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By : DeliaArc
  • From Fel5 on April 12, 2004
    This story was..a path of dark, twisted, alluring glory. If you decide to never write anything again, everyone will easily forgive you, after having read this masterpiece. I'm not one to usually cry at sad stories, but now..I got a lump in my throath, and it takes a lot to do that.
    You have my deepest respect and highest opinion for creating such a wonderful st and and I do hope, you will do so again. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - ME-Kiddie on February 12, 2004
    Okay! how sad is that *cries*
    Poor Seto Poor Jou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    ever heard of "happy endings?" and they lived happily ever after?

    anywayz, this was a good story!
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  • From ANON - YamiJou on January 02, 2004
    *sniffles* that was sad...poor jou...and poor kaiba too even though he was a jerk...
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  • From ANON - Shadow on January 01, 2004
    wow that was deep :sobs: incredible story !!
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  • From ANON - kschur32 on December 31, 2003
    What an ending! Very well done. Thank you for the s. ks.
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 31, 2003
    T_T

    wahhhhhhhhh

    so sad.... jou is such a sweet person.... if it were me.... *shudder*

    such a well written depressing fic......

    i need to go cry some more...

    T_T
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  • From ANON - akuchan on December 31, 2003
    This story was incredible. Congratulations on keeping the thread of Seto's darkness all the way through the story. It would have been so easy to have him capitulate in the end beg Joey for his forgiveness; or have Seto live and Joey die and he realize finally what he has lost or a thousand other scenarios along that line. I have no idea if you even considered something like that but the way you ended the story kept the integrity of the storyline all the way through. And though Seto didn't achieve his goal of Joey dying along with him, I think he would have been just as pleased with the Mutt pledging his ever dying love for Seto even after all that happened. I can picture him down in Hell sneering up at the blond's stupidity even after the way he was treated. One last thing I liked the way you had Seto develop some feelings for Joey (and I really think he did) but the darkness in his soul was too overpowering to allow him let those feelings to reablosblossom. Congratulations on this story, it has become one of my favourites, very dark and depressing but very well done.
    Akuchan
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  • From ANON - magget on December 31, 2003
    magnificent. utterly magnificent. hurry up with 'fallen', i am dying with anticipation!
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  • From ANON - araki on December 31, 2003
    *tears*

    NOOOOOOO WHY SETO!!?? WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE SO MEAN JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE NOT HAPPY!!! JOU HAS A GOOD LIFE, EVEN IF IT IS BAD, BE NICE FOR ONCE!!! ahem...okay...well...please update when possible, I shall be waiting
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  • From ANON - Kschur32 on December 31, 2003
    HARSH! This story has had me on the edge of my seat. I wish I could think of another word for this chapter, but Harsh is the word. While Seto and Joey are my favotite charaters and I hate to se them abused in any way. This story is good. The charaters and what they do are belivable with in the story. Is Seto really dead? Do we get to see how Joey reacts to the truth and then Seto's death? What will happen to Mokabu? I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on December 31, 2003
    I guess Kaiba won the last round of that dule. Damn that was depressing, but what happened to jou?

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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 31, 2003
    awwwww that was sooo sad

    i need to go cry some more

    *whimper*

    so so so sad!!!


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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on December 30, 2003
    YD: Noting like a little Seto being an ass to start the morning right!
    DD: You said it!
    YD: We love that you're updating so quickly.
    DD: Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Sapphire on December 30, 2003
    Hm, this story is really good! Seto is really fucked up, he needs some help! This fic seems to be playing out just like his dule with Yami did, he starts of at a truce, in the middle he could have one, but his ego and overconfidence tears him apart in the end. Lets just hope he "loses" this dule with jou in the end.
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  • From ANON - OIREGOIUYTRE on December 30, 2003
    AWWWWWWWW HOW SAD KEEP GOIN
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