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Reviews for Golden Opal

By : citricacid2001
  • From YamiKuro on April 06, 2009
    I LOVED IT! ^_^

    I thinkk you should bring Marik in definetly, but thats just cause i love the rat bastard XDD

    Loved it, looking very forward to more,
    Kuro
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  • From ANON - Elle-Fate2x1 on June 06, 2004
    that was great!! Please update again sooN! I can't wait until the next chapter!! Update soon please!!
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  • From ANON - Sazza on February 07, 2004
    *goes blind* @_-

    I mean that in a good way! XD;; The l was was LUUURVELY! >3 Ryou smut is good smut @_@

    And now I wish to see more! yeesssshh...@_@


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  • From ANON - Moose on January 14, 2004
    I'm loving this story so far. The lemon wasn't as long as I would have liked it to be, but the promise of more lemons makes up for that. ^_^ It was a good lemon, though, so keep up with the story! I wanna finish this one. :D

    -Moose
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  • From ANON - spiderweb on January 14, 2004
    Alright...I'm melting. That was so damn sexy and sweet...continue soon! Ryou andura ura are perfect. Then...Malik will come in, won't he? Even MORE PERFECT.
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  • From ANON - Uncoordinated Sanctuary on January 13, 2004
    This story is awesome, but I keep coming back to see if you updated, more than I could count - and I can count for a long, long time...

    Please, can you update soon - like, really soon! PLEASE. I shall be waiting! ^__^

    Please, don't be cruel and make us all wait for a month or two! Unless, you already have... I didn't check the date - :P

    Anyway, I wanna see some action! *hint, hint* *Cough* Lemon! *Cough* And make sure Bakura keeps in character, and Ryou too! I loved the way you portrayed them both! ^__^

    Until next chapter - which better be soon! - see ya! :D
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  • From ANON - Britt on December 23, 2003
    Cool fic, plz update as soon as you can!
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  • From Ravenx on December 20, 2003
    Please hurry with the next chapter!!! This is a really good story. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Sazza on December 19, 2003
    Wah! I like! Poor Ryou @_@ You'll write more soon right? XD
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  • From ANON - Aurora of the Moon on December 18, 2003
    Hiii nice storyry ^^ continue soon plzzzz????
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  • From ANON - Moose on December 17, 2003
    Great story so! Up! Update soon, I'm in the mood for a good wholesome lemon. ^.-
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  • From ANON - Elle-Fate2x1 on December 15, 2003
    That's really good!! Pleaseeeeeeeeeee update again soon!! I can't wait to see what's goign to happen!!
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  • From ANON - rayemars on December 13, 2003
    This looks interesting, so I hope you'll be continuing soon.

    You asked for feedback, so I noticedouplouple things:
    There's a lot of places where two words are stuck together. This is one example: "Bakura shook his head in disapproval as Ryousneezed in the cold night." aff.net's really crummy about uploading documents, so you might want to read over it once you post to make sure it hasn't eaten all your spaces and stuff.
    Also, I think it might read better if you put the notes about the gods and goddesses in the beginning or at the end. It kind of disrupts the flow when they're within the story.
    Last (Ancient Egypt Art History is resurfacing here *grin*) it was the Amun/Amon/Amen--however you wanna spell it--that was the symbol of the sun and combined with Ra in the New Kingdom. The Aten was the actual sun disk, and the only pharoah that deified it was Akhenaten. And he was the crazy one who tried to enstate monotheism.
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  • From ANON - AmberEyes on December 13, 2003
    Oh please write more. I'm loving this story. I'll be checking for updates. ^_^
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  • From ANON - memorietrail on December 13, 2003
    i do hope you write more i what to know what happens.so far i like it.
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