope your proud of yourself. You probably spent a while working on this
    [Why? This was basically for my own amusement. I feel rather neutral about the whole thing.
    Actually, it took a surprisingly small amount of time.]
    and now you post it to a website to show off how much of an asshole you are.
    [Like you said, nobody's perfect.]

    I must add...

    Whildo tdo think you were wrong in this case, I must admit I agree with your opinions on Yugi in Hentailand. Meaning the author's over-reacting to advice that could better her fic. I just hope you'll think about the feelings of the authors before doing your MSTs[If [If I thought about that, I wouldn't do MSTs at all.]

    I was wrong to be so ready to call you an asshole for this MST and I apologize for that.
    [No offense taken. ryonryone is entitled to their opinion here.]
    I tend to get protective over authors that are just starting out.
    [Understandable. I just have no patience.]

    I do wish you would offer advice in reviews though, rather then drawing so much attention to the bad points of a fic.
    [I've been rather disillusioned with the whole CC thing on this site for a while now. The only people who seem to be able to take constructive criticism are those who are already extremely good writers. Everyone else seems to take a review that goes "This is pretty good, but...." as a personal attack. Gods forbid anyone tell them they did something wrong.]
    To make fun of someone for writing a story you didn't enjoy is wrong.
    [Never said I didn't enjoy it. If all the errors got fixed and the OC wasn't so Mary Sue-ish, it might actually be a good little fic. As it stands, however....]
    If you don't like it, don't read it.
    [Well, I couldn't know that I was going to have such a negative reaction before I read it. I had to read it at least once.]
    If you think it can be improved, give the writer advice.
    [Again, I'm just sick of trying that. The only ppl who take advice graciously seem to be those who don't really have that much wrong w/ their fics in the first place.]

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  • From ANON - AmberEyes on December 13, 2003
    I must add...

    While I do think you were wrong in this case, I must admit I agree with your opinions on Yugi in Hentailand. Meaning the author's over-reacting to advice that could better her fic. I just hope you'll think about the feelings of the authors before doing your MSTs.

    I was wrong to be so ready to call you an asshole for this MST and I apologize for that. I tend to get protective over authors that are just starting out.

    I do wish you would offer advice in reviews though, rather then drawing so much attention to the bad points of a fic. To make fun of someone for writing a story you didn't enjoy is wrong you you don't like it, don't read it. If you think it can be improved, give the writer advice.
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  • From ANON - AmberEyes on December 13, 2003
    Why did you do this? MSTs are all in good fun usually. You seem to have simply pointed out every spelling and grammar mistake she made. You think you're perfect? We all make mistakes. A good portion of fanfiction readers don't care about grammar and spelling because it can easily be ignored.

    I hope your proud of yourself. You probably spent a while working on this and now you post it to a website to show off how much of an asshole you are.
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  • From ANON - Kris on December 13, 2003
    *snickers* I love reading MSTs. That fic certainly deserved it. Most of the mistakes were simple language arts mistakes that shouldn't have happened. *shakes head* Anyway, I really liked it. It certainly made my day. I needed a good laugh. I've still got a week left of finals.
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  • From on December 13, 2003
    WHAHAHHA OMGF GREAT!!! *rolls on floor*

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  • From Dchan on December 13, 2003
    Dchan your a jerk
    [Last I checked, I did not own 'a jerk.' I believe you mean YOU'RE. You=you=you're.]
    I don't see you writing on here!
    [I'm a full time college student, and classes have JUST ended. I haven't had the time TO write anything other than MSTs, because writing those is simple, easy stress relief.]
    You just enjoy putting people down don't ya
    [Yup! ^_^ George Carlin and Chris Rock get paid quite well for doing shit like this.
    And you should add a question mark to that last sentence, hon.]
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  • From Dchan on December 13, 2003
    I don't have anyone that can check the fics over
    [That's why you post and request a beta, or type your fics into MS Word first. The spelling/grammar checker will catch about 80% of the errors.]
    Couldn't you be a little nicer of an editor?
    [I COULD be, but I don't want to. Besides, I'm not acting as an editor. If I was editing, I would just take the fic and point out errors objectively. I only do that if someone asks me to. What I am doing is taking a fic that was posted without being proofread and pointing out err errors for all to see in a very caustic manner.]
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  • From Bakurah on December 13, 2003
    Dchan your a jerk
    I don't see you writing on here! You just enjoy putting people down don't ya
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  • From ANON - Setolover on December 13, 2003
    Hey Bakurah! If you need someone to correct your spelling and stuff, I will do it, though it is funny to read Dchan's MST's.
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  • From Bakurah on December 13, 2003
    I don't have anyone that can check the fics over
    Couldn't you be a little nicer of an editor?


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