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Reviews for Jouyouheki: The Series

By : Starchan
  • From ANON - KC on January 10, 2004
    Me: jou gave Kaiba a letter to read?
    Yami: duh! did u read the last sentence koi?
    Me: but i want to be sure though!
    ami:ami: you know, you could be dumb sometimes
    Me: HEY, I AM NOT DUMB!!!
    Yami: *snicker* yes you are *leaves room*
    Me: *sighed* anywayz, please continue 2 update!!! i can't wait for more!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE!!! *runs after Yami*
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  • From ANON - Naye on January 10, 2004
    This is a wonderful story so far! I can't wait fhe nhe next update!

    Ja!
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on January 07, 2004
    I like the letter concept. This is a good way of presenting the two POV's. I really liked Seto's letter, the straying off the point was good. We all tend to do that when dealing emotions that we are not sure how to handle. Will he get a chance to make up with the 'puppy' or will Seto have to be alone? Agian good job.
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  • From ANON - MOFAF1 on January 06, 2004
    it would be nice to see Joey be the dominant member in the relationship...maybe he should set the terms and make Seto toe the line iner ter to get him back...lol
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  • From ANON - anonymous on January 06, 2004
    Yay Kaiba finally came to his senses! I really think you should post your other story up too. It sounds really interesting.
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  • From ANON - A person (again) on January 05, 2004
    Yay! I'm glad you wrote this chapter already! Me gonna wait for the next chapter! Please put more lemon in it ^_~. Update ASAP!
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on January 05, 2004
    he loves jou!!!

    ya!

    !

    about your other story, i think you should post it, it sounds cool

    please update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Linda on January 03, 2004
    FINISH IT! YOU MUST! PLEASE FINISH IT ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on January 02, 2004
    oooookaaaaaaaaay. I always thought that Joey is stronger that this. I like the story. I is an intersting way to approach the characters. Joey needs to find his back bone though or Sto will end up destroying him. Relationships that are that one sided end up in someone being hurt badly.
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on January 02, 2004
    awww poor joujou

    mew

    i feel so sorry for him...

    please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - A person on January 02, 2004
    ^_^ wow, good story, please continue ASAP!
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  • From ANON - Wren on January 02, 2004
    Seto is such an evil bastard--I love him! I hope Jouyouheki gets him back and actually makes Seto fall for him. Then how's the others bitch?! ^_^
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  • From ANON - KC on January 02, 2004
    Me: *blinks* that was a surprised
    Yami: *yawns* what time is it?
    Me: *smirk* its 11:10 in the morning koi
    Yami: SHIT! THAT EARLY? I SLEPT LIKE ONE IN THE MORNING!
    Me: doesn't matter anyway, yesterday was our nite... *purrs*
    Yami: *smirk* yea, you were shouting and yelling so loud that the neighbors could hear you
    Me: *blushes* SHUT UP! AT LEAST WE DIDN'T WENT TO THE PARTY LAST NITE!
    Yami: *purrs* i know, but we could do it again koi
    Me: NO WAY! I'M TOO SORE RIGHT NOW!
    Yami: *laughs* ah, oh well, tomorrow perhaps! *leaves room*
    Me: *blushes* um, well, CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE, OK??? CONTINUE!!! *runs after Yami*
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  • From ANON - me on December 25, 2003
    OHHHHHHHH! this is good...so sad...poor jou...i hope seto turns nice later......think...happy ending!
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  • From ANON - alostblat˜§at on December 24, 2003
    i think i read and reviewed this before..

    but i love it

    hope you update soon!!!
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