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Reviews for Obedience School

By : Mayonakani
  • From ANON - Seth on December 15, 2003
    Amazing... I have an idea, you should write a sequal where Jou finds a way to get Seto on bottom... You write an amazing lemon scene, so I know it would be great. Anyway, lvoed this very much!



    -Seth
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  • From ANON - SSJA on December 15, 2003
    *applause*
    Jonouchi with puppy ears... Funny...
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  • From ANON - SugarYuy on December 15, 2003
    I loved it! You gotta write a sequel! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on December 15, 2003
    Hey, this was pretty good, especially for your first lemon. I think you should write a seme Jou sequel.
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  • From ANON - Karre(too lazy to log in) on December 15, 2003
    I likes it! When you said bondage, I thought there was going to be some more whip and chains, but it was really cute. Jou seems to have a very nasy habit of gettng into bets he can't win. ::gryn:: Which is exactly how we like him! Keep on writing!
    ~Karre
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 15, 2003
    only a "slight bulge"? poor Jouno, short-changed again.
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  • From ANON - leafzelindor on December 15, 2003
    -tilts head- i'm not sure it's all there? unless it's deliberatly cut off...but i don't think it's deliberate? -tilts head- i was enjoying it though ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - KC on December 15, 2003
    my Yami's asleep so be happy. *laughs* go kaiba for making Jounouchi wear that costume!!! So, was that it or is there going 2 be more??? I mean, come on!!! We are just starting some good stuff here!!! You've just got 2 continue!!! Continue 2 update and don't wait 2 long for "us" to go and figure out, ok??? CONTINUE!!!
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  • From ANON - Jou-pup on December 15, 2003
    *was in the moment* *blink* Heh? *panic* Where's the rest!? O.o noooo! not fair! -_- just when things got good. You can't leave it here, so please add the next part of this.
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  • From on December 15, 2003
    You evil evil person how could you leave it there?! I LOVED IT! And... I want more... *sobs* MORE!
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  • From ANON - Seth on December 15, 2003
    It's piqued my curiosity... I hope to be hearing some more from you... I'm a little upset you left it right there though... Please continue soon!
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on December 15, 2003
    You can't leave it there what is wrong with you *growls*!!!!!
    (Please pay no attention to mt'st's very late and I'm cranky) MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!
    That's about it now Im going to sleep!(Hey it also rimed ^.^)
    LATER...
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