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By : Mellybean

From ANON - Neko Jounouchi AKA Jams on January 11, 2004
Jams: Aww poor Lexi dun have no toys left.
Seto Plushie: ::thwacks Jams with a thesaurus::
Jams: X.x Ow!! Seto!! >
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From ANON - Split Persona on January 11, 2004
JC: lLease let this work...
Kathrine: Our compueter is a piece of shit. It keeps dying on us every time we try to review or do and search for something. So we thought we'd try the place that we don't use as often.
JC: Well, if this does work, let it be known that your story has just reached a new high. I actually thought their was no higher point that you coud reach. Truly magnificent.
Kathrin>: I>: In a way this chapter hits a little closer than some because our sister had our niece at the age fourteen. It's sad to see how young people are when they have kids and then how they have no way of taking care of themselves or their children. Besides my family our sister didn't have anyone that she could turn to at the time.
JC: The baby is blonde. Ooh, I bet he's a really adorable sight too. Well, all babies are adorable so that's a given. I wonder what color eyes he has. You didn't mention it or we overlooked it.
Kathrine: A little Joey! I always wanted one! Unfortunately I think ill ill be a 100 degrees day in Antarctica before anyone of my nieces or kids turn out naturally blonde. So no chibi-Joey...sighs.
JC: There's always adoption. *hint hint* I like Jacob. He seems so forlorn and withdrawn. Like a younger version of Joey when he was goig through the same situation. Joey... We're on a Joey kick today.
Kathrine: I wish you would torture Otogi some more. He doesn't get enough from too many places. And then after he's been inducted into your court by the rite of 'Fic-Angst/Torture', he can get together with Joey and Tristan.
JC: What if Jacob was adopted and he's actually related to Otogi in some way? Woulds it help him get out of his funk if he had someone else to take care of, to worry about? To him he worries about Joey, but the little koinu has Tristan there for him and that makes Otogi feels not needed. Maybe he needs someone else in his life that needs him and he knows needs him so that he won't feel so lost and lonely. It doesn't cure a broken heart but it does help the mend to begin.
Kathrine: Screw that, torture him as much as you want. I think him getting hurt will help Tristan and Joey realize how much they need him so all three of them can finally get it on together. Or maybe this psycho CCfFV group can get a hold of both Joey AND Otogi so then Tristan will get some sense drilled into him. He's being too damn stubborn. Okay, this is good so we can't wait to see what you pull out of your bag of twists next.
JC: Definitely something to look forward to.
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From ANON - Amanda on January 11, 2004
*spins happily* I always love seeing new chapters to your guys' fics. Poor Otogi! *huggles him* Though I must confess I love to see characters suffer, so I hope you have more angst in store for him. ^^;;; And Joey, too, of course, since he's my absolute favourite. Please update again soon!

*gives Lexi a wolf plushie*
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From ANON - Arial on January 11, 2004
Oh and what's going to happen with Otogi and the fact that he's in love with both Tristan and Joey.
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From ANON - Arial on January 11, 2004
Please please please please please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Terra on January 11, 2004
Excellent job!!! I read EVERYTHING you have posted in one night. Great plots and drama. Update soon and keep the great stories coming.
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From ANON - Sour on January 11, 2004
Excellent! A baby! You made my heart stop at the end of chapter three with that and I was thinking, "Uh-oh..." but it was 'only' a baby! :)

