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By : DeliaArc
  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 29, 2003
    ackkkkk

    i wanna go cry for poor jou!!!!!

    no no no kaiba can't do this to him!!!

    T__T

    mew


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  • From ANON - Ryanookami on December 29, 2003
    Damn.....
    This is without a doubt one of my favorite stories ever. There's an awful lot of mushy lovey-dovey stuff for Jou/Kaiba, I like that this one is starting of pretty vicious and underhanded. I alsjoy joy that Kaiba really would be the type to try and pull everyone down with him.
    I absolutely love it and can't wait for you to continue. I'm torn between wanting Kaiba to go through the whole messy plan and wanting Jou to wake up that damned icy heart! No matter which way you're leading, I'm following.
    My kudos to you!
    (Since I only just found this story and have no idea how quick you are with updates, I'll give you the standard reviewer's plea: Update soon!!! lol)
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  • From ANON - araki on December 29, 2003
    *pulls Seto's hair* YOU BIG MEANIE!! BE NICE TO JOU, HE'S MAH FAVORITE CHARACTER (and cute:O) YOU MIGHT BE CUTE AS HELL, BUT IF YOU HURT HIM!!

    update soon!!

    --Araki
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  • From ANON - loveswhore on December 29, 2003
    ur story's funny! i like joey and seto as a couple. please make them a coulpe! i so want them to be. is there going to be lemon? i need a seto/joey lemon.
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  • From ANON - Lothür on December 29, 2003
    Wow... this fic is really something. I really liked the way you put Kaiba and joey, I think you can make a lot with this story !! I mean... WOW !! I think is a very original idea !! but tell me.... will it has a happy ending?? I picture myself a lot of posibilities for the ending !! any oportuniti that you would give a clue?? yeah?¡? lol .
    OHH and take my congrats on your updates !! I hate to WAIT !! lol, i mean I know is not easy and all, but THANKS!!!
    see ya
    XOXO
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 28, 2003
    ack

    what'll happen to jou?!?!

    update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Dragondreamer Yami Dragon on December 28, 2003
    YD: OOOOO..Seto wants revenge!!
    DD: This story is really good.
    YD: And it's nice to see someone who can take suggestions as something OTHER than flames.
    DD: But...we have no suggestions for this story.
    YD: We're loving it the way it is.
    DD: Tho I personally think Seto should be shot for being such an ass to Mokuba.
    YD: Agreed.
    DD: And I'm loving two chapters at a time.
    YD: Keep up the good work, kiddo!
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  • From ANON - Seth on December 28, 2003
    This chapter and the one before, where you talk about Kaiba's own feelings and how it feto dto destroy your emotions and how you get a rush of pride when you should feel guilty and sad... That reminds me of how I used to be.. I think that's why I love this story so much (besides the fact it is so well written and fantastically well thought out) it really hits close to home with me. But I really look forward to reading more on this... Kaiba really does take the revenge thing pretty far, not that I blame him in his life the only thing one has is his pride and dignity and I know he kind of lost that when Jou hit him...

    Anyway Ie the the whole dueling scene at the party, too bad Kaiba got too greedy for his own good. And what you said at the end about how we hand out our own weaknesses and destruction... This is definitely true... I have nothing but compliments to offer you, since there were no flaws to speak of that I saw... So I hope you continue soon...
    "We are the cause of our own downfalls, and most of the time we are not aware of it."



    --Seth
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  • From ANON - Seth on December 28, 2003
    A terrific third installment to this story... Everything thus far is going so wonderfully -the characters are in check, the plot is engrossing, and the excitement within me is building... I hope the next chapter comes soon... btw, I am so glad somebody punched Kaiba... I love him and all, but he sure was being a bitch here... Anyway, nice chapter, can't wait for the next one.




    -Seth
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 28, 2003
    uh-oh

    who's gonna win!!!

    please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Animom on December 27, 2003
    Quite quite good. The setup's intriguing, and the interior monologues are very IC.

    Looking forward to the next chapters.
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  • From ANON - Seth on December 27, 2003
    Intense... This is one captivating story, you've written both chaps exceptionally well. The first paragraph had me hooked and reading, and now I just... Wow... Wonderful chapters indeed. I hope thou uou update soon.



    --Seth
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  • From ANON - alostblackcat on December 26, 2003
    hehehe

    the old elementary scool love hate rule:

    the more you act like you hate someone, the more you love them

    please update soon!!!!
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