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Reviews for Obedience School

By : Mayonakani
  • From ANON - Iyasu on June 12, 2006
    It wasn't too bad, I liked it, it just had a lot of errors and seemed to be a tad rushed. If you spend more time editing out the errors, it would be a lot better. I'd love to see the sequel.
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  • From ANON - Johnnyjosh on October 05, 2005
    I enjoyed this a lot! Your first lemon? Great job! Looking forward to reading more from you.
    JJ
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  • From tarredglittered on February 04, 2004
    Nice job for a first lemon! And yes, you left the ending wide open for a seme!Jou sequel there, lol, so it's your own fault if people ask you for one! Like me! -bats eyelashes- Pwetty pwease?
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  • From V021 on December 20, 2003
    *fans self* For a first try, this was...WOO!
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  • From ANON - REVIEWER #34321 on December 19, 2003
    Not bad at all for a first time lemon.... : )

    Was this supposed to be a PWP? If not, then disregard what I have to say: You should of developed the plot a tad bit more. Like make Kaiba make Joey do something else BEFORE they had sex....

    Very nicely done.
    Keep on Writin'
    Reviewer #34321
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  • From ANON - YumeNoDchan on December 18, 2003
    W O O O H O O !!! *stands, claps and attempts to whistle* ENCORE! ENCORE! Me wuved it sooo much! and u finally posted! way to go!!! lol lookin foward to more! it ro!!! !!!
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  • From ANON - Neko Jounouchi AKA Jams on December 17, 2003
    Jams: I want a sequel!!!!
    Neko Jounouchi: Me too!!! Me too!!!!
    Seto Plushie: Of course you do perverts....
    Neko Jounouchi: I wanna use the whips and chains on him next time!!! XD
    Seto Plushie: Over my dead body!!!
    Neko Jounouchi: EEWW!!! What the hell do you think I am?!?! Only Bakura is THAT sick!!!
    Bakura Action Doll: Careful what you say, Pup, or you might witness it first handeko eko Jounouchi: O.O Uuuuuh.... Sequel please? ::hides behind Jams::
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  • From ANON - Aura Maxwell on December 16, 2003
    Aura: Hear ye, hear ye, the Honorable Lady Aura Maxwell will now give a review!
    Yami Usagi: -sweatdrop- Milady... what was that for?
    Aura: Just having fun. Anyways. Lookit Katie, uploading her first yaoi lemon to the internet, awww... Yes, yes, this was nice, it's good to see you continuing the mutt theme. As long as it's not pimp-Mokuba.
    Yami Usagi: ...That mental image alone will give me nightmares for the rest of my years...
    Aura: Get Kaito to comfort you. Anyways. Very good job with the lemon sequence! It was satisfactory. But somehow I have a feeling you just pieced together one of your RPs with your "friend" and put in different names. But that's okay! Cuz it was good. Yes yes.
    Yami Usagi: You are such a pervert, milady...
    Aura: Shaddap. Go screw your boyfriend, yaoi boy.
    Yami Usagi: ....
    A.
    Aura: And if you want to do the Seme Jou fic, go for it! I can guarentee you two readers!
    Yami Usagi: Two?!
    Aura: Yes, two. Who knows, you might get some ideas.
    Yami Usagi: ........
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  • From ANON - KC on December 16, 2003
    Now my Yami is asleep so be nice! Wow, that was some hot lemon at the ending!!! Nice going with the stories. Please continue 2 update your fanfics and i can't wait 2 see what happens next!!! Continue!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkQueen on December 16, 2003
    WOW, t-that was like WOW!!!!! OMG, i'm usually not this speechless...nope!
    GREAT job! Sequel, hmm...OF COURSE SEQUEL seme JOU, I cna taste...I mean See it now mmm...sequel!!!!!!!!!
    LATER...
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  • From ANON - leafzelindor on December 15, 2003
    yay for lemons! ^_^ you did a good job for a first time! -runs around- okay anywa.....oooooo possible sequal? -perks- ~Leaf~
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  • From ANON - HAPPY GO LUCKY! on December 15, 2003
    You may know who this is. my mind is innocent with dan. hehe. i loooooove the fic. gotta put more gotta put more! i will talk later. more more!
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 15, 2003
    oohhhhhhhh

    this was a greac!!!c!!!

    please write a seme jou sequel!!!!

    i loved it!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hitori Yokoi on December 15, 2003
    Go ahead and write the seme Jou sequel! I would like to read it! And if you need help, I am an expirienced Yaoi author, but I don't put stories on this site, but I do on FanFiction.net and MediaMiner.org! My name on FF.Net is overlyobsesedwithyugi if you would like to read my stories!
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  • From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on December 15, 2003
    Oh that was great and for your first hot damn!

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