So, as for Lexi, I think she should have these nice Barbie matches. They are very nice toys which I enjoyed very much during my own youth.
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From ANON - Kschur32 on January 10, 2004
Oh the poor baby. And the poor mother. I'm glad that Seto gave in and agreed to keep the baby. Poor dice boy. I hate to see him so upset. Joey's first day a work...way to go Joey. CAn't wait for the next chapter. My toy for Lexie a white unicorn stick (like the stick horses), you squeeze one ear and it make a trotting sound and the othee ear it makes soft horse sound. It is a white head with a rainbow horn, and color ribbons. My 3 year old God-daughter loves hers.
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From ANON - belletiger on January 10, 2004
great chapter!
I hopw you writte the next chapter soon.
I wanna suggest the name for the baby boy.
How about...... Sam?
writte the next chapter soon
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From leah on January 10, 2004
*gives Lexi all my old barbie dolls, baby dolls and yu-gi-oh action figures* there you go sweetie! Lexi really reminds me of my own
daughter. even though she can't quite talk yet. she babbles though! any way, love the fic! so far it's getting pretty good! i loved friends and lovers and stronger theforefore. both were great! especially since it's so hao fio find the tristan/joey pairing. so many S/Js out there though. not that there's any thing wrong with that. please continue! and before i forget, can i give bakura a hug? pwetty pwetty pweeease?

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From ANON - Angel-Belle on January 10, 2004
Ok, well, I wouldn't have guessed that!! I'm glad it wasn't something gross in the box. LOL!
Toys...hmmm...is Lexi old enough to play with Barbie dolls? I used to LOVE Barbies...I could send her some nice Barbies to play with! Or how about a nice bouncy ball? or a play phone? ^_^
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From ANON - IYYashi on January 10, 2004
Yuji: A new baby?! That is so much fine! Make Lexi complain about wanting a baby sister!!
Yumi: A new Kaiba? They're just growing aren't they.
Yuji: Man, what's wrong with Otogi? He doesn't seem right.
Yumi: Hey Hikari she asked us to give Lexi toys don't you still have all your toys from childhood?
Yuji: Yeah but I don't touch them. I give them away. So ok give Lexi my china doll, some barbies (I hate them so have them all! Which isn't a lot) coloring books, and my bro collects beanie babies so give her those too
Yumi: You keep a lot
Yuji: My mom says I shouldn't make her keep so gave all my stuff back
Yumi: Wow. So I can't wait till you update! BYE!!
Yuji: UPDATE!!
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From ANON - ACIDFLOWER on January 10, 2004
Great fic I love it. You really got me loving Honda now.

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From ANON - KC on January 10, 2004
Me: *snicker* so, the Kaiba's have a new son?
Yami: hey, where's Mokuba?
Mokuba: *pops out of nowhere* HERE I AM!!! I WAS READING THE STORY IN THE OTHER COM.
Me: does your brother know that you had sex?
Mokuba: *shakes head* no, not yet. i don't want him to find out yet
Yami: why not? i mean is is your own brother
Mokuba: i'm just scared that his going to drive Roger out of the family
Yami: oh, but still, he loves you though
Mokuba: *sighed* i know, i'll tell him sooner
Me: YOU BETTER! OR ELSE I'LL HAVE TO GO AND TELL DRAGON TO PUT IT IN THE STORY!!!
Mokuba: *looks frightened* NO! YOU CAN'T LET HER DO THAT!!!
Me: *snicker* why not? Dragon is the author of this story and could put it in anytime
Mokuba: *looks at me and Yami* fine, have it your way *looks for dragon*
Yami: nice going koi *runs after Mokuba*
Me: what are you talking about koi? *sighed* PLEASE CONTINUE!!! ANOTHER BABY FOR THE FAMILY!!! ANYWAYZ, CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE!!! *runs after Yami & Mokuba*
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From ANON - bakurasgirl on January 10, 2004
Yup....the downfall of Seto Kaiba....a drooling, crying, vomiting little baby. *chuckles*

Aten: I dive you my Winged Dagon ub Bra Pushie! Iss my fay-fit.
Aria: I HATE MEANIE-MEN! Wike out subtitit teasher ae Mee Meanie Wady who tooked me away fum
my mommy and daddy! I hate meanie peetles so mush! I can giff you my Change of Heart Pushie.
I juss no wet go of my M&M's pushie! DAT'S MINE! MINE MINE MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!
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